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@Daeus I am, but it’s going to be pretty scattered and interrupted, so I don’t think I can race you tonight. Best of luck though.
@kate-flournoy Alright. I’ll enjoy my cheesy victory.
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Do you hear that @Daeus? That’s my very evilest of evil laughs.
@kate-flournoy Sorry, I’m buried in so much cheese I can hardly hear.
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@Daeus Humph.
@kate-flournoy *Evilest of evil laughs* *eats cheese*
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Urg, well, I edited 916, but I gotta take a break. Be back soon.
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Never mind, I don’t actually. *Another diabolical laugh*
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@Daeus Good job! I wrote 702 words.
@kate-flournoy Edited 1,863. Working on TATHOF now. Not sure why I blew through it so fast, but I was mainly doing speeches which didn’t need much fixing except for interruptions to show reactions and strengthen emotion.
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@Daeus wow, impressive. I’ll read it for you again when you’re done.
Btw, which chapter do you think was the worst?
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@kate-flournoy Really? *Supper duper duper diabolical laugh* *eats more cheese* I think I’ll take you up on that.
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@Daeus ha! You didn’t think I wasn’t going to see this through!? 😉
Hm, worst chapter? Uh… probably eight. Nothing particularly wrong with it, it just wasn’t as full or unique as the others. Except the ending, which is perfect.
Oh, and also the ending of chapter ten was a bit rushed. I forgot to mention that. It wasn’t as coherent— all happened so quickly I had to reread it to make sure I got it all.
Hmm, eight. *Glares at eight diabolically. Starts shooting cheeseballs at it.* Kate, I’ve simply got too much cheese. *fatalistic sigh*
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