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June 6, 2016 at 8:04 pm #13805
@Daeus I am, but it’s going to be pretty scattered and interrupted, so I don’t think I can race you tonight. Best of luck though.
June 6, 2016 at 8:09 pm #13806@kate-flournoy Alright. I’ll enjoy my cheesy victory.
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June 6, 2016 at 8:11 pm #13807Do you hear that @Daeus? That’s my very evilest of evil laughs.
June 6, 2016 at 8:13 pm #13808@kate-flournoy Sorry, I’m buried in so much cheese I can hardly hear.
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June 6, 2016 at 8:14 pm #13809@Daeus Humph.
June 6, 2016 at 8:21 pm #13810@kate-flournoy *Evilest of evil laughs* *eats cheese*
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June 6, 2016 at 8:24 pm #13811Urg, well, I edited 916, but I gotta take a break. Be back soon.
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June 6, 2016 at 8:25 pm #13812Never mind, I don’t actually. *Another diabolical laugh*
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June 6, 2016 at 8:32 pm #13813Anonymous
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@Daeus Good job! I wrote 702 words.
June 6, 2016 at 9:02 pm #13814@kate-flournoy Edited 1,863. Working on TATHOF now. Not sure why I blew through it so fast, but I was mainly doing speeches which didn’t need much fixing except for interruptions to show reactions and strengthen emotion.
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June 6, 2016 at 9:04 pm #13815@Daeus wow, impressive. I’ll read it for you again when you’re done.
June 6, 2016 at 9:04 pm #13816Btw, which chapter do you think was the worst?
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June 6, 2016 at 9:07 pm #13817@kate-flournoy Really? *Supper duper duper diabolical laugh* *eats more cheese* I think I’ll take you up on that.
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June 6, 2016 at 9:11 pm #13818@Daeus ha! You didn’t think I wasn’t going to see this through!? 😉
Hm, worst chapter? Uh… probably eight. Nothing particularly wrong with it, it just wasn’t as full or unique as the others. Except the ending, which is perfect.
Oh, and also the ending of chapter ten was a bit rushed. I forgot to mention that. It wasn’t as coherent— all happened so quickly I had to reread it to make sure I got it all.June 6, 2016 at 9:16 pm #13819Hmm, eight. *Glares at eight diabolically. Starts shooting cheeseballs at it.* Kate, I’ve simply got too much cheese. *fatalistic sigh*
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