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    SeekJustice
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      @salome01w4g I’m listening to The World will know from the Newsies. Highly motivational for editing

      INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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      Hannah
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        @seekjustice confetti and glitter 😀 I’ll be back in a few minutes….

        ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

        #47025
        Catwing
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          @seekjustice under protective parents in books are probably not terrible… But it was messing up my allegory. Basically the parents let them go to a VR game that was basically Junior class of a group that at least some of the parents would know are the bad guys (the group was allegory for the fallen angels and other lost people). this was really bad when I remembered (not one, not two, but) three of these kids are that world’s equal of Christians. *gulp* Rewrite. Fix allegory. *nervous laughter*

          @salome01w4g
          welcome.

          IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

          #47030
          Hannah
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            thank thee @catwing

            ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

            #47033
            SeekJustice
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              @catwing I see. So basically the parents were letting the children join a group of fallen angels? That is a bit problematic.

              INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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              Hannah
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                @seekjustice lol 🙂 I’m listening to Piano guys Thousand years cover *goes and cries when learns it was written for Twilight….*

                ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

                #47037
                Catwing
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                  @seekjustice basically… *keeps quiet so she doesn’t spoil anything*

                  @salome01w4g
                  Ouch. Once on Pandora I was listening to film scores…
                  I wonder what this is from? *looks at phone. It is Red Riding Hood* Oh, cool a fairy tale rewrite I don’t know about! *notices that the red cloak fades into blood. Probably a horror film* Skip! Skip! Skip! *sighes when it skips* Seriously?

                  IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                  #47039
                  Hannah
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                    @catwing that is sad….. just plain sad…. I don’t understand pples obsession of twilight… sigh the dude is VAMPIRE!!! ugh

                    ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

                    #47040
                    Hannah
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                      @catwing @seekjustice okay my parents are headed to bed which means I have to shut down my computer…. sighs I have so many plot twister ideas…. oh well tomorrows a new day! Farewell!

                      ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

                      #47042
                      SeekJustice
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                        @salome01w4g urgh! Twilight! *shudders violently*. A vampire and I think the other bloke is a werewolf? What is attractive about that? *continues to mumble incoherently* farewell, friend!

                        INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                        #47043
                        SeekJustice
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                          @catwing anything to do with little red riding hood has always creeped me out. I would hate to even think of a horror version of it! Film scores tend to be really good though. Me likes listening to How to train your dragon and Lord of the rings. Also the Flash’s soundtrack

                          INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                          #47044
                          Catwing
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                            @salome01w4g All I know about Twilight is there are vampires. And it’s a romance. I don’t read horrors or romances (If the romance is a subplot I’m fine. *shrugs*). It is also popular. A lot of popular stuff is bad. So… If it is popular, I be careful.
                            *sighs with you* Yep. Leave it to them to fall for the guy who will probably suck their blood and give them those diseases that livestock get from bats. Oh, I and did I mention he will probably kill you too? Unless he’s evil and smart and keeps you prison with other things, so that he always has blood… *belch* Gross.
                            Bye. Dream of holding kittens with wings!

                            IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                            #47045
                            Catwing
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                              @seekjustice I like fairy tale rewrites. But yes red riding hood is weird. (Besides the… I want to kill this wolf. I will perform surgery on him and put rocks inside him without killing him. so when he wakes up he will die.)
                              When I listen to HTTYD he brother begs me to let him listen too. He loves it.

                              IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                              #47046
                              Catwing
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                                We should probably talk about something happier. @seekjustice Like editing!
                                It isn’t really that bad.
                                You are reading! But fixing the story.

                                IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                                #47047
                                Catwing
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                                  @seekjustice the song you made me think of earlier was ‘FUN! FUN! FUN!’ By the way.

                                  IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

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