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    SeekJustice
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      @catwing *coughs and pulls feathers out of hair* which one? In either case, not really anywhere!

      INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

      #44492
      Catwing
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        *wrinkles nose* @seekjustice Why not? You wanted to finish your super hero book that you’re having beta-read next month. Does it have a name? I don’t think you told me.

        IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

        #44493
        SeekJustice
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          @Catwing it’s working name is Black and White, but only because I am useless at titling books. It’s actually finished, I just wanted to fix up the first three chapters, which I thought needed some work before you and the other guys looked it over. I’m kind of stuck though as to how I rewrite those chapters.

          INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

          #44494
          Catwing
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            @seekjustice *nods* That can be tough. Have you ask some one you know for some advice or is your book more secretive? That helped me.

            IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

            #44495
            SeekJustice
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              @catwing no, I haven’t asked any one for advice yet. I’m not super secretive about my book. basically, I had the main character becoming deaf in an accident in the first chapter, however, I decided that I wanted him to be deaf before the opening of the book. unfortunately, I have no idea how to open now.

              INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

              #44496
              Catwing
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                @seekjustice How about something that say he’s deaf?
                He could be watching a movie. He can’t hear it so he has to lip-read. And when they turn away he has to guess what they are saying.
                Sign-language or lip reading class.
                Looking for a service dog.
                Someone is talking, but they turn away and he can’t hear them, so he has to ask them to turn back around.

                Have you seen ‘Sue Thomas F.B.Eye’? She’s deaf.

                IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                #44497
                Catwing
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                  @seekjustice I wrote 1233 words! Yay! And finished a chapter! One or two to go!

                  IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                  #44498
                  SeekJustice
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                    @Catwing yay!!! I’m procrastinating by reading Les Miserables. I’ll have a think over what you told me though.

                    INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                    #44499
                    Catwing
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                      You’re welcome @seekjustice
                      For the beginning of your book you need a hook. Showing that your character is deaf seemed like a good hook.
                      The F.B.Eye show is pretty intresting. It’s an older show so I don’t know if you can find it. She is an F.B.I. Agent that is deaf. But she can read lips.
                      It’s an American show too. F.B.I. Is part of law enforcement.
                      If you can watch it, it may help. I don’t know.

                      IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                      #44500
                      Catwing
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                        @seekjustice It’s late here, so I’m leaving. Bye.

                        IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                        #44501
                        Catwing
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                          Black and White as a title sounds cool. @seekjustice.

                          IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                          #44813
                          Anonymous
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                            Anyone out there? I’m going to be working on a paper and speech for around the next hour.


                            @dragon-snapper
                            @catwing @seekjustice @ethryndal @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @anyone else out there.

                            #44815
                            Snapper
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                              @winter-rose Frodo! I’m here in just a few moments!

                              ☀ ☀ ☀ ENFP ☀ ☀ ☀

                              #44817
                              EpicAddie2
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                                @winter-rose I’ll join you!

                                INFJ ~ 4w5
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                                #44819
                                Snapper
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                                  @epicaddie2 Hello! *waves*

                                  ☀ ☀ ☀ ENFP ☀ ☀ ☀

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