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    Catwing
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      *pops head in* It might look like a tree, be covered in branches.
      Or if there are big trees, inside of a tree with a staircase down. (Like in the Princess Bride. But maybe not a button. Instead it could have a branch you pull to open the door.)
      Or it could be built in the side of a mountain with the entrance behind a bush. @alia
      Good night! :3
      *pops head out*

      IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

      #73911
      Rochellaine
      @rochellaine
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        @alia Yes, like the Bible says, evil is thought good, and good is thought evil. 🙁  It’s quite possible for guys to be “cool” without being bad, but a lot of people don’t realize that. 😛


        @seekjustice
        Quillon is really sweet.  Forgive me, but even with his strength in protecting Sapphire I think he’s not quite as strong as Justice or Zac (physically) and so I like them a bit better, just because I have trouble with all the bad rap “manly” men are getting in society nowadays and like to see a truly strong man in fiction.  I think one way Christians can write “bad boy” personalities well is to do like you did, give them the potential to be bad boys, and then give them the strength and faith to be Christian men of honor.

        Alia, who is your favorite guy from Stars?  I would almost pick Jonas, but I’m not sure, since I also love Quillon.

        • This reply was modified 6 years, 6 months ago by Rochellaine.

        "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

        #73913
        Rochellaine
        @rochellaine
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          @alia I would picture it sort of like the sod shanties or dugouts from Little House on the Prairie.  Those are like cottages, but they are a bit disguised.

          "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

          #73914
          Alia
          @alia
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            @rochellaine…*wipes away tear* Jonas. The dad and Quillon are tied for a close second

            I was thinking maybe a dugout type, but with a similar element to what @catwing said.

            Catwing, what happens if you leave your head in one place without your body for too long?

            WIP - Decisions
            Kapeefer til we're old and grey

            #73915
            Alia
            @alia
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              Signing off, got a meeting to go too

              WIP - Decisions
              Kapeefer til we're old and grey

              #73916
              SeekJustice
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                @alia I agree with Rochellaine, I think it could be hidden in a hill, or a riverbank or something like that. I’ve always wanted a house like the one that the Ingalls lived in, in I think, On the Banks of Plum Creek?


                @rochellaine
                Well, I’m glad you think I did a good job. I do love a good redemption arc (my favourite thing to write ever!)

                INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                #73917
                SeekJustice
                @seekjustice
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                  @alia Bye! I love Jonas so much! I’m currently rewriting the scene with Chessy and Jonas at the speedway and my love has been renewed 😀 I also love Jean. And names that start with J.

                  INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                  #73918
                  Rochellaine
                  @rochellaine
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                    @seekjustice I’ll be back in a little while.

                    "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                    #73919
                    SeekJustice
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                      @rochellaine

                      Okay, cool 😀

                      INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                      #73920
                      Rochellaine
                      @rochellaine
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                        @seekjustice I’m back. 🙂  Is everyone else gone?

                        "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                        #73921
                        SeekJustice
                        @seekjustice
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                          @rochellaine

                          I think so, I’ve been quite lonely by myself.

                          INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                          #73922
                          Rochellaine
                          @rochellaine
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                            @seekjustice Aw. 🙂 Well, I’m here now. 😀  What are we going to talk about tonight?

                            "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                            #73923
                            Ariel Ashira
                            @ariel-ashira
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                              @seekjustice @rochellaine Alia and I just met in real life!  But I am back now.

                              "In a mask, was he?"

                              #73924
                              SeekJustice
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                                @rochellaine

                                What are you working on? Listening to anything at the moment (I’m currently listening to Anastasia).

                                By the way, since you know more about historic fashion than I do, I’ve got a Victorian related clothing question.


                                @ariel-ashira

                                Awesome! *tries to think of a question that doesn’t sound weird* Did you have a good time?

                                INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                                #73925
                                Rochellaine
                                @rochellaine
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                                  @seekjustice Well, I am watching a bit of Tchaikovsky’s Swan Lake on YouTube.  I found a version where they don’t die in the end, but kill the villain instead. 😀  I think I probably needed that after being reminded of Zac tonight. 😉

                                  Hm, I don’t like Victorian fashion much, but go ahead, shoot, and I’ll see if I can help.


                                  @ariel-ashira
                                  Cool!  Now @catwing and I aren’t the only ones who have met in real life. 😉  Yeah, thanks SeekJustice, I’ll just repeat your question.  Did you have a good time, Ariel?

                                  "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

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