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    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17
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      @rochellaine For sure πŸ˜€ Do you want to read the edited or unedited? It shouldn’t take me terribly long to edit it, since I have a deadline driving me on πŸ˜‰

      I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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      #72493
      Kaya Young
      @kaya-young
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        @rochellaine


        @jenwriter17
        Β  Β Oh! You’re almost done! That’s so exciting! Is there any chance I could beta read it? I know I wasn’t the best at giving you feedback before, so I understand if you don’t want me to.

         

        I’m working on a story I had an idea for this morning about a girl who I am now calling Tovia.

        The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
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        #72494
        Rochellaine
        @rochellaine
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          @jenwriter17 I don’t really care.Β  I’m editing something for SeekJustice right now, so I’ll not be too impatient for yours.Β  I just want you to know that I definitely want to read it when you are ready to let me! πŸ˜‰


          @kaya-young
          That’s a cool name!Β  Does it have a meaning?

          "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

          #72495
          Kaya Young
          @kaya-young
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            @rochellaineΒ  Yes, It actually was a nameΒ Β @aliaΒ  suggested, and I modified a bit. πŸ™‚ Tove was the original though, and it means thunder.

            How goes the western?

            The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
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            #72496
            Rochellaine
            @rochellaine
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              @kaya-young Interesting.Β  I love tweaking names to make them sound more cool. πŸ™‚

              It’s going okay.Β  I’m a really slow writer, so there hasn’t been a whole lot of progress made, though I’ve done a bunch of editing.

              Is the story you’re working on a book or a short story?

              "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

              #72497
              Jenna Terese
              @jenwriter17
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                @kaya-young I’d love for you to read it! I’m gonna edit it, then post it for you and Rochellaine πŸ˜€

                I like that name! πŸ˜‰

                I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                #72498
                Kaya Young
                @kaya-young
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                  @rochellaineΒ  Yeah, I’m a super slow writer too, so I understand.

                  πŸ™‚ Probably more book length? I don’t really know yet.

                   


                  @jenwriter17
                  Β  Thank you!

                  Well I shall bid you goodnight! Happy late night writing to both of you. πŸ™‚

                   

                  The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
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                  #72499
                  Jenna Terese
                  @jenwriter17
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                    @kaya-young Bye! πŸ™‚

                    I’m afraid I’ll have to say ‘happy late writing’ to @rochellaine as well, because I have to go too. See ya! πŸ˜‰

                    I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                    #72500
                    Rochellaine
                    @rochellaine
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                      @jenwriter17 @kaya-young Goodnight to both of you!

                      Kaya, I hope you’ll be around more often! πŸ™‚

                      "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                      #72502
                      Ariel Ashira
                      @ariel-ashira
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                        @jenwriter17 Can I read it too?!

                        "In a mask, was he?"

                        #72505
                        Jenna Terese
                        @jenwriter17
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                          @ariel-ashira Sure! πŸ˜€

                          I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                          #72510
                          Rochellaine
                          @rochellaine
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                            @seekjustice Today I was singing the old kiddie song, “Kookaburra Sits in the Old Gum Tree,” and wondered if you sing that in Australia, or if it’s just an American song about an Australian animal.Β  So, I’m asking you. πŸ˜›

                            "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                            #72511
                            SeekJustice
                            @seekjustice
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                              @rochellaine

                              Yeah we sing that song πŸ™‚ I’m pretty sure its actually an Australian song. I didn’t know other people sang it too πŸ˜‰

                              INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                              #72512
                              Rochellaine
                              @rochellaine
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                                @seekjustice Cool.Β  Well, yes, I guess other people do sing it. πŸ˜‰Β  I learned it from a singing teacher we had a really long time ago when I was probably seven or eight years old.Β  I’ve heard it in a medley of folk songs recently, though, and since those were mostly American folk songs I wondered if it was actually Australian or not.

                                You really are a useful information source…

                                πŸ˜›

                                "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                                #72513
                                SeekJustice
                                @seekjustice
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                                  @Rochellaine

                                  Well, yep, its Australian. Have you heard any other Australian songs?

                                  As are you πŸ™‚ just a question: in America do homeschoolers get typecast as super conservative girls with denim skirts and long hair? Like, half way to being Amish sort of people?

                                  INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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