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May 10, 2018 at 7:11 pm #72325
@jenwriter17 That would be awesome!! π
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 10, 2018 at 7:14 pm #72326@skredder Yeah, I’m nervous and excited at the same time. At first, I wanted to try a literary agent, but this being my first novel that I wrote since getting serious about writing, I wanted to wait a little while.
How’s Casse? π
By the way, Evie is here, sharing a bowl of chocolate ice cream with chocolate chips and chocolate syrup with me (we like chocolate) π
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www.jennaterese.comMay 10, 2018 at 7:18 pm #72327@jenwriter17 Hi, Evie!
Uh, well, at this moment in time Casse is not exactly yelling at the king, but it’s one of those quiet anger things. The king is yelling.
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 10, 2018 at 7:23 pm #72328@jenwriter17 Do you want the next part tomorrow?
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 10, 2018 at 7:25 pm #72329@skredder Oh, dear, Casse….
Whatever works for you. Was it supposed to be today?
Evie waved a shy hello π She says she likes your profile pic.
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www.jennaterese.comMay 10, 2018 at 7:30 pm #72330@jenwriter17 Thank you, Evie!
Um, I don’t know if it was supposed to be today or not. But I can do it tomorrow.
I’ve gotta go now though. Bye and good luck. π
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 10, 2018 at 7:37 pm #72331@skredder Tomorrow’s fine then π
Okay, bye!
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www.jennaterese.comMay 10, 2018 at 7:54 pm #72332@jenwriter17 Are you still here?
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 10, 2018 at 8:02 pm #72333@skredder Yup!
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www.jennaterese.comMay 10, 2018 at 8:04 pm #72334@jenwriter17 Sweet!
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 10, 2018 at 8:08 pm #72335@skredder You wanna exchange small snippets of our WIPs? π
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www.jennaterese.comMay 10, 2018 at 8:13 pm #72336@jenwriter17 Sure! I’ll go first.
There were a few times on her way to the armory that she had to climb out a window and hang onto the sill while guards marched passed. Once they had gone by, she pulled herself back into the castle. It was always a risk to do that should a guard outside happen to look up. It was a risk Casse had to take.
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 10, 2018 at 8:18 pm #72337@skredder ooh, nice! Casse is definitely a risk-taking person π
Okay, here’s mine:
Jax paced to the lone window in his cell, clenching his jaw. He looked up into the faint grey moonlight, then glanced back over his shoulder at Rin, her back to him. You realize that wasnβt a very smart decision now, donβt you? He wished he couldβve yelled it across to her cell, but that would only draw attention from the soldiers, which he wasnβt in the mood for.
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www.jennaterese.comMay 10, 2018 at 8:21 pm #72338@jenwriter17 Oh! They’re in the same cell? Now, that’s interesting!
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 10, 2018 at 8:22 pm #72339@skredder Actually no, the paragraph before showed they were separate. Sorry, maybe i should’ve included that paragraph π
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