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    valtmy
    @valtmy
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      @rochellaine

      I have been slaving on mine own WIP. ‘Tis a trying journey.

      (Just spent a day trying to write deliberately bad poetry because said WIP is a romance novel parody.)

      #72162
      Rochellaine
      @rochellaine
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        @valtmy Ah, a trying journey indeed.  Alas, but my WIP is neither smoothly nor easily written.  I pray you send some encouragement my way, that I may with renewed hope attempt to conquer a heroine who has vouchsafed to swoon at every inconvenient moment and to weep at the recollection of past troubles.  She is becoming a great trial and nearly have I begun to doubt that she or I will ever survive this book.

        Ha! That is a strangely glorious concept. How does this for bad love poetry?

        You are so beautiful, my love
        If I could have you I would fly like a dove
        But you do not love me and I must moan
        Until the day when I will no longer groan
        For then you will return my love and we
        Will live forever happily.

        ______By one Rochellaine, who is nearly embarrassed to put her name under it

        "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

        #72167
        valtmy
        @valtmy
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          Hmm…

          #72168
          valtmy
          @valtmy
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            @rochellaine

            Methinks you should be writing this WIP for you mayhap are better than me.

            Here’s some encouragement for you and Chara:

            The writer’s pen touched the inchoate page by end of pointed nib,
            And, starting with that first drop of ink, brought her to glory from the crib.

            ______ By valtmy, who is reconsidering her decision to insert poetry in her story

            #72169
            Rochellaine
            @rochellaine
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              @valtmy Chara and myself do thank you from the bottom of our hearts.  Perchance there is hope for our story to be written without the tragedy of it costing us both our lives.  How does your own book progress?

              But now, I pray you, why did you this harm to me, to make me intent on writing verses of love?  My head is filled with thoughts such as this:

              My love is like a red, red rose
              That’s newly sprung in spring
              She dances on her red, red toes
              But ne’er attempts to sing
              Because she knows that if she sang
              I’d never love her after
              Her voice would but produce a twang
              And I’d fall down in laughter

              ____By Rochellaine, who now wonders if she’ll ever be able to stop!

              "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

              #72176
              Rochellaine
              @rochellaine
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                @seekjustice @jenwriter17 @ariel-ashira @skredder @valtmy @alia I’m back!  Is anyone else writing?

                "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                #72177
                SeekJustice
                @seekjustice
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                  @rochellaine

                  Heyo!

                  INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                  #72178
                  Rochellaine
                  @rochellaine
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                    @seekjustice How-do.  Sorry for falling asleep last night. 😛  How’s it going?

                    "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                    #72181
                    SeekJustice
                    @seekjustice
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                      @rochellaine

                      Don’t be sorry for falling aslee! You stay up way too late anyway  (not that I’m complaining. I enjoy talking to you. I’m just stating a fact)

                      Good thanks!

                      INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                      #72182
                      Jenna Terese
                      @jenwriter17
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                        @rochellaine @seekjustice

                        *timidly steps in* I think I might be able to write for a teensy bit.

                         

                        I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                        www.jennaterese.com

                        #72183
                        SeekJustice
                        @seekjustice
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                          @jenwriter17

                          Welcome!

                          INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                          #72184
                          Rochellaine
                          @rochellaine
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                            @seekjustice Haha!  I do, I do.

                            What are you working on?  I had a really weird and complicated idea for a retelling of Robin Hood today…


                            @jenwriter17
                            Hello!  I’m not even gonna ask how your characters are doing.  Not even gonna. 😛

                            Um…how are your characters doing?

                            "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                            #72186
                            SeekJustice
                            @seekjustice
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                              @rochellaine

                              Right now I’m not really working on anything but if I get up and get my computer I’m going to read some more of Jen’s book and hopefully catch up.

                              INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                              #72187
                              Jenna Terese
                              @jenwriter17
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                                @rochellaine Haha, they’re terrible! It’s great! 😛 😛 😛

                                …..

                                And how about yours? 😉

                                I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                                www.jennaterese.com

                                #72188
                                SeekJustice
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                                  @Rochellaine ooh…A Robin Hood retelling??? Tell me more.

                                  I’ve just been considering a Little Mermaid retelling…

                                  INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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