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@ingridrd Oh praise God! (Here’s the unofficial basic plot.):
Molly Tailor a young woman, daughter of a commanding officer in the Queen’s Navy, wife of a sailor. Life seemed happy for her, her husband had just returned from a venture and was going to be home over winter, but one morning she woke up alone.
Time revealed that her husband’s ship had as well disappeared, without any explanation.
A year later Molly, against the pleading of her father, and friends sets out to find her husband with the help of Jaque Lanlee to find her husband.@emily well actually thankfully the hard part hasn’t begun, since my friend said the plot is a mix of adventure and romance I have a lot of exciting plot lines and twists. I’m also thinking through and outlining the chapters before I write them so I have a better idea of what I’m doing.
~I don’t know what I’m doing~
@emily also the romance part is fun because I want it to be clean, and non-sappy so it’s short and sweet. Which for some reason is way more appealing and likeable to me.
~I don’t know what I’m doing~
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@salome01w4g Sounds really cool! Yeah, I get where you’re coming from. XD
@salome01w4g 🙂 That story sounds super intriguing!
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@emily and @salome01w4g GUESS WHAT!!!??? I have joined the ranks of Knights in Shining Armor!!! *starts dancing*
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@ingridrd @emily can you guys give me some quick feed back?
Is this to weird, or morbid at all?I walked to the cradle and gently lifted my daughter from it. She seemed so much more fragile in death than in life.
The baby has been dead a few hours at this point in the story. (Haha huge spoiler…)~I don’t know what I’m doing~
Unfortunately, I must say farewell now. 🙁 Talk to you later!
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@ingridrd Bye!!!
~I don’t know what I’m doing~
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@ingridrd Congratulations!! I am hoping to upgrade to the Eccentric Mentor soon, but I still need like around 300 more posts. *sigh*
@salome01w4g How could you possibly have the heart to kill a baby?! Excluding my emotions on the subject, I kind of like it. But I do tend to like more morbid stuff. *grins*I will answer before I leave, @salome01w4g. 😉
*sobs* Besides being completely heart-wrenching, it’s beautifully written.A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
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@ingridrd You’re leaving? Aaaaaaw. Bye anyway.
@ingridrd Oh yay! (Some how I didn’t see your post….)
Well thank you@emily Yes I know but the story starts out with baby already having passed away so there’s not a whole lot of attach meant. Well is it morbid? I’m trying for it not to be.
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@salome01w4g Oh, ok good. I don’t think it’s morbid. As long as there isn’t any prior attachment made.
@emily thanks! I didn’t think so but then I’ve never really written anything with death in it and I wanted to delicately handle it.
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@salome01w4g Yeah, I’m working on my first try too…We’ll see…..
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