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Update.
Hey, my cover artist JUST SENT THE COMPLETED COVER!
It’s brilliant!
Anyone want to see?!?!
Riker dropped his voice to a soft whisper. “…I’m home.”
Wow! That was faster than I was expecting. Let’s see it!
I know! She is fast!!
Riker dropped his voice to a soft whisper. “…I’m home.”
Very nice! Now you’ll have to figure out how to play with this when you put your name and title on it. Seems you should be putting more stuff towards the bottom based on Aaron’s position. I might actually put your name at the top with this in a smaller font, and the book and series names at the bottom, with the book title in the largest font.
That’s what I was thinking.
I’m going to try it a few different ways and then see what everyone thinks.
Riker dropped his voice to a soft whisper. “…I’m home.”
I’m making a list of the most important characters in this book. Would you say I missed anyone?
Aaron, Turin, Sabina, Noah, Darrien, Joseph
Think of the characters you are most anxious to have feedback on
Noooo…… I don’t think so.
Aaron is the lead.
Turin was the ally.
Then Noah and Darrien became the Allies.
Joseph is the lead of the next book.
Sabina was the love interest/ally
Yeah. No one else I can think of.
I mean, Asher and Eric play more prominent rolls later on, but they had pretty small parts in this book.
Uhh, maybe Adrian. He’s not super important in this book, but he is the swing character. The guy riding the fence who can’t decide who’s side he’s on.
Riker dropped his voice to a soft whisper. “…I’m home.”
Okay, thanks!
Okay, here are the options so far. What do you think?
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With this option I would put my name on the spine only. I did that with my first book, so if my name makes the whole thing too crowded then I will do this.
Riker dropped his voice to a soft whisper. “…I’m home.”
also, what do y’all think of either of these? I’m just playing around for the moment, so feel free to tear them up.
In a world on the brink of despair, Aaron Dalvarian embarks on a perilous mission to the besieged kingdom of Ardenta. As the Empire’s ruthless forces close in, intent on conquest, Aaron carries a message of hope: the truth of the One True God. Yet, in a land where strangers are met with suspicion and fear, he must navigate cultural divides and hostility, risking everything to bring light to the Ardentan’s shadowed hearts.
Will Aaron’s faith ignite a spark of courage in the Ardentan people, or will he be swallowed by the darkness of war?
Discover a tale of resilience, sacrifice, and ultimate redemption.
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In a world cloaked in darkness and on the brink of war, Aaron Dalvarian embarks on a dangerous mission to the kingdom of Ardenta. The land is under siege by the Empire, a merciless nation that worships multiple deities. As Ardenta teeters on the edge of destruction, Aaron must navigate treacherous waters to bring the light of the One True God to its people.
But in a land where strangers are despised and war looms on the horizon, Aaron faces a daunting challenge. Will he be able to win over the distrustful Ardentans and save their kingdom from plunging into the darkness of the Empire’s religion? Let There Be Light is a gripping tale of faith, courage, and the power of God’s Word in the face of adversity. Dive into this captivating story and discover a world where hope shines brightest in the darkest of times.
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In a world teetering on the brink of darkness, Aaron Dalvarian embarks on a perilous mission to the besieged kingdom of Ardenta, a land fraught with suspicion and fear. As the relentless Empire closes in, threatening to destroy everything in its path, Aaron carries a message of hope: the truth of the One True God.
But can he break through the walls of mistrust?
In a battle between faith and desperation, will Aaron become the beacon of light that points the way to the God Ardenta desperately needs, or will he be swallowed by the shadows of fear and doubt? Discover the power of faith in Let There Be Light.
Riker dropped his voice to a soft whisper. “…I’m home.”
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