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October 12, 2022 at 9:13 pm #119295
Anddd didnโt tag yโall ๐คฃ @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 9:19 pm #119296Ok, I see it’s Paxton, and I’m like, “aww.”
Then I saw that picture.
I know that picture.
Andย thenย I was like, no. Just. No.
XD but I love it, the way it all fits together and I’m on edge. It’s so perfect. Yay, Paxton!
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October 12, 2022 at 9:21 pm #119297Those are awesome…
And Paxton’s picture…that’s strangely fitting.ย He better make it out. He and Luna.
Corvina is great too, I mean she’s not exactly an antagonist here? Good. She needs a break. XD
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Fork the GorkOctober 12, 2022 at 9:22 pm #119298@elishavet-pidyon yeaaaaaa Ikโฆ..I mean idk the whole backstory behind the picture but I donโt NEED to know ya knowโฆ.
yeaaaaa
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 9:22 pm #119299@koshka Nope no antagonist here! Just a bit trouble at the beginning!!
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#ProtectSebOctober 12, 2022 at 9:26 pm #119300Yeah, I don’t really know the back story anyway, just that it’s of a young boy in Hitler’s Youth.
And well, it electrified me the first time I saw it.
But I love Luna! She works in so we’ll. I can hardly wait to see how that turns out.
And Corvina’s story is sweet, and makes sense.
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October 12, 2022 at 9:28 pm #119302@elishavet-pidyon @koshka Iโm really glad yโall liked it!!!!! ๐
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#ProtectSebOctober 13, 2022 at 9:10 am #119323Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. OH. MY. GOSHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Now I must make the extremely hard decision of which one of them is my favorite…but I have to say…in this AU…that spot…the one who has already stolen my heart and imagination…is…
…Grimm.
Prob not much of a surprise, considering I love him in your regular book too, but anywho! XD
I just LOVE his background! The Russian background is PERFECTO! ๐
@elishavet-pidyon. Aww, thank you soooo much! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธWell…I didn’t participate, I just dressed up! XDXDXD However…I had people ask if I was, and the people doing it offered for me to be in it NEXT YEAR if I can get a field medic uniform, because I was wearing a white Nurse dress and they didn’t want that out on the field. XD But yeah…so…I’ve been offered a position! XDXDXD
October 13, 2022 at 11:25 am #119331@freedomwriter76 AHH AO HAPPY U LIKE IT!!! My favorites are honestly probably Paxton and Lunaโฆ.
I actually got the idea to connect them while writing and for Luna to be a Jew WHILE writing XD!!
and was like GASP I LOVE THIS!! Like connecting all the couples was just ๐๐๐
And theyโre so cute and Luna being a Jew is soooo perfect and sweet and Paxton is adorable!!! And the two of them escaping! So I imagine them escaping to American through an underground system, because I know some people were helping to get Jews and others out during this time, and in fact, this is where all the stories connect!
Because in order to get to America the kids have to pass through France, and they meet Grimm and Jocelyn, who are the two helping them get away.
Meanwhile, over in America,
Arabella and November, deciding they still want to be part of the war effort, sign up to help children who come to America with no homes.
And the 2 children they take in?
Luna and Paxtonโฆ
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#ProtectSebOctober 21, 2022 at 1:31 pm #120184@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 Can I just say I love your switched AU’s?? The pictures you’ve found for your characters are amazing!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 21, 2022 at 1:38 pm #120185@keilah-h thank you!!!
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@keilah-h. Thank you! It’s been a lot of fun to come up with. xD
October 25, 2022 at 11:03 pm #120433Here’s an idea for a fantasy AU with Bronwen and the crew! It’s super loose, ideas would be much appreciated.
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12I’ll go with the classic magic-has-been-outlawed-in-the-kingdom story as a base. Bronwen and company all happen to have inherited magic talents and once they find each other they gang up and start an uprising against the king/queen whatever. Actually, I might make Mercedes and Denver’s dad the villain (as usual, but it always adds extra conflict lol)
Bronwen is a talented archer with enhanced senses and perception. She has a silver tongue and can sway people or convince them of almost anything (think Obi-Wan Kenobi: “These are not the droids you’re looking for.”), but this is limited by the individual’s intelligence and whatnot. She’s a rogue and a loner trying to stay under the radar.
Kami is the daughter of a wealthy noble and she has the Midas touch. Her parents have exploited her talent and used it to make themselves wealthy, but now that magic is outlawed she and her family are in danger. Her parents, being the slimeballs they are, want to turn her in to save their own hides, but Kami runs away. I’m guessing she hires Bronwen to be her bodyguard ๐
Mercedes and Denver are runaway princesses eeee =D
Mercedes is able to communicate with animals, and Denver is able to manipulate plants. Their father isn’t so fond of them in this AU. Their mother had magic, she didn’t get along with Mercy and Denny’s father because it was an arranged marriage, after she died of a mysterious illness her husband/the king outlawed magic for [logical sounding reason] but also partially because of his lasting resentment towards his late wife. Mercy and Denver remind him of her and he mistreats them because of it. He wants to have them locked away but they escape and meet Bronwen and Kami.
That’s all I’ve got for now, I gotta go eat dinner and carve a pumpkin ๐
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In the shriveled hand-keepOctober 25, 2022 at 11:05 pm #120434Oh aaand they all have cool outfits but for now all I’ll say is that Kami has these cool golden gauntlets she has to wear and Bronwen has a cloak and intricate leather bracers ๐
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In the filling-eye hills
In the shriveled hand-keepOctober 25, 2022 at 11:33 pm #120436Sounds super fun! I really like the characters.
As for ideas….
Any specific directions in mind?
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