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October 11, 2022 at 5:15 pm #119141
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And here’s Maggie, their little sister: ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
October 11, 2022 at 5:17 pm #119142Anonymous
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And…that’s all I have for now. XDXDXD
Is there anyone else you’d like to hearĀ moreĀ about? Like, one of the ones I didn’t talk about much? š
October 11, 2022 at 5:20 pm #119143Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. GIRLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!! I JUST REALIZED SOMETHING!!!! š±š±š±
ERICH HAS BEEN WITH HANS FOR 24 YEARS!!! OH MY GOODNESS, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! šššššš
October 11, 2022 at 5:54 pm #119144OH ALSO!!! It is time for our next VILLAIN AU PERSON!!!
and yāall, this one wonāt be near as bad actually as the othersā¦.
because oddly enoughā¦.compared the othersā¦.this character actually sorta is theĀ heroā¦.
errā¦heroine.
Yet sheās still the antagonist at the beginningā¦.HA what a conundrum, right?? But thatās what ya get in the Villain AU!
Meet Corvina-
Ridding Ara of her Destiny had beenā¦
Easier then sheād originally thoughtā¦
Sheād been groomed for it all her life.
Ridding all the others of their fateā¦making sure none of them fulfilled the prophecyā¦that was her destiny.
Thus, with it completed, Corvina had always thought sheād beā¦
Released.
Released from Eder. Whatever bound her to him.
The family curses or connection that tied back to her mother and father, andā¦maybe even generations before that.
She figured thatā¦all of it would be completed once she achieved her goal.
Of courseā¦.
This didnāt happen.
She really shouldāve known better.
Ederā¦
Deathā¦
Wasnāt one to keep his promises.
Butā¦reallyā¦.did she mind?
Did she truly care?
After all, she had nothing better to do with her life.
She was going to ask him to kill her after allā¦.
For what better way to rid yourself of everything thenā¦getting rid of yourself?
So, she begrudgingly, grumblingly, with much sarcasm and sass, decided sheād be his puppet again.
For however long he wished.
Because there really was nothing better in her life.
This, however, was not what sheād had in mind.
Butā¦in all honestyā¦
It wasā¦.kinda niceā¦.
Since taking over AāGrend, the darkness of the land had grown tenfold.
Eder had chased the rest of the Lightfollowers away. Imprisoning someā¦
Killing the rest.
And those who remained?
Were scattered abroad. Upon the whole word.
The darkness was overpowering now, you could feel it. Lands didnāt even need to be under Ederās physical rule to beĀ his.Ā
They were already in his power.
And Corvina knew it.
Thus, AāGrend merely became Ederāsā¦Champion State.
His trophy.
A sign of victory over The Light Oneās people.
The Head City of the Kingdom.
and Corvina?
Wellā¦.
She was now nothing more then an ambassador.
Anā¦errand girl,Ā of sorts. Dealing more with the politics of AāGrend, and the people who were left.
Wether prisoner, or those who had submitted to Ederās rule.
At first, sheād been highly displeased with this position.
Herā¦dictator of shadows, forced into this lowly position?!
Butā¦she had to admitā¦.
It wasā¦a bit relaxing. Not having to live in the dark castle of her childhood anymore, but instead live in what was once Araās home.
To walk AāGrend, though it is different now, and see the beauty it once had.
ToĀ not beā¦as wicked.
Though she still had some dirty jobs of course.
Doling of punishments. Imprisonments. Public killingsā¦.
And they do take their tollā¦
And the voice in her mind still remainsā¦
Butā¦stillā¦
Sheās finding a sense ofā¦peace here.
And maybe some of thatās because of the family sheās in charge of caring for.
Araās family.
The royal family.
Secretly, though she wouldnāt let anyone know it, her heart is warming to the threesome.
The one-eyed father (lost his eye during all of this mess), and the gentle, kind red-haired woman.
And the jovial elderā¦
In all honestyā¦.a part of her longs to have a family like them. And whenever they speak of their daughterā¦.Corvina feels guilt well up within herā¦.
After allā¦she killed herā¦
But the family doesnāt seem to hold that against Corvina. Perhaps they did at first, but now, as the years have passed, they all have come to accept her.
Evenā¦.
Love her?
Noā¦Thatāsā¦impossible. Isnāt it?
Yet Corvina canāt shake the kindness she feels from them, and returns it in suite. Trying to make them as comfortable as possible, despite being prisoners.
And they, as well, fill her mind with encouragement. An onslaught of kindness to overtake the voice in her head.
And storiesā¦
Stories of what AāGrend used to be.
And soon, Corvina finds herself wishing it was like that once again.
And thenā¦
They tell her of the Light One.
Of His grace and mercy.
Andā¦love.
For herā¦
And slowly, their words begin to chip away, until one dayā¦she finds herself talking aloudā¦.
But not to herself.
Not this time.
And this timeā¦.itās not herself who answersā¦.
AGH THIS ONE BECAME SOOO HEART TOUCHING UGH!! Also really long š so because itās already so long imma give you a run down of what happens next in the AU instead of a full story.
Quick rundown- Eder discovers Corvinaās ābetrayalā and sends her father to finally meet her.
Despite having been a child last they met, she recognizes him whichā¦obviously brings trauma.
Sheās mad, angry, and this undoes a bit of what Araās family has done for her.
Not only this, but her father begins trying to manipulate her.
During all of this it comes out that the boy she scratched (and she thinks killed) in the catacombs) was actually her brother.
Thisā¦brings her completely to her knees and sheās broken once again, because she thought he was dead all this time, and sheās been mourning himĀ for years,Ā only to discover sheās killed him.
Eder has sent her father to kill her, but Corvina escapes.
All the work Araās family has done is destroyed. Still, the family holds a place in her heart, so she helps the family escape despite her better judgement (progress for Corvina guys!!!), making Eder all the angrier, of course.
Long story short again, eventually in the story she discovers November and Ara are ALIVE, and Novemberās in a comatose state, Araāsā¦wellā¦
Ya knowā¦
And yeaā¦
When Ara sees Corvina all of anger at what happened to November (because Corvina caused it) comes out, but she then realizes she canāt wake him up without Corvinaās help.
now Corvina becomes conflicted. She feels guilty and blames herself, and wants to wake up her brother too, but at the same time, now has the Light One moving on her, and is becoming a better person.
So she knows that what Ara wants, all of the power sheās asking for isnāt healthy, and that there has to be another way. But Ara just wonāt listen to reasonā¦.
So yepā¦.
thereās Corvina!
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#ProtectSebOctober 11, 2022 at 6:00 pm #119145@freedomwriter76 UGGGHHH THEYāRE SO GREAT!! But Erich my heaaaaartttā¦I canātā¦ā¦. š
Aghā¦
THE PICS ARE AMAZING THO!!! AHH JAYDENāS PICTURE!! AND LITTLE MAGGIE IS SOOOO CUTE!!!
ALSO!! I have a question!!!!
who do is your fav in the villain AU?! Likeā¦Ik itās kinda a crazy question cuz ur probs like NONE OF THEM, I HATE THIS XD!!!
butā¦yea.
My favs are honestly probably Paxton, Jocelyn and Corvinaās turned out really sweet.
andā¦another one.
in ur fantasy AU my favs are probablyā¦.ERICH (I need him to be happyā¦I need it)
Jayden and Asher!!!!! LUV MEH SOME BROTHERRRRRS XD!!!
And curious about the ELF!!! AHH ELVES!!
GASP AND EZRAAAAAA šššš ma farm boiiiii *swoons*
ooh ooh btw did I miss Leon??
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#ProtectSebOctober 11, 2022 at 6:02 pm #119146@freedomwriter76
24ā¦..
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TWENTY FOUR YEARS?!?!?!
MY JAW LITERALLY DROPPED WHEN I READ THAT! YOUāRE GONNA MAKE ME CRY STOP IT!!! STOOOOOPPP!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *flips table! Throws vase! Cries like baby* šššššššššššššš«š«š«šššš¤š¤š¤š¤š¤š¤
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#ProtectSebOctober 11, 2022 at 6:07 pm #119148NVM I FOUND LEON XD
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#ProtectSebOctober 11, 2022 at 6:10 pm #119150Corvina is definitely my favorite. And…please do a redemption arc for all of them! Like, you could redeem all but Ara actually in the story, and wrap up with showing Ara start to change for good.
Because…
Because I really don’t want to hear about her being hopeless. Really, I don’t like complete negative arcs.
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
October 11, 2022 at 6:47 pm #119152@koshka I feel ya
This AU was kinda a Brain Splat AU if that makes sense XD, as in where I had ideas for āWhat if so and so became a villainā and ran with it, but i believe they could all be redeemed by Corvina.
HOWEVERā¦.
they would still be MUCH MUCH different then the characters you knowā¦.
And youād need to start with Araā¦.
So- here you are. The short redemptions of the Villain AUs and how theyād be different tho to the characters you know and love.
Itās the endgame of the story.
The all is lost point.
The final battle.
Arabella has gotten what sheās wanted.
All the crystals. All the power.
Corvinaās shadows. Lunaās light.
Everything to awaken November.
This is it.
Even if it tears the world in halfā¦
Sheās willing to try.
Butā¦.
It doesnāt workā¦.
And Ara, after years of letting the darkness and bitterness eat away at her, finally realizesā¦.
Itās hopelessā¦.
And she breaksā¦.
Nothing will ever bring him backā¦.
Ever.
And for the first time in years, Ara allows herselfā¦.to cry.
Corvina and Luna, weakened, watch the broken villainess weep. Luna prepares herself, ready to finish off the young lady, butā¦
As Corvina watches the purple-scarred girl, she realizesā¦
She understandsā¦
Understands where Ara is coming from.
And where sheās been.
And she stops Luna.
Luna is stunned, of course, filled with her own anger at being held captive for so long. Yetā¦that silent whisper still echoes in the back of her mind.
that voice she hasnāt heard in so longā¦
The Light One.
Her weapon lowers. She understands.
Ara has been offered grace.
Just as Corvina had been.
And nowā¦.
Perhaps togetherā¦the three of them could fix all of thisā¦.
Including Novemberā¦
Thus, long story short, Arabella does get redeemed, and the three girls go around finding the rest of the Light Oneās chosen children. Those who have also been turned, and their hearts hardened.
But again, they will never be the same, even once redeemed. (Iāll give you examples for each Charrie)
For instance- Lyn would stillā¦have a bit of a mental problem due to everything, kinda on the childish side and has to sometimes be treated as such. I.E; steered Ā in the right direction, reprimanded a bit, but overall sweet and filled with wonder.
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#ProtectSebOctober 11, 2022 at 7:05 pm #119153@koshka @freedomwriter76
Despite being redeemed, Araās purple scars still reach all the way to her face (like that picture I shared.) They glow when she feels intense emotions and/or pain, and she is skilled in magic still, though prefers not to use it unless necessary.
She still struggles with her redemption, and has yet to face her family, despite Corvina knowing where they are, and telling her theyād love to see her.
She knows they really wouldnātā¦
Theyād hate who sheās becomeā¦.
What sheās doneā¦
She hates it.
Yetā¦would she do it all again? If she could save November? If something wouldāve been different?
Her heart still hurts, but more so then for just a friend, because as years passed, both she and November grew, despite him being in a comatose state, and Araā¦
She began toĀ fall in love withĀ Novemberā¦.
In truthā¦she always had been in love with him, but once he was trappedā¦unable to awaken, she really realized itā¦
Realized how much she needed him.
And it felt like a piece of her was missing. Still did.
But that didnāt excuse the things sheād doneā¦.
And now she had to live with themā¦
Corvina tried to helpā¦.and Lunaā¦.
Ah, Lunaā¦.
Everytime she saw Lunaā¦she was just reminded of it all over again.
Butā¦.Corvina and Lunaā¦both still have some sort of hopeā¦even if a bit dim. And so thenā¦maybeā¦just maybeā¦there was a chance.
For Ara to fix everything.
To fix her mistake.
And to wake up November.
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#ProtectSebOctober 11, 2022 at 7:06 pm #119154š¤¦š»āāļø SOO the one where I talk about HOW Ara was redeemedā¦ignore the part about Lyn that was supposed to be in a separate post š¤£
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#ProtectSebOctober 11, 2022 at 8:46 pm #119160*Long sigh of relief as I release my held breath*
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!
Even though they are quite different from what was ‘supposed’ to be, I still love them.
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
October 11, 2022 at 9:04 pm #119161@koshka youāre welcome š
ā¦..(though you may not like me foreverā¦)
UMM ANYWAY!!
so about the other charries and some little differences they carry over after being redeemed!
So as stated above lol-
Jocelyn would still have some mental problems. Sheād be more like a child, having a bit of an issue seeing the difference of good and bad and needing to be steered in the right direction. She also hasā¦quite the sense of humor.
Nyx is still his rascally self with Lynā¦.but EXTREMALLY distrustful and has touch repulsion due to trauma. Heās missing a leg, is very clingy and possessive of Lyn and also a bit mental like Lyn. But slowly (very slowly) he warms up.
Grimm- Keeps his distance. A lot. Especially from Paxton (heā¦ahhā¦went after Paxton during his bounty hunting daysā¦.) and refuses to speak, remaining mute instead. Eventually Lyn gets him to crack a small smile, and even speak.
And slowly he gets used to Paxton.
Paxton- Very much moreā¦.kelpie-like. Dresses like them (think kinda gypsy-like crossed with royal, fine apparel) and acts like them. Very mischievous and much more confident (think Nyx in the original series, but as Paxton instead) Also uses his siren abilities and is skilled in them. Also has fangs.
Luna-more trained and skilled in her powers now, also more of a warrior and hardened, though never really a āvillainā, she was a prisoner and had to adapt. Sheās not the same naive girl, but she does have that bit of sweetness and light inside, and it shows.
so yup!
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#ProtectSebOctober 11, 2022 at 9:08 pm #119162Soā¦.
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
ummmā¦..
Thereās something I have to sayā¦.
Ahemā¦.
*smiles evilly.*
YOU BROKE MY HEARTā¦.FREEDOM, AND NOW I SHALL BREAK ALL OF YOURS MWAHAHAHAHA *me turning evil š¤£*
ok but seriouslyā¦yāall aināt gonna like me after this š but I have a bonusā¦..in the VILLAIN AUā¦.before it can be called completeā¦.
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#ProtectSebOctober 11, 2022 at 9:09 pm #119163And soā¦.I introduceā¦..
Villain November
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