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August 13, 2017 at 4:02 pm #40311
@his-instrument When you want a message delivered don’t use pigeons. They won’t deliver anything for me. *frowns* They will also gossip away Intel. If a pigeon betrays me, I might eat it… Yes, they are ridiculous.
@warrenluther04 There’s an idea. Pigeons that work for the cats, but are scared of them.
And Beatrix Potter has a story where two rats kidnap a kitten… In dough.IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
August 14, 2017 at 8:14 pm #40666@catwing Uhh, okay??? *grins* Actually, that’s a really good idea. Thanks!
@his-instrument Maybe I could use sock monkeys as a villain company….. So many ideas! Thanks!Kapeefer 'Till We're Old and Grey!
ENFJ-T ... I think (haven't taken the quiz in awhile)August 14, 2017 at 8:15 pm #40668@catwing Which Beatrix Potter story? I cannot recall a title….. The pigeon idea’s really funny. Thanks!
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ENFJ-T ... I think (haven't taken the quiz in awhile)August 14, 2017 at 8:17 pm #40669@catwing Agh! I remember that story with the kitty! I read that story so much. Well, actually, I mainly just looked at the pictures, but anywho. Yes. I remember that one. 😛
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August 14, 2017 at 8:19 pm #40670@warrenluther04 @catwing Oh, and I’d be careful using pigeon’s as cat minions because they are afraid of them, not because it’s a bad idea in the least, but because it is vaguely parallel to Bolt, where Mittens the cat uses the pigeons to get her food and she doesn’t eat them in turn. Have either of you seen that?
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August 14, 2017 at 8:53 pm #40674@dragon-snapper Yes. I saw Bolt.🙂 Wasn’t thinking of that then though. *shruggs* Poor Mittens.
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August 14, 2017 at 8:55 pm #40676Mittens needed food and a reputation as dangerous, because *spoiler!*. *nodds* Otherwise she could’ve starved…
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September 13, 2017 at 5:06 pm #43278@dragon-snapper Actually, I have not…. But thanks for the idea!
Sorry for replying late, everyone.
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ENFJ-T ... I think (haven't taken the quiz in awhile)September 13, 2017 at 6:10 pm #43279I really like Kate Flournoy’s idea of a sly sophisticated mouse causing mischief. Sounds like a unique idea! Have fun exploring & writing! 🙂
September 24, 2017 at 3:52 pm #45058@delightinlife Thanks! I’m glad so many people like this idea, this is really encouraging! 😀
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