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    Kaya Young
    @kaya-young
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      @ingridrd  But I liked James? What do you mean he was going to assassinate her?!?

       

      So those were my first thoughts… Here’s my answers to your questions. 🙂

      1. I loved Jaclyn, and Ana was also intriguing to me.

      2. No, not at all!

      3. Jaclyn is very real and relatable, the only character I had a harder time relating to was Randal.

      4. No.

      5. No!!! That was the kind of ending that if I had a paper book I would throw it down!! Where is the next book? I want to read it!

       

      The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
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      Ingrid
      @ingridrd
        • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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        @kaya-young  Thank so much for reading and for the comments!!! 🙂

        A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

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        NC Stokes
        @daughteroftheking
          • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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          @ingridrd Ok, this is the part where I’m honest and admit I’m behind the times. Until today, I didn’t notice that you had posted the chapters after 1 and 2. Soooo, I have some reading to catch up on. I’ll get that done by Wednesday.

          Blog: https://weridasusual.home.blog/

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          Ingrid
          @ingridrd
            • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
            • Total Posts: 830

            @daughteroftheking  Oh don’t worry about it!  Thanks again.  😉

            A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

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