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@ingridrd But I liked James? What do you mean he was going to assassinate her?!?
So those were my first thoughts… Here’s my answers to your questions. 🙂
1. I loved Jaclyn, and Ana was also intriguing to me.
2. No, not at all!
3. Jaclyn is very real and relatable, the only character I had a harder time relating to was Randal.
4. No.
5. No!!! That was the kind of ending that if I had a paper book I would throw it down!! Where is the next book? I want to read it!
The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
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@kaya-young Thank so much for reading and for the comments!!! 🙂
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@ingridrd Ok, this is the part where I’m honest and admit I’m behind the times. Until today, I didn’t notice that you had posted the chapters after 1 and 2. Soooo, I have some reading to catch up on. I’ll get that done by Wednesday.
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@daughteroftheking Oh don’t worry about it! Thanks again. 😉
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)