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Okay, y’all.
Here are the first couple chapters of the first draft of my fantasy WIP, Substitute. Please, please, please be harsh. Pick it apart. 🙂
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mfYLvDN_yaH-bZPaBtSAFRid80w3Pm6NgUrJUZrQkG4/edit
Imma tag the people who critiqued the Prologue before, but anyone can edit!
@jenwriter17 @epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking @that_writer_girl_99 @ariella-newheart @ariel-ashiraA dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@ingridrd I’d be glad to critique this 🙂
But, y’all, this’ll be my last critique/beta/alpha reading job for a while. The upcoming months are going to be pretty busy (a few trips out of town, getting my WIP ready for an editor at Realm Makers, my equestrian team season starting, beginning a blog). I’ll finished reading for @skredder and @seekjustice though 🙂
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www.jennaterese.com@jenwriter17 OH, gotcha! I totally get it. Thanks for your willingness. 🙂
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@ingridrd Ahh! I read it and I love it! What will happen next?
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http://www.encircledbygrace.com/@kaya-young THANK YOU! And I love that seal… 🙂 🙂 🙂
I will post more parts after I get a few more people to read it.
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
To those of you who are interested, here are the next two chapters of the book. I’m pretty sure the fourth chapter is kinda confusing, so if you’d give me some pointers there I’d appreciate it!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-jzVzEBjTyvq5vKUBAGZ-0Lt4-_bWLJw1Uofs_59wmQ/edit
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@ingridrd *tries not to break critiquing hiatus*
*fails*
I just have to read this!!! Maybe I’ll put off the start of my hiatus until late May… is the whole book written and you’re just posting parts of it here and there, or are you still in the process of writing it?
I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
www.jennaterese.com@jenwriter17 The whole book is written, I just don’t want to overwhelm anyone with critiquing the entire story…unless you want to. 🙂
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@ingridrd What!?! The whole book is written and you aren’t letting me
readerr, critique it all at once? 😉This story is awesome! I thought that the first two chapters were suspenseful, but the ending chapter four really sucked me into the story. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Have you written any other books and where can I buy them?!?
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http://www.encircledbygrace.com/@kaya-young Wow, thank you so much! I can definitely post the entire book if you want.
Well, I have not completed any other full books, but the sequel to the one you’re reading now is in the works and I also have a Superhero WIP along with some short stories/novelettes. 🙂 🙂
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@jenwriter17 @kaya-young Thank you both so very much for putting time into commenting on this for me! Would you like me to post the entire book here or…?
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@ingridrd Umm.. Whatever you want to do, but posting it on here would work best for me. 🙂
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http://www.encircledbygrace.com/@jenwriter17 @kaya-young Alrighty! Here you go. Thanks again!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/11AHdPPXbizqzep23-mmpjsj1HndllfhrEjVt5cOq1Oc/edit#
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@ingridrd Awesooooome! 😀
I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
www.jennaterese.com@ingridrd Thanks! So far I’ve only read the prologue, and I am super excited to read all of it!
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http://www.encircledbygrace.com/
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