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  • #71828
    Ingrid
    @ingridrd
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      Okay, y’all.

      Here are the first couple chapters of the first draft of my fantasy WIP, Substitute.ย  Please, please, please be harsh.ย  Pick it apart.ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mfYLvDN_yaH-bZPaBtSAFRid80w3Pm6NgUrJUZrQkG4/edit

      Imma tag the people who critiqued the Prologue before, but anyone can edit!


      @jenwriter17
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      A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

      #71830
      Jenna Terese
      @jenwriter17
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        @ingridrd I’d be glad to critique this ๐Ÿ™‚

        But, y’all, this’ll be my last critique/beta/alpha reading job for a while. The upcoming months are going to be pretty busy (a few trips out of town, getting my WIP ready for an editor at Realm Makers, my equestrian team season starting, beginning a blog). I’ll finished reading for @skredder and @seekjustice though ๐Ÿ™‚

        I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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        #71831
        Ingrid
        @ingridrd
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          @jenwriter17ย  OH, gotcha!ย  I totally get it.ย  Thanks for your willingness.ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

          A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

          #71858
          Kaya Young
          @kaya-young
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            @ingridrdย  ย  Ahh! I read it and I love it! What will happen next?ย ย 

            The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
            http://www.encircledbygrace.com/

            #71859
            Ingrid
            @ingridrd
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              @kaya-youngย  THANK YOU!ย  And I love that seal…ย  ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

              I will post more parts after I get a few more people to read it.

              A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

              #71928
              Ingrid
              @ingridrd
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                To those of you who are interested, here are the next two chapters of the book.ย  I’m pretty sure the fourth chapter is kinda confusing, so if you’d give me some pointers there I’d appreciate it!

                https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-jzVzEBjTyvq5vKUBAGZ-0Lt4-_bWLJw1Uofs_59wmQ/edit


                @jenwriter17
                @kaya-young

                A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

                #71929
                Jenna Terese
                @jenwriter17
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                  @ingridrd *tries not to break critiquing hiatus*

                  *fails*

                  I just have to read this!!! Maybe I’ll put off the start of my hiatus until late May… is the whole book written and you’re just posting parts of it here and there, or are you still in the process of writing it?

                  I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                  www.jennaterese.com

                  #71931
                  Ingrid
                  @ingridrd
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                    @jenwriter17ย  The whole book is written, I just don’t want to overwhelm anyone with critiquing the entire story…unless you want to.ย  ๐Ÿ™‚

                    A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

                    #71937
                    Kaya Young
                    @kaya-young
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                      @ingridrdย  ย What!?! The whole book is written and you aren’t letting meย read err, critique it all at once? ๐Ÿ˜‰

                      This story is awesome! I thought that the first two chapters were suspenseful, but the ending chapter four really sucked me into the story. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

                      Have you written any other books and where can I buy them?!?

                      The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
                      http://www.encircledbygrace.com/

                      #71938
                      Ingrid
                      @ingridrd
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                        @kaya-youngย  Wow, thank you so much!ย  I can definitely post the entire book if you want.

                        Well, I have not completed any other full books, but the sequel to the one you’re reading now is in the works and I also have a Superhero WIP along with some short stories/novelettes.ย  ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

                        A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

                        #71971
                        Ingrid
                        @ingridrd
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                          @jenwriter17ย  @kaya-youngย  Thank you both so very much for putting time into commenting on this for me!ย  Would you like me to post the entire book here or…?

                          A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

                          #71973
                          Kaya Young
                          @kaya-young
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                            @ingridrdย  Umm.. Whatever you want to do, but posting it on here would work best for me. ๐Ÿ™‚

                            The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
                            http://www.encircledbygrace.com/

                            #71974
                            Ingrid
                            @ingridrd
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                              @jenwriter17 @kaya-youngย  Alrighty!ย  Here you go.ย  Thanks again!

                              https://docs.google.com/document/d/11AHdPPXbizqzep23-mmpjsj1HndllfhrEjVt5cOq1Oc/edit#

                              A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

                              #71975
                              Jenna Terese
                              @jenwriter17
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                                @ingridrd Awesooooome! ๐Ÿ˜€

                                I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                                www.jennaterese.com

                                #71977
                                Kaya Young
                                @kaya-young
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                                  @ingridrdย  ย Thanks! So far I’ve only read the prologue, and I am super excited to read all of it!

                                  The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
                                  http://www.encircledbygrace.com/

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