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April 6, 2023 at 11:45 am #139438
Ridley
Ridley held a hand against his throat, the laughter completely dead on his lips. He scrubbed furiously at his tears, body trembling.
And then…
Footsteps.
His heart pounded as he leapt to his feet, eyes wide in the darkness. The flecks of gold encircling the air grew thin, until they were nothing more then shadows on the wall.
Ridley’s hand touched against the cool stone behind him, ears drumming as the footsteps grew closer.
“C…Ce-…Ce?” His voice cracked.
A large shadow passed over the door in front of him. Extremely large…
It entered the room, casting it in darkness, looming over him. Ridley shook, unable to keep himself from cowering, like a child about to be punished.
His eyes went wide as saucers as a tall figure, at least 7 feet, stepped in, with large wings and dark, narrowed eyes.
A sharp tail slashed behind him, and in his hand he held what appeared to be some sort of weapon.
Ridley’s breath hitched, stuck in his throat.
CuuUuRiOUs CrEaTuuUrE…
CoUlD wE coNtRoL iT…?
Ridley gripped his ears, two voices inside now speaking with each other, completely ignoring the holder of the body.
No! We don’t have the amulet anymore! Be quiet! This isn’t the ti-
The gold flecks appeared once again, bonding together into thin lines, and then encircling the figure before him.
Ridley went couldn’t help but watch, entranced as the golden encircled the tall figure, wrapping around his wings multiple times, like chains. And then.
They pulled.
And Ridley winced.
Of course the man felt nothing. He couldn’t see them. But Ridley could.
Whatever chains were holding this man right now, were binding him, controlling his every action, Ridley could see them.
Could see how they made him move to their every whim…
Puppets on a string…
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#ProtectSebApril 6, 2023 at 1:03 pm #139452Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 RIDLEY!!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
(will he become one of my favorite antagonists ever??? It is a possibility 😂)
April 6, 2023 at 1:52 pm #139460Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin @esther-c @loopylin @keilah-h @light-warrior-pen (i think that’s everyone??? 😅😂)
I have a few charries I might want to add some villains, some antagonists, some just morally gray.
Soooooooooo…without further ado….who do y’all want me to add???
We have:
Hans, my main WIP(s) Villain
Adolphus, a morally gray antagonist that is later redeemed and is deeply traumatized by a broken past
Erich, an antagonist that has a broken moral compass and is out for revenge and thus will do almost anything to get what he wants
Jacques, a Frenchmen who has betrayed his country, his family, etc., to the Nazis from my WIP that takes place in Nazi-Occupied France
April 6, 2023 at 1:53 pm #139461@freedomwriter76 OOH I was gonna say Hans but since we haven’t met Jacques yet I say Jacques!
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#ProtectSebApril 6, 2023 at 2:00 pm #139462@freedomwriter76
Hmmmmm… Having a hard time deciding. Maybe Jacque, because he’s French? 😅🤣 Honestly I’m fine with any of them, they all sound cool.
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April 6, 2023 at 2:00 pm #139463Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 lol, I could do both as well, they’re from the same time period and all XD
But yea, I can do Jacques…he needs a lot of character development anyways 😂
April 6, 2023 at 2:02 pm #139464Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@kyronthearcanin lol 😂 I may do Jacques…I still need to figure him out anyhow, lol XD
April 6, 2023 at 3:28 pm #139471@godlyfantasy12 oh, and just to be clear, Rampart is actually standing on all fours. He’s even bigger when standing upright, but I assume the castle is too small for him to do that.
Also, I love the way Ridley can see the “chains” on his wings. (He has a lot of them, but sadly he’s not exactly a character that’ll be redeemed…..)
Rampart
A human.
Such a pitiful, small creature, clutching its ears as if listening to something deafening.
Strange……..there didn’t seem to be any noises.
The human winced like it’d been struck. Very odd…..he certainly hadn’t hit it. (Although if he’d wanted to, he could send it flying into the wall with only a flick of his tail)
It also didn’t seem to be comfortable here….no more than he was, at least.
He lowered his blaster. There was no need for it against this creature. “Hello, human. It seems we are both here against our own will, aren’t we?”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 6, 2023 at 3:33 pm #139474@freedomwriter76 Hmmm…..I’d go with Hans or Erich. They sound interesting……..and evil…..
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 7, 2023 at 10:40 am #139525@freedomwriter76
I vote for Erich and Jacques!
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April 7, 2023 at 11:58 pm #139586@keilah-h oops sorry! I think some parts of the castle are probably plenty tall enough since he’s around 7 ft. The place Ridley’s in probably being one of them. But more narrow halls maybe not.
Ridley
Ridley jumped as the man…or creature, whatever species or race he was, spoke.
Ridley had never seen anyone quite like him before…and he’d seen quite a lot of curious people of all sorts in Cirque.
Ridley stared at the man, crouched on all fours, like a dog, though he seemed perfectly comfortable in the position, like he was made for it. It made Ridley think of the contortionists back home.
“I…” Ridley swallowed, realizing how fry his throat was. He straightened a bit, though everything inside wanted to cower, like a mouse in a trap. “I’m Ridley.” He fingered the neck of his undershirt, feeling the eyes of the man-dragon examine him. “I don’t…do…do you know where we are?”
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#ProtectSebApril 8, 2023 at 10:29 am #139594Hey all! Finally back after a week of having no power than having family in town!😅 But I would love to join this Villian RP! I haven’t joined any of the RP’s yet so how should I walk into this one?
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
April 8, 2023 at 10:33 am #139596Go for it!! We’d love to have you! Or… er— your villain, that is. XD
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April 8, 2023 at 4:06 pm #139650@euodia-vision Ooh, go for it!
Rampart
“I’m-I’m Ridley.” stuttered the human. “I don’t…do…do you know where we are?”
“No, sadly.” Rampart hissed. “It’s too small to be an Imperial outpost….and too large to be a camp of humans, at least from what I’ve seen of them.”
But then again, maybe humans in different places had different camps.
This one talked…..normally they didn’t……
He flicked his tail. Ridley flinched.
“I have no reason to hit you.” Rampart forced his tail to stay still. “I’m looking for a dragon with silver scales, gray armor and more spikes than I have. I have…a score to settle with him. Have you seen anyone matching that description?”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 8, 2023 at 4:20 pm #139654 -
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