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April 4, 2023 at 4:54 pm #139274
@light-warrior-pen who is ur girl meeting?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebApril 4, 2023 at 5:11 pm #139282@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 All righty, that’s three votes for the “paranoid dragon”…..so let’s meet him! I won’t be able to RP as him yet, but I’ll try for tomorrow.
Name: Admiral Rampart (first name unknown)
Appearance and traits: A dark green and turquoise ImperialWing (sea dragon) with glowing yellow scales running down his sides. He wears a gray Star Wars Imperial officer’s uniform, but his glow-scales shine through sometimes. He wields a small blaster pistol, but since he’s the average size of a dragon [which is like twenty feet standing erect], it’d be quite huge to any human characters. A frostbite scar mars most of his right cheek.
Personality: Slightly cunning and manipulative, but not a genius. A bit paranoid at times; likely to snap at anything that startles him, even though he’ll likely be bigger than most other creatures here.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 4, 2023 at 5:13 pm #139285April 4, 2023 at 5:17 pm #139292The only picture I have drawn of him is that of his death….so, yeah……
But at least you know kinda what he looks like…or part of him…..
(I hadn’t drawn the frostbite scar yet when I took the picture, and it’s not the best quality…..)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 4, 2023 at 7:21 pm #139305I like the wings! And the webbed hands are cool.
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
April 4, 2023 at 8:05 pm #139315I might actually let Madeline have some of her powers, because without them she’s just a creepy little girl, which is kinda boring. But I don’t know, we’ll see.
Madeline
“The name’s Derek.”
Madeline grabbed the man’s hand and shook it enthusiastically, still smiling.
“Nice to meet you, Derek! I’m sure we’ll soon be best friends.”
She let go of his hand and then noticed him glance at Sam warily.
“Oh, that’s just Sam. Don’t mind him. He doesn’t talk anymore. But that’s ok. He’s good for keeping secrets.” As she said this, she gave Derek a wink. Sam didn’t move.
“So, Derek…” Madeline continued, looking around the room and rocking back and forth on her heels. “Is this place your home?”
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
April 5, 2023 at 10:52 am #139334Alright. 🙂
Derek
“Nice to meet you, Derek!” Madeline said enthusiastically. “I’m sure we’ll soon be best friends.”
Derek nodded, keeping his forced smile. He glanced over at the tall man. But maybe you and I won’t be great friends, he thought.
“Oh, that’s just Sam,” Madeline explained. “Don’t mind him. He doesn’t talk anymore. But that’s ok. He’s good for keeping secrets.” She gave Derek a wink. “So Derek,” she continued. “Is this place your home?”
Derek snorted. “Of course not. I wouldn’t live in a drab place like this.”
Madeline giggled. “Neither would I. Maybe we can help each other find a way out.”
He nodded. “That sounds good. Which way do we go first?”
Madeline cocked her head, thinking. “How about this way?” She pointed northeast of where they were standing. She took off, trotting down the hall and around the corner.
Derek caught up and was surprised at her quick pace. He opened his mouth to speak, but stopped when he saw what came around the corner. It was a dark wolf with blazing red eyes. Derek pulled out his gun when the wolf jumped back with a snarl. Its fur was on end and it eyed the threesome with caution.
Deciding it would be best to make more friends than enemies, Derek lowered his gun and slowly put it back in its holster. Something in its eyes made the wolf look intelligent, not just like any wolf out in the wild. “I won’t hurt you,” Derek said, taking a small step forward. “Only if you don’t hurt us.”
@kyronthearcanin, hope you don’t mind us meeting Eclipse. 😅Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
April 5, 2023 at 11:12 am #139336I don’t mind at all! Better for you to start it off than me. 🤣
If Azar had been in control, Eclipse was sure he’d be jumping up and down. Well, don’t just stand there! the spirit commanded. Say something! Honestly, you’re terrible. I should have picked Lumeo instead.
Humans, Eclipse thought with a sigh. Of all creatures...
The girl smiled at him. “Aw, Derek, it’s just a puppy!”
Eclipse’s ears flattened as Azar barked a laugh. “I’m no pup! I’m a hunter.” He paused and thought for a moment as the tall man gaped at him. “Well, I suppose I was a hunter. Now, not so much.”
“He talks!” the girl exclaimed. “Well, hello there. What’s your name? I’m Madeline.” She pointed at the tall one. “This here is Sam, and the guy with the gun is Derek.”
“Eclipse,” he replied. The man lowered his gun just a little further. “My name is Eclipse. Is this your pack?”
Madeline shrugged, still smiling. “I guess you could say that.”
They’re not wolves, Eclipse, Azar chided. Humans. Not packs.
Ignoring Azar, Eclipse nodded. “Are you trapped here as well?”
- This reply was modified 1 year, 7 months ago by Ava Murbarger (Solfyre).
- This reply was modified 1 year, 7 months ago by Ava Murbarger (Solfyre).
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
April 5, 2023 at 11:17 am #139339Wow, I couldn’t stop calling Sam a boy for some reason XD
I’ll go ahead and tag you, too: @loopylin
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
April 5, 2023 at 12:12 pm #139347@kyronthearcanin Thanks! The webbing on his hands is because he’s a sea dragon, so it helps him swim better.
@esther-c @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 Also there’s one detail I forgot about him. On the end of his tail, he tied a needle-sharp horn from a narwhal-like creature as a secondary weapon. He’s killed at least one dragon with it, and struck another’s eye out at a different time.
@godlyfantasy12 Mind if he meets Ridley? I’ll try to RP as him soon.Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 5, 2023 at 2:10 pm #139353@esther-c @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin
Rampart
His eyes blinked open.
Darkness…… and not an Imperial facility.
The two glow-scales on his temples brightened to give him some more light.
The structure didn’t seem to be made by any dragon, in fact. Many of the doors were rather small. He’d have to drop to four talons and crouch just to fit through many of them.
Which meant the CloneWings hadn’t captured him either. Good.
Although now he’d have to wait a bit longer before sinking his claws into those prophecy dragonets…..
An insane cackle echoed from a distant hallway, nearly making him jump.
He wasn’t alone.
His tail lashed as he stalked in the sound’s direction, intending to find and eliminate the threat.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 5, 2023 at 2:13 pm #139354@keilah-h yea he can meet Ridley! I’ll RP as him later 😊
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebApril 5, 2023 at 2:15 pm #139355@godlyfantasy12 Sure thing!
It’s kinda weird writing a character I kinda hate, lol. Maybe I’ll understand him better after this. Or maybe I’ll just keep wanting to stuff him down a reactor.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 5, 2023 at 3:54 pm #139362Yeah, for Eclipse, he’s sort of an antihero, so… I don’t have as much of that problem. I do, however, have a villain that really gets on my nerves, and so I figured writing about him in a castle would end up kind of crazy. 😅🤣
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
April 6, 2023 at 11:05 am #139436 -
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