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April 3, 2023 at 2:30 pm #139177
Oooh, Madeline sounds so cool!
I love how she’s so short and she has some super tall guy to do her every wish. 🤣
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
April 3, 2023 at 3:07 pm #139182@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
Actually, I’ll just make Maddie completely powerless since she isn’t in her own world. Also, I completely messed up and called the other character Ben. His name is Sam. I don’t know why I did that.
Sam
Sam stared at his hands. They were so… detailed. And warm. He was alive. And he was human.
Oh no.
He looked up at Madeline, who was also staring at her new body. She gave her dress a twirl and let out a high-pitched giggle. Then she suddenly stopped and smiled at him.
“We’re free, Sam. Isn’t this wonderful?”
Sam slowly nodded, his face expressionless.
“Come.” Madeline held out a hand to him. “Let’s go find some new friends to play with.”
Sam took her hand. Together, they began walking down the hall. A pit of dread grew in Sam’s stomach as Madeline skipped beside him and hummed a happy tune to herself.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
April 3, 2023 at 3:11 pm #139184I think this story is about 4 years old. And she just looks 7. She’s been stuck in a black and white cartoon world for at least a hundred years.
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“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
April 3, 2023 at 3:13 pm #139185Thanks! Yeah the height difference is really funny. I actually have this drawing that kinda makes fun of it.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
April 3, 2023 at 4:00 pm #139191April 3, 2023 at 4:01 pm #139192@godlyfantasy12 Sure thing!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 3, 2023 at 4:05 pm #139194Haha, yeah. Sam thinks he’s tall, but he hasn’t met your characters yet, lol.
And I made them humans instead of cartoons for this rp, btw.“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
April 3, 2023 at 4:08 pm #139196@loopylin Ha, yeah even as humans they’d be small….especially Madeline.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 3, 2023 at 4:09 pm #139197April 3, 2023 at 4:33 pm #139202@kyronthearcanin Thanks! Yours seems cool too! I love the whole fire spirit idea
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
April 3, 2023 at 4:51 pm #139204@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
So, since I’m having serious trouble deciding who to add, I’ll let you choose for me. Would you rather have a manipulative and fierce but slightly paranoid dragon officer who has a bone to pick with my MCs? Or would you rather have a sadistic and cruel head scientist dragon who enjoys torturing his own kind?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 3, 2023 at 5:03 pm #139205Dragon officer in my opinion!
"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"April 3, 2023 at 5:38 pm #139207April 3, 2023 at 5:43 pm #139208I think this story is about 4 years old. And she just looks 7. She’s been stuck in a black and white cartoon world for at least a hundred years.
Okay!! And cool! Also, I love the drawing XD it’s so cute!
#HugRikerSquad
April 3, 2023 at 6:23 pm #139209I should probably have my characters run into someone.
@esther-cSam and Madeline
A man suddenly jumped out and pointed a gun at the two of them.
“Don’t move.”
Sam tensed up and was about ready to grab the gun out of the man’s hand, but he froze when he felt Madeline’s cold hand on his arm. She smiled sweetly up at the stranger.
“Hello. I’m Madeline. What’s your name?”
@keilah-h Both sound cool, but I like the scientist.
@lightoverdarkness6 Thanks!“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
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