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April 2, 2023 at 3:47 pm #139058
Love your villain!
Thank ya! š
Iāll try to have my character in the next day or two.
Awesome!!
Ok! Great!
I donāt think Iāll have time to do this but Iām gonna stalk it if thatās ok. (because every once in a while I just need a ābad guyā to be mad at, you know what I mean? Itās strangely satisfying.) :0
Ok! Do you want us to tag you for every RP?
(Lol. There will definitely be many of them for you to be mad at. Especially if they start talking about how their trying to thwart their enemies [protagonistsā] plans and ruin their lives. š)
Oooh, Derek sounds like a very cool villain!! XD XD This is going to be so fun!
Thanks!
Yes, definitely!! šš
Write what should not be forgotten. ā Isabel Allende
April 2, 2023 at 3:57 pm #139062@esther-c @awsumfaith @keilah-h @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
First off, great start, Esther! š
Now for Eclipse… (I figure I’ll do somewhere else, cause he’s not a person XD)
Eclipse jumped to his paws, growling. He was trapped in a room with stone walls. Where had the forest gone? He checked the door. Locked. Smoke rose from his maw as he glared around.
You could always burn through the door, Azar said in his mind. Eclipse shrugged his shoulders, as if he could get this strange feeling off of him if he pushed hard enough.Ā Or not. Follow my advice, or don’t. It doesn’t matter to me. Of course, it will for you, when all your plans go wrong.
His ears pricked as a voice came from the other side of the wall. “Don’t move.”
Experimentally, he took a step forward. Nothing happened for a moment. Good, Azar said.Ā Well, at least now you know he can’t see through walls.
Quiet,Ā Eclipse snapped back.Ā Just… Just give me some fire, and we’ll get out of here. Azar didn’t answer, but a moment later Eclipse felt fire running through him. He opened his mouth and let out a stream of fire, letting it singe the wooden door black. When it was burned deep enough, he took a step back and barreled into the door.
He burst out into a hallway lined with torches, wincing as a large splinter tore through his fur. Hearing voices from a room to his right, he ran left, claws clicking on the stone floor.Ā I would’ve burned theĀ wholeĀ door instead of cutting yourself, Azar muttered.
Ā Ā Ā Well, you’re not me, Eclipse replied as he slowed down, turning a corner.
Azar chuckled. Not yet.
Pushing back an involuntary shiver, Eclipse kept walking. The burning feeling eventually subsided from his throat. So, you’re talkative all of a sudden, what do you know about this place?
What doĀ IĀ know? Azar asked bitterly. You actually want my answer now?
Eclipse rolled his eyes.Ā IĀ did ask you a question.
Fine.Ā Azar was silent in thought for a moment before responding. I don’t know much, but I can sense the fire in the torches. It’s like some kind of maze, if torches mean there are hallways.
Eclipse narrowed his eyes.Ā Then why can’t I sense them?
You can,Ā Azar replied slowly.Ā You just don’t know how.
Eclipse sighed, slowing to a stop. The voices were distant now.Ā It looks like I’ll have plenty of time. Show me.
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
April 2, 2023 at 4:11 pm #139066Whoa I really like Eclipse!! That’s so cool that he uses fire XD
Thanks!
Yw!!
Yes, definitely!! šš
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April 2, 2023 at 4:25 pm #139068Ok! Do you want us to tag you for every RP?
No, you don’t have to but thanks for offering!!
(Lol. There will definitely be many of them for you to be mad at. Especially if they start talking about how their trying to thwart their enemies [protagonistsā] plans and ruin their lives. š)
(Good. š )
He must increase, but I must decrease.
April 2, 2023 at 4:32 pm #139071April 2, 2023 at 7:11 pm #139113@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Ok, so I’m not likely to be on here as much, but I have a couple characters I might add. They’ll be dragons, so should I make them their actual size (six to seven feet on average, and that’s on four talons) or should I make them human-sized?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 2, 2023 at 7:12 pm #139114It’ll help when I decide who I want in. If I make them small, some of them will be less likely to want to manipulate the “smaller creatures.”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 2, 2023 at 10:52 pm #139127@lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-on-here XD
ok yāallā¦Iām really excited about this and I have some villains/antagonists/antiheroās I wanna put in but like I mentioned before theyāre from different timelines.
Character castle isnāt really a āMake Senseā kinda place anyway XD so would yāall mind if for this IĀ sortaĀ throw my timeline out the window?
The villains and such will still know the good characters maybe theyāreĀ fromĀ different times? I just really want to be more than one lol. It shouldnāt affect any of yāallās charries but I wanted to double check with yāall š
if so!!
I think Iāll start with Ridley and Kainda!
I REALLY WANT TO WRITE RIDLEY!! š„¹
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#ProtectSebApril 3, 2023 at 7:54 am #139134It’s good with me!! I’ve really wanted to see more of Ridley since you posted his mood board a while back! He seems to be a very good antagonist type charrie!!
And I ALWAYS love when those charries are redeemed!! š
Oooof…Kainda…
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April 3, 2023 at 11:58 am #139158April 3, 2023 at 1:47 pm #139168No, you donāt have to but thanks for offering!!
Ok!
Hmmā¦ I donāt know. You can make them their full size. That may be more interesting. šš
Go for it!
Write what should not be forgotten. ā Isabel Allende
April 3, 2023 at 2:10 pm #139172@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
I really want to add Madeline, but sheās a literal cartoon. Unless I made a human version of herā¦ *shudders at the thought*
Ok, yeah, Iām doing this.
Madeline: looks like sheās about 7 years old, about 3 and a half feet tall, wearing a plain white knee-length dress, long black hair tied into two low ponytails, empty black eyes, in her own dimension she can control reality but in the castle Iāll make her a bit less powerful than that (her powers are kinda vague, sorry.)
Ben: almost 7 feet tall, short black hair, freckles, wearing overalls and a T-shirt, ridiculously strong even though he doesnāt look like it, doesnāt talk, follows Madeline around and does what she says
@godlyfantasy12 Oh, yes! I really want to meet Ridley! And I donāt mind you messing with timelines.āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
April 3, 2023 at 2:16 pm #139173Ooof…Madeline sounds scary šØšÆ Cool too tho!
Which of your stories is she from?
#HugRikerSquad
April 3, 2023 at 2:20 pm #139174@lightoverdarkness6 Sheās from my one thriller/horror story. Iām hesitant to call it horror though, because thereās no gore or death and it has a happy ending.
āNothing says autumn like slurpinā apples.ā -my uncle
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