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April 1, 2023 at 5:08 pm #138990
@kyronthearcanin on the character castle u can do however many u like 😊 but I suppose it’s up to @esther-c since she has created this one
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#ProtectSebApril 1, 2023 at 5:10 pm #138991That’s what I figured. 🙂 It should be a very interesting castle XD
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April 1, 2023 at 6:36 pm #138994Sooo…. What if the villain is not-so-humanish but can talk??? 😅
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April 1, 2023 at 6:44 pm #138996Super original, but maybe they want to be the BEST VILLAINS EVER, or something like that. Idk. 🤣
🤣 Haha, yeah, they probably do want to be the BEST VILLAINS EVER Maybe they have fights over who is the ‘bestest’ XD
Hmmmmmmmmm…. Or MAYBE they have to work together to stay alive, because the castle is filled with weird monsters or something. I don’t know how this works so just throwing things out there.
Ooh, yeah!! Great idea!! Have them complete different challenges that forces them to work together! (Even tho they will probably not be too keen about it, but when does the charrie ever get what they want? XD)
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April 1, 2023 at 6:47 pm #138998Sooo…. What if the villain is not-so-humanish but can talk??? 😅
I’m not @Esther, but I think it would probably be okay! In the regular character castle, @Keilah-h has had dragon characters that can talk, and so has @Loopylin . And @godlyfantasy12 has a talking fox, so it probably is okay, but since Esther created this one she’ll have to answer 😅
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April 1, 2023 at 6:51 pm #139000Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@esther-c This seems like it’ll be a lot of fun!
I may try to join, but we shall see how everything goes 🙂
April 1, 2023 at 7:29 pm #139004We’re just too insistent on torturing our charries… Oh well, life isn’t fair sometimes. 🤣
Just some more information on this ‘villain’ so you know what I mean.
(And yeah I wasn’t gonna go first but it happened so ha XD)
Eclipse is a wolf with deep, fiery red eyes and thick black fur. He has three clawmark’s across his snout. While he likes to think through all his decisions carefully, he also has a temper. In the book he is known as Phantom because at night, he becomes smoke, and his eyes become fire.
Some background on that: Eclipse used to be good. He was on a journey to save his friend, Lumeo (also a wolf, with light gray fur), from a forest fire when he ran into the fire spirit, Azar, and was given two options. One, die (not so appealing XD), and two, become the fire spirit. Not knowing what this meant, and thinking that maybe then he could help Lumeo escape the fire, he agreed to becoming the spirit. Azar now resides in his mind, and while Eclipse believes he’s in control, Azar has slithered around in his mind for so long that he sometimes can’t tell the difference between their thoughts. They have agreed thus far that Eclipse only has to become fire at night.
Anyway, that was kind of long, but there’s Eclipse!
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April 1, 2023 at 7:29 pm #139005@lightoverdarkness6 @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @keilah-h @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
I’m glad y’all are interested!!
Ok, so imma try to answer all of your questions.
Villains, antiheroes, and antagonists are all allowed. They can be human, they can be half human, or not human at all, as long as they can communicate somehow with the other villains. You can put in as many as you’d like.
As for the motivation and such, maybe at first they are trying to work alone to get out of the castle. (Depends on you charrie’s personality) And then they find out they have to work together, but they end up splitting into multiple groups because they disagree on something. Idk. We can just start and see how it goes. 😁 Like the other character castle, you can make random rooms if you’d like or even weird monsters show up like Solfyre suggested.
I’ll start the RP. If I don’t get to it tonight I’ll write it tomorrow. 🙂
Does that answer everybody’s questions?
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
April 1, 2023 at 7:32 pm #139006April 2, 2023 at 2:14 pm #139040@lightoverdarkness6 @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @keilah-h @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Alrighty, everybody! I’ll write the first RP!! 😀
Let me introduce you to the one and only Derek Len!
Age: idk. Probably 40-something. But that doesn’t really matter. XD
Appearance: Dark hair slicked to the side; silver-blue eyes; slightly tan skin; silver/gray suit coat over a white shirt; gray pants; combat boots
I won’t give much backstory about him, because eventually, some of y’all’s villains will probably find out. 😏
I’ll write the first RP here and then I’ll post his reference pic. (This is gonna be really weird writing from his POV. 😂)
Derek Len
Derek woke up with a start. He looked around at the place he was in; it was a hall made completely of gray brick. From the faint light provided by the small windows close the ceiling, he could see the dust floating through the air. Armor lined the walls. The only noise he heard was his own breathing. Maybe the building was haunted…
His hand immediately went to his belt to ensure his gun was still there. Finding that it was, he removed it and held it by his side just in case. He slowly walked to the end of the room, his ears tuned to hear anything.
Why was he here in the first place? Maybe the insiders had done something to him… Did they use the *insert name of ancient power*? (Sorry, y’all. Don’t have a name for it. 😂) They couldn’t have. They didn’t know where it was… or did they?
His thoughts were disrupted by the sound of footsteps coming from behind. He pressed himself against the wall next to a set of armor. The footsteps came closer, as careful and silent as his own were.
Finally, they came close enough and Derek jumped out, pointing his gun at the person in front of him. “Don’t move.”
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
April 2, 2023 at 2:14 pm #139041Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
April 2, 2023 at 3:02 pm #139052Whew! That’s good. 😅 This’ll be fun/interesting.
Love your villain!
I’ll try to have my character in the next day or two.
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April 2, 2023 at 3:07 pm #139053@esther-c Oh, this looks fun! I might join in a bit.
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April 2, 2023 at 3:09 pm #139054I don’t think I’ll have time to do this but I’m gonna stalk it if that’s ok. (because every once in a while I just need a “bad guy” to be mad at, you know what I mean? It’s strangely satisfying.) :0
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April 2, 2023 at 3:31 pm #139056Oooh, Derek sounds like a very cool villain!! XD XD This is going to be so fun!
XDXD Yeah, I know what you mean! There’s definitely going to be some ‘bad guys’ for you to be angry at XD
Whew! That’s good. 😅 This’ll be fun/interesting.
😀 Yes it will be very fun, and definitely interesting XD
Ooh I like Eclipse! Can’t wait to read your RP! 😀
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I’m just imagining all the scenarios with different villains of y’all’s that I know of interacting…
This is going to be awesome and hilarious XD
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