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May 14, 2023 at 4:14 pm #143309Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12 thus, bc those were the “Aryan” qualities, certain people were considered to be “Aryan” enough to where they were not necessarily attacked (British, Irish, Scots, etc) whereas others were considered savages (Russians, Poles, Blacks, etc) and some considered as absolute enemies (Jews).
May 14, 2023 at 4:19 pm #143314@freedomwriter76 oh gosh….
Uh my mind went straight to Cap….that…makes a lot of sense XD
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#ProtectSebMay 14, 2023 at 4:24 pm #143317Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 yea, he fits the perfect “Aryan” look XD
also, I have noticed the fact that most top Nazis (Hitler, Goebbels, Goering, etc) didn’t at ALL fit the “Aryan” look😑
May 14, 2023 at 4:36 pm #143321Why hello there fellow people!
So I’ve been wanting to join the Villain Castle for a while but just haven’t known who to put in. (Which has led me to realize I really need to work on making my villains more interesting XD) but there are two characters that I’ve been wondering about. The thing is, they aren’t really Villains? They’re just assumed to be sort of harbringers of doom by most people.
Would y’all mind if I threw them in here?
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:May 14, 2023 at 4:41 pm #143323@princesachronicle22 Sure thing! I think we have some characters which aren’t totally evil. Mine are complete villains….but I don’t know about some of the others’.
@freedomwriter76 Ugh, he probably would.
If you want, you can start and I’ll add him in as soon as I can!
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May 14, 2023 at 4:43 pm #143325Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h ok!!!
@princesachronicle22 of course; the more the merrier!!! ❤️✨May 14, 2023 at 6:41 pm #143337Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h so, you know Hans, but for everyone else in the RP:
Name: Hans Theodore Baumann
Age: 56
Personality: Vain, prideful, arrogant, evil, cruel, sadistic, abusive, controlling, manipulative, calm, only gets ruffled when things are really wrong for him, quiet
Looks (i can’t post the reference pic 😭): Pale skin, blue eyes, mostly gray hair with blonde strands, wears an SS officer uniform with a Lieutenant Colonel symbol on it, a black SS uniform cap, tall black jackboots, and has a luger pistol on his right hip in a black holster
May 14, 2023 at 7:00 pm #143341HANS GRRRR
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#ProtectSebMay 14, 2023 at 8:07 pm #143356Totally, go ahead! Some of our characters aren’t purely villains, so yours should fit fine. As far as I can tell there are a lot of antiheroes.
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Oooh, I’ve seen some of Hans! XD I don’t like him obviously but he’s written well. Can’t wait to see him in the RP! 😉
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May 15, 2023 at 1:58 pm #143413@euodia-vision u wanna RP?
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#ProtectSebMay 15, 2023 at 2:31 pm #143421@freedomwriter76 okay! @godlyfantasy12 I was RPing right when you messaged 😆 how’d you know?
Erebus
Ridley’s pushback hadn’t changed Erebus’s initial assessment of the boy.
He was still lost, scared, and in need of… something.
He and Erich couldn’t force their help onto him.
Force never worked out for him anyway. It just led to pain and confusion. And this place, had him confused enough.
Erebus sighed.
He’d better let the boy determine his own next step.
“Well,” Erebus turned to face Erich, “I think it’s time we moved on.” Erich nodded his approval, shooting Ridely a withering look.
The boy continued staring at the ground, avoiding eye contact with the two men.
Erebus directed his attention to Ridley. “You are welcome to travel with me and Erich. I know you just met us, but we won’t kill you as long as you won’t kill us.” The sarcastic comment didn’t draw a smirk from either companion.
Ridley stood silent.
With a grunt and shrug of his shoulders, Erich began lumbering his way forward.
Erebus hesitated for a moment before going after Erich.
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 15, 2023 at 3:05 pm #143430@freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision
Ridley (TW: Not sure how to label this? Lol Ridley just has a rough go of it)
Ridley watched as the two stalked away, his hand still held to his wounded arm. He winced at the stinking pain.
Maybe he should’ve just let-
No!
He wouldn’t let himself be put in a position like that again…
“SsiIllY boY…WhAt oF WhiTe FaCE?”
Ridley blinked.
Cecily was different. She wouldn’t hurt him…
“And…sSuNfLoWeR…?”
The name made Ridley lurch forward, immense, stabbing pain sprouting from his heart, pushing into his throat. He gagged, and in an instant, the Golden Vision was back.
Specks flew like a flurry between his eyes, making him dizzy. He coughed, still gagging. Still in horrible, irreversible pain. He felt like someone was stabbing a knife into his heart, and twisting it.
Gold poured from his lips, and he wiped it with his fingers, almost feeling the smooth texture.
He shuddered violently.
His eyes blurred as he reached for his chest. His heart.
But he was met with the cool sensation of metal-not skin.
He looked down, able to make out the gold hilt of a knife, slowly forming from an open wound where his heart would be.
His stomach quivered.
He knew what would follow once the hilt was finished…
The chain that would bind him for the rest of his life…
The same chain he’d seen on that man earlier.
He tilted his head back, golden eye glowing, and let out a morbid chuckle.
Broken hearts were such nasty things…
Ridley breathed slowly, feeling himself hit the wall behind him.
Just as quickly as it had come, the pain faded, leaving only a dull thud in his chest and a ringing in his ears.
The vision remained, and he could still see the sickening, ever growing wound. The hilt of the knife being formed, and soon, the links of the chains to follow.
But the pain was gone.
That was something at least.
He let out a breath, closing his eyes.
What now?
Did he stay here? Alone?
To suffer?
To die maybe?
Which would take him first, he wondered.
Starvation?
Loneliness?
Or a broken heart?
He chuckled.
He turned his head.
Two chains dragged along the ground ahead of him…following after two figures.
Erich and Erebus.
Not surprising.
Everyone had chains. Or strings.
Should he follow?
Or just wait for the inevitable?
He sighed, rising from his spot against the wall, shakily. He took a few steps forward, deciding, since he didn’t have anything better to do, why not follow.
Perhaps they could at least help him get back to Cecily…
Maybe…maybe there he could at least die with some form of…peace?
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#ProtectSebMay 15, 2023 at 4:11 pm #143461AW RIDLEYYYYYYY 😭😭😭 Poor babyyyyyyy
@freedomwriter76 you wanna rp for the two bois and ridley joining them?
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 15, 2023 at 4:13 pm #143463Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision sure!!! @godlyfantasy12 awww, Ridley!!! 😭😭🥺❤️💔
Erich
He and Erebus continued down the hall.
That boy was too fearful.
Too…tense.
Same as Erich had been for a long time. He clenched his fists. No, he wouldn’t think about his past. He wouldn’t think about the people who had hurt him.
He heard footsteps and turned around to face Ridley.
He raised a half-smirk, even though it was forced. “Finally decided where to go?”
May 15, 2023 at 4:13 pm #143464@godlyfantasy12 Ha ha, if you don’t like him you’ll probably hate my guy too.
Speaking of which, here he is. @freedomwriter76 (I’m not sure if I need to tag anyone else?)
Dr. Royce Hemlock
Description: A male dragon, about the same size as Rampart (but not the same species). He has white scales with black lightning-bolt-like patterns marching in a line down his sides and green underbelly/wing membrane scales, and fairly large spikes running down his back. Also, he has brown hair and blue eyes. He’s wearing an Imperial science division uniform–sadly I can’t show you a picture, but once it works again I will. At the very least, I can tell you his clothes are a grayish color.
Also, this is kinda random, but while his right hand looks like a normal human hand but with claws, his left one is covered in black scales and a bit more like a talon. A weird defect, but not something most people pay attention to. Oh, and he can breathe fire.
Personality: Sadistic and cruel, can act evilly friendly if he knows he can get something out of it. He’s vicious to trapped dragons, but I’m not too sure about his fighting ability against a free one. He can kill humans quite easily though.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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