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May 1, 2023 at 3:26 pm #141837
@keilah-h @loopylin @esther-c @kyronthearcanine
Ridley
Ridley nodded, tugging on his high collar. He kept a wary eye on the little girl, Madeline, before turning back to Derek.
“I’d like to get home…if possible…” Ridley whispered the last part.
The voices in his head started to shriek, making his skull pound. He gripped his ears due to the onslaught of the voices.
“NO! We wIlL nOt gO BACK!”
“WE wIlL NoT bE ImPRiSonED aGaIN!”
Ridley’s nails dug into his head as the shrieking grew louder.
…..
“STOP IT!”
At last, after what seemed like ages, it subsided. He gasped, clutched his chest with now bloody nails.
Derek stared at him with wide eyes, face a mix of horror, fear and…
Also a bit of curiosity.
Ridley stepped back, face paling.
“I…I…” He stumbled, unsure of what to say. His one eye glowed and he shuddered as a violent ripple went down his spine.
Everyone was staring at him now.
Most had strange, confused looks on their faces…
But some…
Were more…curious.
A disturbing curious. (I mean…they are villains/anti-heroes…) Looks that reminded Ridley of his life before…
And the man he’d finally escaped…
He reached for his neck, and the object that no longer hung from it.
Before anyone could say, or do anything else, Ridley decided he was t going to take a chance…
Especially not with a Puppetmaster near…
And so…
He ran.
maybe he can run into Erich and Erebus? Or someone else’s villain? Idk
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMay 1, 2023 at 3:49 pm #141848@keilah-h @loopylin @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12
Derek
Derek watched as Ridley ran down the hall. He had a fleeting thought to chase after him, but he decided it was best to let him be.
Derek ran a hand through his hair and looked down at his dark combat boots. That kid… something was, not wrong, but different about him… and that something didn’t seem to be a good thing…
Derek felt his sympathy for the boy grow even more. He squeezed his eyes shut.
No…
Bayron was gone…
His parents were gone…
All because of him.
He knew what it felt like to want to run away… to leave it all behind… forget it… wish it had never happened.
Derek cast one more glance to where Ridley had run off.
He straightened his shoulders and went over to where the rest of the group was. “What do we do next?”
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
May 1, 2023 at 3:55 pm #141849@godlyfantasy12 wait a sec, Ridley has one eye? Did he lose it somehow, or was it like a mutation or something? @loopylin @esther-c @kyronthearcanin
Rampart
Ridley thrashed for a bit before stopping.
His little human nails apparently weren’t useless after all. He’d drawn blood with them while clutching the sides of his head.
His eye glowed like an ImperialWing’s glow-scales.
Odd…….
Very odd.
Rampart’s forked tongue flicked curiously like a snake’s as he contemplated this. The other characters eyed Ridley too.
The human turned and ran off.
Good. Now he was nobody’s problem.
One of the other humans–Derek, his name might’ve been?–stared down the hallway before turning to the rest. “What do we do next?”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 1, 2023 at 4:00 pm #141854@keilah-h no, lol sorry if that was confusing!! He had Heterochromia (different colored eyes!) one is a bright blue and the other is gold. The gold one glows sometimes. To keep from having to Specify (gold one) I just said his eye, because the gold one is the only one that glows anyway lol
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMay 1, 2023 at 4:02 pm #141857@godlyfantasy12 Ohhh ok. He has heterochromia–that’s so cool!
Maybe when you mention it, instead of saying “one eye” you say “gold eye?” It’ll be a bit less confusing, even if you have to specify a bit more.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 2, 2023 at 12:01 pm #141926@freedomwriter76 no worries girl!
Erebus
Erebus watched Erich’s ghostly face evaluate his next steps.
“Just keep your eyes up.” He encouraged. “And hold tight to our makeshift rope. I’ll catch you, again, if I have to.”
Erich smirked at the last comment, as Erebus dropped him a wink. “Oh, there won’t be an ‘again’.” He let out a deep breath and took a step forward.
Erebus watched his companion follow the same path he had taken, ending the treacherous crossing with a leap and sigh of relief as he landed at his side.
Erebus cheered and congratulated Erich with a slap on the back. The man gave him a weak smile.
The two of them turned and peered into the darkness in front of them.
Erebus felt his shoulders tense up. “Well, only one direction to go now… forward.”
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 2, 2023 at 12:22 pm #141927Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision thx girl, you’re so understanding and sweet ❤️❤️❤️
Erich
Erich looked down the dark hallway.
He nodded.
“Yes, forward.”
Truth be told, he wasn’t exactly ready to go forward into the complete darkness…but he had to.
Erich began walking forward. “Let’s go.”
@godlyfantasy12 Ridley can join these two if euodia-vision is good with it!!!May 2, 2023 at 12:37 pm #141928@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Oh, sorry! I must’ve missed when Godly asked that. 😅 But I’m up for Ridley joining us!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 3, 2023 at 12:51 pm #142057@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Erebus
Erebus walked by Erich’s side, as they went deeper into the darkness.
His heart beat in his chest. Darkness. Again. No light. Nothing. Just darkness.
He listened to Erich’s steady breathing next to him.
Surrounded by darkness, yes, but not alone… not this time.
Erebus smiled to himself, grateful to not be by himself. His heart swelled with a new warmth.
Though he was used to being alone in the darkness he felt more comfortable and safe by someone’s side.
Erebus’ thoughts were interrupted by the sound of pounding feet approaching.
Someone, or something, was running towards them.
Erich heard it too.
They both came to a stop, drawing their weapons.
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 3, 2023 at 12:51 pm #142058@freedomwriter76
your tag didn’t work XD
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 5, 2023 at 2:40 pm #142331Eclipse
Azar was itching to follow after Ridley. Eclipse could feel it. At least that would get us away from everyone else, he thought.
Azar let out a nearly imperceptible sigh, glancing around. But then we’d miss all the fun here, he replied. Honestly, there are too many decisions.
Maybe it’d be easier if you let me take over, Eclipse suggested. I bet they prefer the normal wolf to your smoke wolf.
Smoke wolf? Azar laughed. You know, you can be really annoying. Just let me do this.
Eclipse felt a growl rising in his throat. Listen, I didn’t ask for you to become a part of me. That was all you. And trust me, if I had the choice, you’d be gone already.
Azar’s tail lashed. Well, it’s too bad you don’t. I’m in control, and there’s nothing you can do about it.
Clearly done with the conversation, Azar turned to Derek. “I don’t know, but whatever you do, I’m in.”
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
May 5, 2023 at 4:42 pm #142372@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Godly, did you want to RP as Ridley meeting Erich and Erebus?
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 5, 2023 at 7:43 pm #142411@euodia-vision oh yup, sorry! @freedomwriter76
Ridley
Ridley gasped as his breath began to run low, his legs pumping as he ran.
Why had he done that? So stupid!
He turned to see if anyone was following, the only light in the dark, morose tunnel coming from his golden eye.
He returned his gaze ahead, slapping a hand over said eye, not wanting to alert anyone to his presence, though this drove him into further darkness.
He turned what felt like a sharp corner, jabbing his arm into it. He let out a sharp cry, eyes adjusting as torches lit the new space he entered.
He stopped suddenly, sliding to a halt as his eyes hit upon two figures-both human by the looks of them. He gasped, hitting his backside due to the sudden stop.
He spotted their weapons and his eyes widened. He crab-crawled a bit, shuddering.
Thankfully, the Golden Vision, as he had nicknamed it, hadn’t returned, allowing him to see the two normally, but that didn’t make them any less intimidating with their weapons drawn.
Out of the frying pan and into the fire…huh?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMay 6, 2023 at 4:42 pm #142452@loopylin @esther-c @kyronthearcanin
Rampart
The smoky-colored wolf stared down the hallway Ridley had run off to, but then turned to Derek. “I don’t know, but whatever you do, I’m in.”
“Same with me.” Rampart flicked his tail, glad there was no timid boy around to accidentally skewer, and then risk the wrath of everyone else.
Seriously, these humans….
“By the way, you haven’t seen any other dragons here, have you?” he asked. “There’s one I’ve been looking for…”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 9, 2023 at 10:52 am #142653@godlyfantasy12 no worries! 😁 love ridley btw
@freedomwriter76 do you wanna rp as Erich for them meeting Ridley?
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
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