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April 26, 2023 at 2:37 pm #141420
@kyronthearcanin He can’t breathe fire. Some of his scales light up though, and he can breathe underwater (think SeaWing from Wings of Fire, that’s what his kind is based off of)
@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @esther-cRampart
The little girl–Madeline?–hopped away from Ridley…
…and toward him.
“Hello!” she chirped. “I don’t mean to be rude, but I would like to know…what are you? You have such pretty scales. I’ve never seen anything like you.”
“I am an ImperialWing dragon.” he explained to her. “I’m also an admiral in my tribe’s navy.”
Actually, that wasn’t exactly true.
He had been that high once. Now he was looked down upon by much of the rest of his kind.
How he hated that little white dragon for her treachery!
He flashed his light-scales in annoyance, which glowed in ripples down his wings and tail and shined from underneath his uniform.
“Oooh,” said Madeline. “That’s really pretty.”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 26, 2023 at 3:36 pm #141447Oh, okay. I assumed it was something like that, just making sure XD
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
April 26, 2023 at 3:59 pm #141448April 26, 2023 at 4:36 pm #141473@godlyfantasy12 IDK, really……we’re kinda going randomly.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 26, 2023 at 5:53 pm #141533@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @keilah-h
Oki, I’m finally here!! Here’s the RP!
(Oh, and btw, Godly, I love reading from Ridley’s POV! Like how he saw the strings on Derek. Really cool 😉 )
Derek
Derek’s eyes roved the scene, trying to see anything out of place. What was he thinking? Everything was out of place! Nothing was normal right now!
He watched the boy, Ridley was his name, who stood agains the stone wall. There was something in his eyes… something Derek recognized… something he was all too familiar with…
Fear.
Derek swallowed. This was no ordinary fear. It was something much deeper. He felt a stab of sympathy for this boy. He reminded him so much of himself… Controlled by fear…
A single tears slid down Derek’s face. He took a deep breath, trying to ignore painful memories.
He slowly put his gun in its holster, and walked over to Ridley with careful strides.
Attempting to make eye contact, he asked, “You said your name’s Ridley?”
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
April 26, 2023 at 6:04 pm #141537@esther-c @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @loopylin
Ridley
The older man was stepping over to him. Ridley’s chest thumped.
He averted his gaze from the large wound that stuck from the man’s chest, the one only he could see.
He could only pray the ability would subside in a few moments…
“You said your name’s Ridley?”
Ridley nodded obediently.
“Derek.” The man outstretched a hand. Ridley took it, keeping his eyes low.
His heart twinged with pain, like it was being gutted. He bit back the pain, though everything in him wanted to cry out. To writhe and fall to the ground screaming.
He bit into his tongue, forcing it to bleed, trying to distract himself.
“ThE bOY’s hEArT iS sSstIlL trYiNg To hoLd…”
“YeSss…PitY…”
He jerked slightly, feeling uncomfortable. Like an outsider in his own skin.
He hated when they did that…
Speak as though he weren’t even there.
He looked up, giving one more glance at the sharp tool in Derek’s chest. In his heart.
And then…it disappeared. The gold around fluttering around him fading into oblivion, nothing more then specks floating in the air. An aura…letting him know it could come back at anytime.
But the strings…the chains were gone. He couldn’t see them anymore.
He let out a breath of relief, smiling for real this time, his single golden eye emitting a gentle glow in the dim tunnel.
He looked Derek in the eye, and then rubbed his neck subconsciously, feeling the absence of what once was there.
“How long have you been here?” Ridley asked, curious.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebApril 26, 2023 at 6:15 pm #141539@esther-c @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @keilah-h @esther-c (I think that’s all??? XD)
Eclipse
This, Eclipse thought, was all wrong. He was supposed to be escaping, getting out of this horrible castle, but all the others wanted to do was socialize. Including Azar, apparently, which might have been worse.
Oh, don’t be so grouchy, Azar said lightly. Honestly, these humans- and the dragon- are much better than your pack ever was.
Eclipse winced. They’re not my pack anymore.
Exactly. So you have nowhere to be.
Azar walked up to Rampart. Madeline and Sam stood in front of the dragon. “So, you’re an admiral? Don’t you need to be getting back to your fleet or something?”
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
April 27, 2023 at 12:48 pm #141590@kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @esther-c
Rampart
“So, you’re an admiral? Don’t you need to be getting back to your fleet or something?” The wolflike creature walked up to him.
“I should be.” Rampart hissed, his tail lashing. “Although there are other dragons who’ll take care of my job for now.”
More like take over my job for me…..
I was following orders! And those CloneWings ratted me out for destroying the Kaminoshocker cities. Who cared that the prophecy dragonets were down there?
I should be at the bridge of my Star Destroyer, commanding the StormWings. But now I’m stuck chasing down my former…colleague.
“Thanks for reminding me, wolf.” he muttered sarcastically, not exactly intending anyone to hear.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 27, 2023 at 2:55 pm #141604@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @loopylin
Derek
“How long have you been here?” Ridley finally asked after a slight awkward pause.
Derek tilted his head to the side and shrugged. “Just a little bit. An hour at the most.”
Ridley nodded.
The two were silent once again. For some reason, Derek was having a hard time being his friendly, charismatic self.
Maybe it was because this time, he actually cared… even just a little bit…
For over two decades, he had worn a false identity… hidden his heart from everyone, afraid it would be broken again…
That’s when he found it easiest to be friendly.
When he had ulterior motives…
“It’s weird…” Derek said, continuing the conversation. “This dungeon, or castle—whatever it is. I kinda just showed up here. I’m guessing your experience was the same?”
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
May 1, 2023 at 11:01 am #141822@freedomwriter76
Do you wanna RP as Erich?
(I feel like so many ppl have asked you to RP, so don’t feel like you have to today. XD)
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 1, 2023 at 12:14 pm #141823I might jump in here if I have time… is it just one group currently?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 1, 2023 at 12:29 pm #141824We have one big group and then Erich and Erebus are split off, at least right now.
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
May 1, 2023 at 1:41 pm #141825Feel free to have your villian(s) join @freedomwriter76 and my bois!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 1, 2023 at 2:50 pm #141827Yep, what they (@kyronthearcanin and @euodia-vision) said! XD
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
May 1, 2023 at 3:09 pm #141833Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision sorry this took so long…life is crazy busy right now 🥺🤦🏻♀️
Erich
Erebus began to move forward, moving along the unbroken edge, going as far as he could, without falling into the abyss, every step that could possibly be his last.
“HEY, it might be better if you jump!”
“Shut. It.” Erebus snarled.
Erich smirked.
For the last few inches, Erebus jumped…and made it across the abyss.
Erich cheered.
Erebus grinned and turned back around. “Your turn.”
Erich’s face paled. “Uh…right.”
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