Treachery Against the House of Fairwin

[Hannah]

@daeus

*looks over my reading glasses* 😛 may I ask a question? Okay good, Why did you write a cliffhanger???!!!!!!!!

*glares at my kindle trying to convince myself not to break it*
Other than not knowing what happens to everyone in the end, I enjoyed the story. 🙂 My stomach did do some flip flops a few times but then girls don’t normally relish battle scenes. 😉

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Daeus]

@salome01w4g Well…it was a mostly happy ending. Except for what it took to get there. And except for Sir Aldren.

🙂 🙂 🙂

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[Hannah]

@daeus
Hmmm…. well I guess they won.
Sir Aldren…. wait did he um (how do I ask with out spoilers…) *draws finger across throat* 🙂
I should know this, I finished it last night. Phew long day.
You should write a sequel.

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Daeus]

@salome01w4g Ah, a sequel. You know, I may someday actually write one. The thing is, I’d first have to do a major rehaul of TATHOF. I like the story, but I just read two chapters of it, and my writing style is way under my current standard.

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[Daeus]

If I do write one (which I may not), the plan is to make it about Destin going on a quest to find Sir Aldren.

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[Hannah]

@daeus
Haha, 😀 I wondered, I’m going through the course you teach right now and when I was reading I was like, “Hmmm this isn’t like what he’s teaching.”

That would be a really good idea. I think Destin was my favorite, although I did like Sestin.
So what was up with Sir Aldren?? The whole fire thing.

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Daeus]

@salome01w4g Yes, it breaks every rule I teach. 😛 Thankfully, my novel Edwin Brook is a lot better. I’m still learning to master the things I teach though. Mastery doesn’t come easy.

I’m actually planning a short story to replace Treachery right now. I figured Treachery would take too long to fix and I needed something else to offer as a free book in the mean time.

I actually don’t know where Aldren’s fear of fire originated. I generally don’t bother to imagine backstory that isn’t necessary to the story. It did, however, symbolize destruction to him. It represented what he could become, and he had a vague understanding that that was the case.

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[Hannah]

@daeus

Edwin Brook sounds a touch like The Counte OMC
Haha yeah I bet, some of the stuff in the lessons makes my head spin but it is very helpful.
Oooh fun!!
😀 Haha I do that sometimes. It was intriguing and was almost a small story in it’s self.
Ah! I just remembered what happened to Aldren. Man that was sad.

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Daeus]

@salome01w4g Yeah, EB is similar to TCOMC in a lot of ways, though the overall story is definitely different.

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