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January 28, 2025 at 11:22 am #196233
Oh, do you feel like I missed anything important that you would have wanted drawn?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:34 am #196234Yayyyy!!! Illustrations!!
(Even tho I already saw most of these haha. Great job!!)
Also, you can delete a forum???
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
January 28, 2025 at 11:36 am #196235Yes, I can!
It’s pretty cool!
So, you read LTBL, right?
Do you feel like I’m missing any important scenes? Are you disappointed that i didn’t draw something? etc.
Also, which one(s) are your favorite?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:46 am #196238@keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Okay, now I have some for The Veil of Night. So, there are a lot more, but I don’t believe all of these will actually make it into the book. I already scrapped ten of them, and I feel like some more will end up going. (I had 45 for LTBL, but as you can see, only like 16 actually made it to a place where I think they are keeps) So, all that to say, if you think any of these need to be scrapped, let me know.
Also, there are a few more I’m still working on.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:46 am #196239
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:47 am #196240
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:47 am #196241
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:47 am #196242
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:48 am #196243
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:49 am #196245
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:49 am #196246
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:50 am #196247
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:51 am #196248
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:51 am #196249
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
January 28, 2025 at 11:52 am #196250
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
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