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January 28, 2025 at 11:22 am #196233
Oh, do you feel like I missed anything important that you would have wanted drawn?
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:34 am #196234Yayyyy!!! Illustrations!!
(Even tho I already saw most of these haha. Great job!!)
Also, you can delete a forum???
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
January 28, 2025 at 11:36 am #196235Yes, I can!
It’s pretty cool!
So, you read LTBL, right?
Do you feel like I’m missing any important scenes? Are you disappointed that i didn’t draw something? etc.
Also, which one(s) are your favorite?
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:46 am #196238@keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Okay, now I have some for The Veil of Night. So, there are a lot more, but I don’t believe all of these will actually make it into the book. I already scrapped ten of them, and I feel like some more will end up going. (I had 45 for LTBL, but as you can see, only like 16 actually made it to a place where I think they are keeps) So, all that to say, if you think any of these need to be scrapped, let me know.
Also, there are a few more I’m still working on.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:46 am #196239No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:47 am #196240No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:47 am #196241No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:47 am #196242No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:48 am #196243No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:49 am #196245No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:49 am #196246No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:50 am #196247No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:51 am #196248No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:51 am #196249No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 28, 2025 at 11:52 am #196250No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
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