The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga

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    Ellette Giselle
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      And here are the rest.

       

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                              Once y’all have a chance to look and comment, I’m going to delete these.

                               

                              Also, that is all I did for LTBL.

                              I didn’t want the pictures to distract from the story, which is why they are fewer and far between.

                               

                              HOWEVER…. are there any scenes that were must haves for illustrations that I missed? If There are I may consider doing them.

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                                Have a few minutes to give some brief comments in a break in my class. I may have more to say later.

                                I tend to like illustrations that show the full body. Many of yours are close-ups of the upper torso. But that is a preference, so don’t worry about that. Overall these are fine!

                                I like the horse. He’s chillin.

                                Another favourite is the one of the prince.

                                Eric looks kind of like Kalmar.

                                The second last one: I don’t remember that scene. Who is the girl Aaron is carrying?

                                This will probably annoy you very much, but I’ve got to say it. Sabina’s hair in the last one makes it look like she has a cat ear. I can’t unsee it.

                                Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

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                                Ellette Giselle
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                                  Ugh.

                                  I do not like full body illustrations. They are so difficult! Legs are awful! At least I can normally hide them on girls because of skirts and dresses. But Guys….. ugh. So hard to do.

                                  Glad you like the horse. I love playing with angles. Oh yes, the one of the prince is one of my favorites. Along with Aaron and his sword and the one of Aaron carrying the girl.

                                  Huh. I guess maybe I got a bit of that style of art in my head. I was just looking at another drawing and Eric reminds me of a Wingfeather character in that one too. I did them on the same day. My mood changes the style I use. It’s kinda odd.

                                  The girl Aaron is carrying is just one of the orphan children that they brought in. It’s literally only mentioned in the sentence I used as the caption underneath, but I had the picture in my head and needed to draw it.

                                   

                                  Oh. My. Goodness. I just died.

                                  Come on man! Now I can’t unsee it either!! Hahahah! I wear that style a lot because my hair is so thick that i don’t like it all on my back when I wear it down, (which is like never) I wonder if it makes me look like I have cat ears too. lolololol.

                                  Oh man. That’s horribly funny.

                                   

                                   

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