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'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
Guess what time it is? It’s time for *drumroll*…
The Veil of the Night Book Feedback
Just a reminder that my feedback is just my opinion. You by no means have to follow it, but I hope it will help give you a better understanding of the areas in your book that do well and the areas that need some work. Please let me know if you have any questions.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
*dances around the room cheering!*
*Races back to laptop to read feedback*
YAY!!! SO EXCITING!!! I’m opening it right now!!!
(It feels like Christmas!!!!) lol
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
I had to run and do something before I could read the feedback. (oh the pain!)But I just finished it!! Thank you so much for all the time and work you put into this! These are some really great suggestions and even if some of them make me sigh and go, “oh dear, really?” they make sense and it’s just me cringing at the idea of attacking this draft for the 5th time.
Thank you again!
Some of your picture ideas were one I didn’t even think of! Like the first and last actually. The ones you think are must haves, didn’t even come to mind. I’ll have to do those!!!
I have a good deal of the illustrations done. Would you be interested in looking them over once I scan them in to the laptop? If you don’t have the time then that’s totally fine. I can ask my editor her thoughts. I would just be interested in the opinion of another artist.
Thank you again!
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
also, for anyone interested, I will have the cover soon! My artist just sent me an almost completed copy and after some adjustments I should be able to share it!!
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
*sings* Meeeeeeeeeeeeee!
'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
Well then, I’ll post the cover the minute I have it.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
Thank you again!
You’re welcome!
I have a good deal of the illustrations done. Would you be interested in looking them over once I scan them in to the laptop? If you don’t have the time then that’s totally fine. I can ask my editor her thoughts. I would just be interested in the opinion of another artist.
Sure thing! Would love to see the cover as well once you have it ready to share.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
Awesome!
Let me grab a few of those illustrations.
I can also scan the new ones in right now.
(I’m watermarking them just because I’m paranoid. Sorry)
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
Oh, do you want to see the ones from LTBL or TVON?
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
(I’m watermarking them just because I’m paranoid. Sorry)
Understandable. That’s why I created links to the artwork I shared yesterday instead of uploading them to Kingdom Pen directly, so I can revoke them later if I want to.
Oh, do you want to see the ones from LTBL or TVON?
Tough choice. Hmm… what about… both!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
Tough choice. Hmm… what about… both!
Haha! Sounds like a good plan.
I’ll start with LTBL.
Be as horrible as you can and rip into them. This is the point when I can change them if I need to, (or scrap them altogether) 😉
(Say nice things too. XD XD)
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
You know what. I’m double paranoid, so I’m gonna start a status update so that I can delete all these.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
@keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
(Nevermind, that doesn’t work)
Here are some illistrations for Let There Be Light
I’m open to any critique, feedback or suggestions.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
Guess what I just discovered…… I can delete forums! So I could delete this whole thing and remove TVON off of here once I have all the feedback I want/need.
Pretty awesome!
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
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