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Ellette Giselle.
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January 7, 2025 at 11:49 am #193909
Just wondering. Do you have a cover for this book yet?
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
January 7, 2025 at 11:52 am #193910NOO!! *sobs*
She’s still working on it. Maybe you could do some breathing down her neck for me. I’ve been doing it so much I’ve run out of breath. lololololol.
No, nothing yet. She said she’ll try to have it for me soon. I’ll let y’all know the minute I’ve got it!
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
January 7, 2025 at 11:54 am #193911Okay👍
(Also, apparently I am not allowed to just post a thumbs-up emoji with your tag, because I have already done that. Weird)
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
January 7, 2025 at 11:56 am #193912That is weird.
How long do you want before I start posting the next book?
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
January 7, 2025 at 11:58 am #193913How long do you want before I start posting the next book?
A month should be fine. But if you want to start posting earlier, that is also fine; I will catch up when I am ready.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
January 7, 2025 at 12:06 pm #193914Okay, I’ll look at starting in February. I have a novel I’m pushing to finish this month, so that should give me plenty of time to do that.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
January 22, 2025 at 1:07 pm #195733Am I still good to start the next book in February?
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
January 22, 2025 at 1:16 pm #195734Yes.
I finished rereading your book yesterday. I will try to get feedback to you soon.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
January 22, 2025 at 1:18 pm #195735awesome. I can’t wait!
I really can’t believe that you take the time to reread the whole book! Thank you so much!
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
January 22, 2025 at 1:20 pm #195736I really can’t believe that you take the time to reread the whole book! Thank you so much!
I find it helps me to remember things and notice smaller details I have otherwise missed. Also, I’m sitting around on the train with nothing to do anyway on my way to school, so why not?
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
January 22, 2025 at 1:23 pm #195737Well, thank you all the same.
The Veil of Night as always been my least favorite of the four, but most people tend to like it better then LTBL. I don’t remember if I asked you this, but since you’ve read both of them straight through now, which do you like best?
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
January 22, 2025 at 1:25 pm #195738Think I like Veil of Night better than Let the Be Light. I find Joseph more relatable than Aaron. I’ll go into more detail about this when I give you the feedback. I do have to go now and get ready for school.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
January 22, 2025 at 1:28 pm #195740huh. I find that so interesting that everyone likes this book better.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
January 23, 2025 at 11:14 am #195834Hii! Just popping in to see when the next book is going to be uploaded. 😁 Only about a week to wait!
Do all the titles rhyme with “Light” and “Night? Can we know what the next book is called and who it’s about yet?
'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
January 23, 2025 at 11:25 am #195835Yes!!! Only about a week! I can’t wait!!!!!
Hmmmm…. can you know the name and characters?
No.
I think I’ll just wait and let the suspense build. 😁
(You gotta let me have some fun) lolol
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