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Okay I’ve never actauly shared any of my work before but here I go. So I was supposed to write a one liner for school and low and behold this appeared on my paper. Suffice to say I ended up having to do something else for my teachers satisfaction.
The Lost Key
The black waves swirled around me.
These chains pulled me down.
I screamed to be set free.
Hands clung to the lightning crown.Sky’s colour, far from the dawn.
My heart had descend in this sea
Relics of my joy long begone.
Sunken deep was the lost key.@nicolerivers03 It’s beautiful!! Is there more of it? 😀
You can pronounce it however you want.
Yeah there is a bit more f it if anyone wants me to add it
@nicolerivers03 Yes!
The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
http://www.encircledbygrace.com/@nicolerivers03 This is pretty. I like it. 🙂
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
The Lost Key
The black waves swirled around me.
These chains pulled me down.
I screamed to be set free.
Hands clung to the lightning crown.
Sky’s colour, far from the dawn.
My heart had descend in this sea
Relics of my joy long begone.
Sunken deep was the lost key.
Agony as he grined and jeered
I should never have believed his love
He brought to life all I feared
The angles lamented from above
The clouds gather now in anger
Cruelly shackled now I weep
Yet his smile in my mind does linger
A part of my heart he took to keep
Glistening diamonds join with the sea
Black as night and hard as steel
I struggle my thoughts away from he
Never again I would let myself feel
His fingers had enveloped my hands
His blue eyes shone like the sun
He spoke of such distant lands
Smiling even as he raised the gun
He sighed unable to carry out the deeds
So instead he locked me in living hell
Blood on his brow, a string of beads
And here I live cast under his evil spell.
@nicolerivers03 Wow! that’s really interesting. Nice rhyme structure!
The Kingdom has been torn asunder...
http://www.encircledbygrace.com/@nicolerivers03 Whoa! That is cool!
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
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@nicolerivers03 Ooh…it’s haunting. I like haunting poetry.
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