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October 23, 2017 at 3:55 pm #49546
@daeus two things:
1) Idk if you meant to share in edit mode, crazy things can happen with brothers who like to mess up my computer tabs,
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2) Would you be okay if I downloaded it as a EPUB or PDF to put on my kindle?
I have a really hard time reading stuff on a 19″ screen. π (Unless I’m writing, or not required to concentrate for long time periods.)~I donβt know what Iβm doing~
October 23, 2017 at 4:03 pm #49547@salome01w4g Sure, you can read it on your kindle.
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October 23, 2017 at 4:11 pm #49552@daeus okay perfect!
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October 23, 2017 at 4:24 pm #49554@daeus Yup, one week should do it! I’m looking forward to reading this! Do you want me to do what I did last time or something totally different? And I shall click the ‘here’ thing.
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Inspiration<October 23, 2017 at 4:38 pm #49557@jess-penrose That would be great. Yep, basically what you did before.
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October 23, 2017 at 6:19 pm #49565Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@daeus Unfortunately, I’ve got a ton of stuff goin’ on right now, so I’ll have to pass right now. Thx for tagging me, though. XD
October 23, 2017 at 9:44 pm #49637@daeus All right. Keep in mind I recently had to stop reading Perelandra from Lewis’ space trilogy because it got too creepy, but that doesn’t usually happen for me. But I’m learning to stop reading if I can’t handle it, so just fair warning. π
Currently reading Les Miserables
October 24, 2017 at 6:45 am #49675@perfectfifths Great. That’s a very good discipline to have. If you want to sign up, just contact me through the link I provided earlier on in this thread.
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October 24, 2017 at 7:43 am #49676@Daeus Ergh! I JUST remembered that I leave Friday for a camping trip. π (Man, how in the world did I forget that?!) Iβll be gone for a couple days so I wouldnβt be able to make the deadline.
Iβm afraid I must withdraw my offer. π
But best of luck to you with the story!*is probably geeking out about something*
October 24, 2017 at 9:35 am #49682Anonymous- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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I will read it! You should already have my contact info.
October 24, 2017 at 11:21 am #49683@perfectfifths Perelandra was really creepy but tbh it had a good ending.
@daeus I read it last night , should I leave comments on the GG Doc or how do you want feed back?~I donβt know what Iβm doing~
October 24, 2017 at 11:31 am #49686@jadamae Great! Just contact me through the link I posted earlier and I’ll get it to you.
@salome01w4g The google doc would be fine.π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’π’
October 24, 2017 at 11:39 am #49687@daeus okay! Get ready, π lol
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October 24, 2017 at 12:27 pm #49694@daeus I finished commenting on part one. I’d finish it all right now but I have some other stuff I need to get done. The story is very interesting, and I really like the way you used Aztec culture to tell the story, it added a lot of mystery and intrigue to it.
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