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  • #49546
    Hannah
    @salome01w4g
      • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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      @daeus two things:
      1) Idk if you meant to share in edit mode, crazy things can happen with brothers who like to mess up my computer tabs,
      and
      2) Would you be okay if I downloaded it as a EPUB or PDF to put on my kindle?
      I have a really hard time reading stuff on a 19″ screen. πŸ˜€ (Unless I’m writing, or not required to concentrate for long time periods.)

      ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

      #49547
      Daeus
      @daeus
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        @salome01w4g Sure, you can read it on your kindle.

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        #49552
        Hannah
        @salome01w4g
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          @daeus okay perfect!

          ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

          #49554
          J.A. Penrose
          @jess-penrose
            • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
            • Total Posts: 377

            @daeus Yup, one week should do it! I’m looking forward to reading this! Do you want me to do what I did last time or something totally different? And I shall click the ‘here’ thing.

            Writer | Freelance Editor
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            Daeus
            @daeus
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              @jess-penrose That would be great. Yep, basically what you did before.

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              #49565
              Anonymous
                • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
                • Total Posts: 1330

                @daeus Unfortunately, I’ve got a ton of stuff goin’ on right now, so I’ll have to pass right now. Thx for tagging me, though. XD

                #49637
                Louise Fowler
                @perfectfifths
                  • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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                  @daeus All right. Keep in mind I recently had to stop reading Perelandra from Lewis’ space trilogy because it got too creepy, but that doesn’t usually happen for me. But I’m learning to stop reading if I can’t handle it, so just fair warning. πŸ˜›

                  Currently reading Les Miserables

                  #49675
                  Daeus
                  @daeus
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                    @perfectfifths Great. That’s a very good discipline to have. If you want to sign up, just contact me through the link I provided earlier on in this thread.

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                    #49676
                    Gracie
                    @graciegirl
                      • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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                      @Daeus Ergh! I JUST remembered that I leave Friday for a camping trip. πŸ˜• (Man, how in the world did I forget that?!) I’ll be gone for a couple days so I wouldn’t be able to make the deadline.
                      I’m afraid I must withdraw my offer. πŸ˜”
                      But best of luck to you with the story!

                      *is probably geeking out about something*

                      #49682
                      Anonymous
                        • Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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                        I will read it! You should already have my contact info.

                        #49683
                        Hannah
                        @salome01w4g
                          • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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                          @perfectfifths Perelandra was really creepy but tbh it had a good ending.

                          @daeus
                          I read it last night , should I leave comments on the GG Doc or how do you want feed back?

                          ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

                          #49686
                          Daeus
                          @daeus
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                            @jadamae Great! Just contact me through the link I posted earlier and I’ll get it to you.


                            @salome01w4g
                            The google doc would be fine.

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                            #49687
                            Hannah
                            @salome01w4g
                              • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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                              @daeus okay! Get ready, πŸ˜‰ lol

                              ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

                              #49694
                              Hannah
                              @salome01w4g
                                • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                                • Total Posts: 991

                                @daeus I finished commenting on part one. I’d finish it all right now but I have some other stuff I need to get done. The story is very interesting, and I really like the way you used Aztec culture to tell the story, it added a lot of mystery and intrigue to it.

                                ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

                                #49709
                                NC Stokes
                                @daughteroftheking
                                  • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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                                  @daeus I. Want. To. Do. This. So badly!!! But, I’m afraid I just don’t have the time. *is sad*
                                  Oh, by the way, I started reading Fools in the Darkness, and I’m enjoying it muchly!

                                  Blog: https://weridasusual.home.blog/

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