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January 16, 2018 at 5:16 pm #60414
If you’re still looking for readers, @daeus , I’m more than willing.Β My local librariesΒ have been a desert lately, so I’m good and bored and full of unrealistically high expectations.
Which means I’m ripe for giving criticism– er, feedback. π π
- This reply was modified 6 years, 9 months ago by Mallory O'Bier.
January 16, 2018 at 6:10 pm #60423@overcomer Great. π
Here’s a doc for you.Β https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BIHK8v-ag07-tPraj6QWrbf_BVN2P_PjySIw87Ljfyg/edit?usp=sharing
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January 17, 2018 at 2:03 pm #60484@Daeus Ahh, I remember that post! It was intriguing. I’d like to do it, unless you’re already too swamped with beta-readers, in which case I’d still want to just read it. ;P
January 17, 2018 at 2:20 pm #60485@emma-flournoy Sure. You can share Mallory’s doc if you want. π
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January 17, 2018 at 3:09 pm #60488@Daeus OK.
@Overcomer If you see an Elizabeth Flournoy on your doc then, that’s me, using one of my sisters’ account because I don’t have one. Just so you’re warned, it’s not an intruding bot or anything. π And since it’s technically yours first, if you want I can wait to beta-read it ’til you’ve already done so, ’cause that’d be totally fine. I know sometimes it’s more difficult to form your own opinions on something when you see a bunch of someone else’s already, and I wouldn’t mind in the least either way.January 18, 2018 at 6:03 pm #60633@emma-flournoy You know what, it’s no trouble. Have your own doc.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OAqB7pb5gPIiym4MdPWFI4vh6YuODlRFQjYcPPWUUpc/edit?usp=sharing
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January 18, 2018 at 9:01 pm #60649I’m up for it if you still need readers, @Daeus. I know you’ve already got a lot of people, so if not, that’s totally fine.
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January 19, 2018 at 1:19 pm #60732@Daeus Heh, all right. Thanks, I shall begin.
January 19, 2018 at 10:01 pm #60789@daeus if you need readers still, I’m in. Like Mallory my library has been dry of anything to read.
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January 23, 2018 at 9:03 pm #61169Thanks for sharing your story with me, @daeus .Β It’s beautiful, and I enjoyed reading it very much.Β You should definitelyΒ publish it sometime. π
January 23, 2018 at 9:40 pm #61180Thanks,Β @overcomer π Β I plan to soon.
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