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  • #60414
    Mallory O’Bier
    @overcomer
      • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
      • Total Posts: 550

      If you’re still looking for readers, @daeus , I’m more than willing.Β  My local librariesΒ have been a desert lately, so I’m good and bored and full of unrealistically high expectations.

      Which means I’m ripe for giving criticism– er, feedback. πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚

      #60423
      Daeus
      @daeus
        • Rank: Chosen One
        • Total Posts: 4238

        @overcomer Great. πŸ˜€

        Here’s a doc for you.Β https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BIHK8v-ag07-tPraj6QWrbf_BVN2P_PjySIw87Ljfyg/edit?usp=sharing

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        #60484
        Emma Flournoy
        @emma-flournoy
          • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
          • Total Posts: 1352

          @Daeus Ahh, I remember that post! It was intriguing. I’d like to do it, unless you’re already too swamped with beta-readers, in which case I’d still want to just read it. ;P

          #60485
          Daeus
          @daeus
            • Rank: Chosen One
            • Total Posts: 4238

            @emma-flournoy Sure. You can share Mallory’s doc if you want. πŸ™‚

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            #60488
            Emma Flournoy
            @emma-flournoy
              • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
              • Total Posts: 1352

              @Daeus OK.


              @Overcomer
              If you see an Elizabeth Flournoy on your doc then, that’s me, using one of my sisters’ account because I don’t have one. Just so you’re warned, it’s not an intruding bot or anything. πŸ˜‰ And since it’s technically yours first, if you want I can wait to beta-read it ’til you’ve already done so, ’cause that’d be totally fine. I know sometimes it’s more difficult to form your own opinions on something when you see a bunch of someone else’s already, and I wouldn’t mind in the least either way.

              #60633
              Daeus
              @daeus
                • Rank: Chosen One
                • Total Posts: 4238

                @emma-flournoy You know what, it’s no trouble. Have your own doc.

                https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OAqB7pb5gPIiym4MdPWFI4vh6YuODlRFQjYcPPWUUpc/edit?usp=sharing

                 

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                #60649
                LivGiordano
                @livgiordano
                  • Rank: Wise Jester
                  • Total Posts: 86

                  I’m up for it if you still need readers, @Daeus. I know you’ve already got a lot of people, so if not, that’s totally fine.

                  www.livforhim.wordpress.com

                  #60732
                  Emma Flournoy
                  @emma-flournoy
                    • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
                    • Total Posts: 1352

                    @Daeus Heh, all right. Thanks, I shall begin.

                    #60789
                    Hannah
                    @salome01w4g
                      • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                      • Total Posts: 991

                      @daeus if you need readers still, I’m in. Like Mallory my library has been dry of anything to read.

                      ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

                      #61169
                      Mallory O’Bier
                      @overcomer
                        • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                        • Total Posts: 550

                        Thanks for sharing your story with me, @daeus .Β  It’s beautiful, and I enjoyed reading it very much.Β  You should definitelyΒ publish it sometime. πŸ™‚

                        #61180
                        Daeus
                        @daeus
                          • Rank: Chosen One
                          • Total Posts: 4238

                          Thanks,Β @overcomer πŸ™‚ Β I plan to soon.

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