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Thanks!! I’m glad it’s working, I honestly don’t even know what I did lol. Warrain is based a lot on Overwatch, which I’ve played a lot before, so maybe it’s coming from experience and that’s how. (It’s still a very different game though.)
I sure like Cole.
When’s Alec coming back? he was my favorite!! *puppy whimper*
*happy author faces*
Alec gets his own (brief) chapter in Chapter 13! 😁
'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
WHAT! NO!! A character like Alec needs a lot more spotlight!!!
He also needs to die.
I WANNA READ CHAPTER 13!!
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That’s not his only chapter, just the next one when he appears… I think.
He also needs to die.
That sounds contradictory, lol.
'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
no, it makes perfect sense.
He’s an awesome character and I wanna see him more.
He’s my favorite so I want him to die.
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He’s my favorite so I want him to die.
No wonder you kill off so many characters. 😅
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Lolol
'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
That title was given to me by a very distressed Highscribe and I bare it proudly.
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Poor Highscribe. What did you do to her?
'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
NOTHING! XD
I just told someone to kill off a character that she happened to like……
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