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Oh, definitely. I was just curious about the rights of Canada’s government compared to ours. They seem to be very close.
“I like good strong words that mean something!"
The story is looking really good so far, although I’m a little confused by Cole. Is he meant to be really smart, but doesn’t necessarily care about school? Sorry, I just need a little clarification. Each character is good though, I particularly find Alec interesting.
“Our house is full of ducks!!!!”
Is he meant to be really smart, but doesn’t necessarily care about school?
You nailed it! Is that enough description, or do you want me to try to elaborate? 😜 And don’t worry, you’re good.
Awesome, thank you! Yeah, Alec is one of my favorites. 🥰
By the way, are you planning to post a new chapter of your WIP soon? I’m looking forward to it. 😉
“I like good strong words that mean something!"
You nailed it! Is that enough description, or do you want me to try to elaborate? 😜 And don’t worry, you’re good.
Thanks, and I think it’s fine because you don’t have to explicitly state it. Is there a reason why, or are you getting to that?
Awesome, thank you! Yeah, Alec is one of my favorites. 🥰
Your welcome. Is he going to have another POV (please say yes)?
By the way, are you planning to post a new chapter of your WIP soon? I’m looking forward to it. 😉
Thank you! I was thinking about that today and forgot, but I’ll probably post the next tomorrow.
“Our house is full of ducks!!!!”