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    hybridlore
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      @linus-smallprint

      Oh, definitely. I was just curious about the rights of Canada’s government compared to ours. They seem to be very close.

      “I like good strong words that mean something!"

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      TheShadow
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        @hybridlore

        The story is looking really good so far, although I’m a little confused by Cole. Is he meant to be really smart, but doesn’t necessarily care about school? Sorry, I just need a little clarification. Each character is good though, I particularly find Alec interesting.

        “Our house is full of ducks!!!!”

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        hybridlore
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          @theshadow

          Is he meant to be really smart, but doesn’t necessarily care about school?

          You nailed it! Is that enough description, or do you want me to try to elaborate? 😜 And don’t worry, you’re good.

          Awesome, thank you! Yeah, Alec is one of my favorites. 🥰

          By the way, are you planning to post a new chapter of your WIP soon? I’m looking forward to it. 😉

          “I like good strong words that mean something!"

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          TheShadow
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            @hybridlore

            You nailed it! Is that enough description, or do you want me to try to elaborate? 😜 And don’t worry, you’re good.

            Thanks, and I think it’s fine because you don’t have to explicitly state it. Is there a reason why, or are you getting to that?

            Awesome, thank you! Yeah, Alec is one of my favorites. 🥰

            Your welcome. Is he going to have another POV (please say yes)?

            By the way, are you planning to post a new chapter of your WIP soon? I’m looking forward to it. 😉

            Thank you! I was thinking about that today and forgot, but I’ll probably post the next tomorrow.

            “Our house is full of ducks!!!!”

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