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Thanks girl!
Glad you like them! I’m still angry from the last time the protection squad took Kaine XD (jk)
Ouch!
Oh, you said… REUBEN?!! 🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰🥰
I’d love to read it if you finish it! 🥺
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@freedomwriter76
XD yep… I do a lot of thinking writing…
Yep, a loooot going on at once. And while that is going on, Kaine is trying to get to Jonathan (mailman– people seem to forget who he is lol) ‘s place to be somewhere safe, but he doesn’t know that Kendrick is currently there (also a orphan, jonathan takes care of them) and big spoiler Kendrick is the guy who kinda accidentally hurt Everly… yeah. But he’s really just a very broken boi and didn’t want to hurt anyone. Honestly Kaine’s arc might be the most complete one I have yet, it just kinda comes around full circle.
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@mineralizedwritings You are sooooo welcome, girl!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Of course!!! They’re so amazing, as are all of your charries! 😍 And lol, I understand XD The Protection Squad has stolen multiple of my charries…😂
Yessss, I said Reuben!!! 😍😍😍
I will definitely share it with you when I finish it!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰
Lol…same…XD😂😂😂
Uh oh…I see conflict coming 0_o
Kaine and Leon would probably relate on some stuff XD
@freedomwriter76
Well I guess we can rest assured they are sitting in piles of floof and drinking hot choco.
Can’t wait to see it!
Yep… and it’s just when you think his arc might be completing itself too. He just trusted Layson to be the one to go check on Everly when they were worried about her safety.
Honestly the Kaine Kendrick situation is pretty similar to the Riker Leon situation… it’s a little different, but yeah… our poor bois. XD
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Lol, I suppose we can XD They are safe, that is what matters. ❤️
😁 Can’t wait to share it!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Uh oh…poor Kaine 😭
It is!!! XD Yessss, our poor, precious bois!!! 😭😭😭
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*dies* I’ve never done that for my writing, but my siblings do it for articles they have to read for school and it drives me nuts. Whether they’re reading an emotional death scene or a wonderful love story it’s the same tone for everything. 😂 I’ve never thought of using that for writing, I’ll have to try that out.
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@freedomwriter76
We just finished our WWII unit in my AP Euro class and it made me think about you since you are writing a WWII WIP. When within the war is it set (more like start)?
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AHHH I LOVE IT!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍 JARED!!! UGH THE BABY 😭😭😭 Ah I want to read it so bad now!!
Now, I have a question for you!
Other than the villain (aka Vance! XD) who is your least favorite character in your main WIP??? 😏
Oof, girl!! That’s such a hard question! 😅😂 I love all my babies!!!
But…ugh I wish I could say Vance 😅…or one of Vance’s cronies XDXD but since I can’t…maybe Lyla?
I know, it’s mean 😅 But I just haven’t developed her very much, and I don’t know her personality very well yet.
Now who’s your least favorite, in any of your WIPs?
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@joy-calle
Oh my gosh XDXD No I haven’t, but that sounds hilarious and very irritating! I use Google Docs, so idk if it works on there. But good luck on your editing!! I know you’ll do great, and the small amount that I’ve read about your book, it sounds amazing! ❤❤❤
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We just finished our WWII unit in my AP Euro class and it made me think about you since you are writing a WWII WIP. When within the war is it set (more like start)?
Ooh, cool!!! 😁 Lots of fun. 🙂 The main one (and most of them, for that matter) starts in April 1944 and (though some months are skipped…XD) ends in January 1946.
It’s going to be a long novel…that much is for certain 😂
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AHHH I LOVE IT!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍 JARED!!! UGH THE BABY 😭😭😭 Ah I want to read it so bad now!!
AWW, THANKS GIRL!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ IKR!? 😢😭❤️🥰😢😭 Aww, I’m glad!!! (but I also must FOCUS on my Historical novels…XD)
Oof, girl!! That’s such a hard question! 😅😂 I love all my babies!!!
But…ugh I wish I could say Vance 😅…or one of Vance’s cronies XDXD but since I can’t…maybe Lyla?
I know, it’s mean 😅 But I just haven’t developed her very much, and I don’t know her personality very well yet.
I know it’s hard…XD It’s not mean! You just don’t know her as well yet, and I totally understand that!!! 🥰 But interesting though!!!
Now who’s your least favorite, in any of your WIPs?
We’ll go on ahead and take Hans/Frida/Felix/Hitchens/Franz out of this question…😂😂😂
(also…I have SO MANY to choose from!!! XD)
Much as I do love him, my least favorite charrie that’s not a super evil villain might have to be Erich…😅 Don’t get me wrong, I love him too, but he’s SOOOOO ANNOYING in Freedom’s Fire, and, like, he’s pretty mean to Leon and other men in the camp, and he’s really not nice to Riker for a long time 😬
Thankfully he gets redeemed though 😉
For side characters, Annalise, definitely Annalise is my least favorite…that girl is wayyyy too full of herself 🤦♀️
I may have once said Adolphus or Dietrich…but I love them so much now XD❤️🥰
And as for villains, Frida is MOST DEFINETELY my least favorite, that is for CERTAIN!
How are you doing today, girl?🥰🥰🥰
@freedomwriter76
Oh cool. So since it is 1944 the allies have started winning. Does this play into the story (I assume it does but how is more my question)?
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@otherworldlyhistorian Thanks ❤️ Ahh, I haven’t really put a whole bunch of thought into that fact, but I do know that it makes the officers/guards at the camp more tense, especially after D-Day happens, punishments are getting harsher, (that’s also partially because Hans takes over at some point 😅) everyone is more tense about “traitors” and whatnot, things like that…probably food shortages too…
…honestly, I know it DOES make a difference, but I don’t fret about it a whole lot, figuring out how it affects everything…😅 But I’m also only in (technically) my first draft, so…🤷♀️
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I was just wondering. I think that the war has basically turned against Hitler at that point. If I remember correctly the war is on two fronts at the beginning of 1944 because the Soviets are coming from the west and the allies from the south (through Italy). Where within Germany is your story set? Also since the date of 1946 is the end are you going to be tying the beginnings of the cold war/Nuremberg trials in?
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