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March 18, 2023 at 5:21 pm #137537
Sorry to barge in, but I totally understand the whole ‘hiding in your room’ thing right now. It feels kind of wrong and almost claustrophobic, but sometimes that’s a really hard cycle to get out of. If you do it a lot, I recommend going outside, or taking a walk, or somewhere you can let your thoughts float around, instead of sticking them in a box. 🙂
“Everything is a mountain”
March 18, 2023 at 5:24 pm #137538Thanks for the encouragement girl! 😬💗
Our neighborhood isn’t safe, so my only other option is to walk the halls of our building which idk I don’t really like, or run up and down the stairs. I actually have a pretty nice room thank goodness lol. I might be able to walk around outside in our yard but I don’t like going through the hassle of telling people where I’m going to be (we have to take bear spray with us just in case there’s bad people idk)
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 18, 2023 at 5:33 pm #137539Not sure what happened to my emoji’s there XD
Didn’t mean for the 😬 face lol
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 18, 2023 at 5:34 pm #137540@freedomwriter76
Girl, I wanted to show this to you!!!! 😁😄❤️ I just made this…and I’m pretty proud of it, not gonna lie, lol! It’s Bucky&Madelene! ❤️
Just thought of you when I finished it. 🙂
Aww thank you so much for thinking of me girl!! ❤️❤️
And OH MY GOSH THAT IS AWESOME!!!! LOVE IT!!! AWW BUCKYY!!!!! MADLENE!! 😭😭😭
How’s it going? How’s writing? How’s life? 😄
Well…heh, I’ve been pretty stressed today, honestly. My day hasn’t been the best, but my mom helped me feel better, so I’m doing alright now. Thank you for asking!
Writing is pretty good! I’m kinda stuck on that scene, so now I’m working on chapters in order in my book. 🙂
Aw, sister, I’m so sorry that you’re feeling lonely!! And @mineralizedwritings, Freedom, I understand that. I want y’all both to know that I love y’all so much and you’re some of the best friends I’ve ever had ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Praying! ❤️❤️❤️
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March 18, 2023 at 5:35 pm #137541Thanks girl! That means so much to me 💗💗 love chatting with you both and it always makes a hard day a bit better. <3
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 18, 2023 at 5:40 pm #137543Thanks girl! That means so much to me 💗💗
You’re so welcome sister!! 💖💖💖
love chatting with you both and it always makes a hard day a bit better. <3
Aww, yes!! I feel the same way about y’all 🥰🥰.
So, how’s Tauren doing? The baby 🥰🥰!!
(HURRICANE HAIR!!!! XDXD)
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March 18, 2023 at 5:46 pm #137544Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6 Thanks, girl…that means so much more than you know ❤️❤️❤️
I’m glad you’re doing better now 🙂 And yay, writing!!! 😀
And you’re welcome!!! Anytime, girl, anytime! ❤️
Glad you like it! Not gonna lie…Bucky&Madelene as a couple is kinda cute…😂
Aww, thanks, girl…it means a lot to know that I can reach out to you whenever about whatever 💗💗💗
Sorry you’re having a rough day…I’m still praying for you! ❤️❤️❤️ I get it…we all have really rough days, but sometimes even knowing you’re not alone, it’s still hard, I get it. 💗 But I’m here and I’m praying for you.
You’re welcome! 🙂
Oh yes, art can most certainly help. 😀
March 18, 2023 at 5:47 pm #137545<333
How’s Tauren? Hmmm…. how is he? 🤔
“It’s ok! You’re strong too.” (For context that’s something Lesli said in the flashback just before)
We’re doing this.
Tauren edges his other foot up alongside, a shaky hand still dragging along the rock wall.
Just do another one.
Tauren breathes in heavily, holding it until his foot touches the ground again. He looks behind him, sensing the darkness closing in, only to be met with the same pitch blackness as in front of him. He gasps slightly, holding his body close to the wall. Tauren flashes his light on again, only to notice a strange spindly form growing against the wall ahead of him.
What is that…
Tauren holds still, breathing quietly as he listens. He turns on his light and inches slightly closer to the strange shape. It casts an unsightly shadow on the floor below it as Tauren’s headlight illuminates it’s prodding leaves.
I hate it. I don’t know what it is, but I hate it.
Tauren leans forwards slightly, his eyes focusing on a small ball of fluff towards it’s end. He sits down next to the strange object, but not before quickly glancing around to make sure he is still alone.
It must be a plant!
I’ve only seen them when they are already harvested.
Didn’t Lesli say she always wanted to see a plant?
Tauren reaches out to touch the plant, but quickly pulls his hand back as it’s strange leaf pricks him.
Eww! Of all the plants I could have found down here. Disgusting.
Tauren leans above it, casting his headlight down over the plant. It’s dry roots curl from a crack in the ground, and a greenish stem shoots upwards. Tauren moves it slightly with his hand, cringing at the odd texture and shape of the leaves. It wavers slightly, and a couple fluffy seeds float through the air.
Woah! What are those?
It’s like an alien thingy or something.
Tauren pokes the fluff with his finger, and a couple more seeds take flight into the air before quickly drifting back towards the ground. Tauren grips the stem of the plant with both hands, pulling on it slightly. It loosens, and a string of ugly roots tear from the ground.
I could totally give this to Les…
(Tauren imagines himself showing up at her door with the plant and Martha getting scared)
Maybe not. It’s not very pretty. But it could come back to life! It has its roots, after all.
Tauren holds the plant up to get a closer look in his headlight. A couple more seeds drift off into the dusty air, sparkling under his headlight before drifting back towards the ground. Tauren blows softly on the seed head, watching in amazement as the fluff flits through the air before returning to the ground.
That’s so cool.
Tauren looks down at the plant. It’s stem glows a sickly green under his yellow light.
Should I keep it?
Tauren furrows his eyebrows, squishing the stem slightly. He makes a face as it oozes a milky liquid from the stem.
Eat it!
No! I’m not stupid.
Tauren bends down to set the plant on the floor again.
It’s cool though! I’ll hold onto it a little longer.
Tauren turns off his headlight. He pauses against the wall, waiting as his eyes adjust to the pitch blackness.
Just keep moving forwards.
What if I don’t find a way out soon enough though?
Tauren swallows the fear rising up his throat.
How much farther until it splits off or something?
Tauren takes a couple more blind steps forwards, feeling the rocky wall with his hand.
Use the headlight again? Yeah, why not.
Tauren flashes on his headlight. The image of a sileutted figure pops from the darkness ahead of him. He gasps slightly, taking a couple steps backwards through the darkness.
There’s a person there!
Breath Tauren. You need to think here.
If there’s a person coming this way, there’s a way out.
Tauren gulps. He brings his forearm up towards his forehead, wiping away the sweat forming along his brow.
You’re ok! This is totally fine.
He looks back towards the mines, but is met with only the same pitch black.
And now that’s a dead end! There are no mines there. Just the rubble where the ceiling fell.
Tauren breathes in, starting to feel his throat dry.
Don’t panic!
Ok. Do we use the headlight or not. They already know we’re here…
And we need to get out! I don’t know who that is though!
Or how they even got in here in the first place.
Tauren inches forwards. Keeping one hand against the wall, he steps through the blackness. A soft crunching echoes from farther down the hallway.
Closer. They’re coming closer.
Tauren wipes his sweaty palms against his overalls. The footsteps grow in volume, echoing down the mineshaft. Frozen against the wall, Tauren listens as the footsteps stop in their tracks.
No. What’s going on?
Just use your headlight! We’ll at least get a feel for what kind of a person it is, right?
The quiet crunching footsteps start again, this time much closer.
Use it!! Just turn it on!
XDXD who is it?!
How’s mathew? And Asher? And Dylan? The sweet bois? 💗🤩🥰
btw what does asher look like?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 18, 2023 at 5:49 pm #137546I understand 😉 I hope the rest of your day is better, and that you won’t let negative stuff get to you! *Insert-heart-emoji-that-I-cannot-type-on-my-computer-XD*
“Everything is a mountain”
March 18, 2023 at 5:50 pm #137549@freedomwriter76
Thanks, girl…that means so much more than you know ❤️❤️❤️
💖💖💖 You’re so welcome sister!!
I’m glad you’re doing better now 🙂 And yay, writing!!! 😀
Thanks girl! 😊 And yesss, writing!! 😀
And you’re welcome!!! Anytime, girl, anytime! ❤️
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Glad you like it! Not gonna lie…Bucky&Madelene as a couple is kinda cute…😂
WAIT WHAT?!?! *Goes and looks back at the mood board* OH MY GOSH I DIDN’T REALIZE THEY WERE….LIKE “TOGETHER”!!! *face palm*
BUT OH MY GOODNESS I LOVE IT!!!! AHHHH SO ADORABLE ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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March 18, 2023 at 5:51 pm #137550Thank sister! Really appreciate it.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 18, 2023 at 5:53 pm #137551@freedomwriter76
Aww, thanks, girl…it means a lot to know that I can reach out to you whenever about whatever 💗💗💗
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Sorry you’re having a rough day…I’m still praying for you! ❤️❤️❤️ I get it…we all have really rough days, but sometimes even knowing you’re not alone, it’s still hard, I get it. 💗 But I’m here and I’m praying for you.
Thanks sister! Really appreciate it. <3
You’re welcome! 🙂
Oh yes, art can most certainly help. 😀
XD yep.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 18, 2023 at 5:54 pm #137552Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Thanks girl! 😊 And yesss, writing!! 😀
Yw!!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
WAIT WHAT?!?! *Goes and looks back at the mood board* OH MY GOSH I DIDN’T REALIZE THEY WERE….LIKE “TOGETHER”!!! *face palm*
Lol, it’s okay! ❤️XD At first when I first made her for my fanfics, I didn’t really think about it…but as time went on I realized the potential they had as a couple, lol! 😂
BUT OH MY GOODNESS I LOVE IT!!!! AHHHH SO ADORABLE ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
AHHH, THANKS GIRL!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I need to write a scene of Bucky&Madelene now. 😉
March 18, 2023 at 5:55 pm #137553Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Yw, girl!!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️ Glad I can be here for you! 💗
March 18, 2023 at 5:55 pm #137554Ooooh LOVE the scene girl!!! Great job!! And Tauren is just so cute XD 💗🤩🥰🤩🥰
XDXD who is it?!
Hmm….Keiryn??? Layson?? I’m gonna guess Keiryn!
How’s mathew? And Asher? And Dylan? The sweet bois? 💗🤩🥰
Aww thanks!!
Yes they are so sweet 💗🤩🥰They’re pretty good! I finally figured out who Matthew is the son of…🤐btw what does asher look like?
Oh, I can give you a pic of him!! 😀
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