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March 15, 2023 at 3:21 pm #136952
I couldn’t get yours right either XD @queen_of_alvastia lol
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#ProtectSebMarch 15, 2023 at 3:26 pm #136953@godlyfantasy12 I SHOULD! I mean if it’s okay if I just do it like once or twice a day? I don’t want to hold y’all back….😞😞
Torryn’s got the exact opposite problem…he’s an egomaniac pretty much…until I break him…..
Torryn: *giant grin* Who’s the lucky one?
HAHA you’re good! I didn’t realize when I entered the spaces in my name tag thing that it made it_like_this instead of all one word *fpfp*
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March 15, 2023 at 3:29 pm #136954Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Thank ye!!! *enters Joshua’s fanclub* 😂
LET’s DO IT!!!!!! *grabs some kind of weapon* FRIDA, you are going DOWN!!!! 😡
*sobs and hugs Maddock and Kerwin tight* 😭
Awwwwwwww, thanks, girl!!! I do my best! ❤️ Yes, every family DOES need one of those! 😀 (ooh…Kade sounds interesting already. 🤭)
Prepare yourself. 😉🤐 (haha…but really…you should heed the warning…😭😭😭)
First off, since he’s older…Adolphus!!!
(I love him so much…❤️)
Having grown up with Frida as his mother and a just as cruel/abusive father, Adolphus has never found an escape, and neither his father nor his mother have ever loved or wanted him.
His father died when he was 11, and a year later, his mother Frida married Felix Baumann, adding stepbrothers and a stepfather to Adolphus’ family tree.
His relationship with his brother Dietrich and his stepbrothers, The Bois, was strong once…but they’ve slowly drifted apart.
Truth is, Adolphus doesn’t want to be hurt again.
He’s been hurt enough.
So, one of the things he does?
He hurts his stepbrothers.
It’s a way to protect himself…and it’s really not that bad, right? He’s not as bad as his mother…so it’s not that bad…right?
If he’s really honest, Adolphus would admit that he misses the days when they were close.
But they were naive children then, weren’t they?
And if he’s completely honest with himself…
…Adolphus hates who he’s become.
He doesn’t want to be this way.
But he has no other way to stay safe and protected.
He’s only looking for love.
But no one would ever love Adolphus.
Hah…
…why would they?
March 15, 2023 at 3:31 pm #136955Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. TORRYN NEEDS TO BE IN THE CASTLE!!!! 😍😍😍😍
@godlyfantasy12. I changed the timeline in the castle…and I miss Dietrich…😭March 15, 2023 at 3:37 pm #136956@mineralizedwritings Oh that’s horrible! My family will be praying.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 15, 2023 at 3:38 pm #136957Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. And…Dietrich!!! ❤️😭
Adolphus’ younger brother, Dietrich has always had an older brother to follow and look up to.
He’s pretty easy-going compared to Adolphus, but abuse has still taken it’s toll on this man who had once been very youthful and optimistic when he was young.
His relationship with Adolphus and The Bois has also slowly slipped away, but he’s tried to hold onto some sense of brotherhood with Adolphus, even though he’s hurt him time and time again, more emotionally than anything.
But you see…no matter what Adolphus does…
…he’s still his brother.
Dietrich has also hurt his stepbrothers to keep himself safe, but he’s always felt horrible about it.
What kind of man hurts his own brothers!?
Dietrich has a hard time seeing himself in the right light. He sees himself as worthless…but that all changes…
…when Jesus redeems his name.
Dietrich finally finds the meaning and love he’s always been searching for in the God who created him, and from then on…there’s no going back.
He’s redeemed and saved, and when he dies?
He’ll be in heaven with his savior.
But his stepbrothers are suddenly running from a man that their uncle hired to get rid of them, and Dietrich’s the only one that can stop him…
…by throwing himself in front of his stepbrothers.
Why would he do that for his stepbrothers, you may ask?
Well…as Dietrich says with his final breath…
…”It’s what brothers do.”
March 15, 2023 at 3:40 pm #136959Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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*cries* 😭😭😭😭
March 15, 2023 at 3:40 pm #136960@freedomwriter76 You’re welcome!! <333
YAWSSSS!!! WHOOO HOOO!!! *grabs my handgun* *grabs Torryn* (Torryn is a very good weapon *smiles proudly at him*)
Oh man…Maddock, be good. It’s just a hug…
*Maddock death glares* HANDS OFF!!
Kerwin: *punches Maddock playfully* It is a HUG! *hugs you back*
Your best is fantab!! XD Which is why I have a Kade in my KoF fam lol (Kade: *blushes* Uhhh thanks. Me: ….yeah he’s very interesting. He’s a half deaf and his adopted father saved him from a burning village but no one really knows who he is…. Kade: O_o Me: It’s fine, buddy *hands him some popcorn*)
AWwWwwW NOOoooOoo!!! 😭😭😭😭 (“Looking for love in all the wrong places” just popped in my head now XD) That’s so sad!!! That he feels he has to react like THAT!! I need someone good and kind to dave him too
LOL As long as you can put up with him…..being himself…..
- This reply was modified 1 year, 8 months ago by Queen_of_Alvastia.
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March 15, 2023 at 3:42 pm #136962@freedomwriter76 STOOOOOPPPPOP 😭 😭 MY HEEEAATT DIETRICH!! I love him so much…so…so much…
GASP I gotta RP as Arabella! I forgot!!
also @queen_of_alvastia that’s fine with us! Some can’t even RP that often. U should totally add Torryn!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMarch 15, 2023 at 3:43 pm #136963@freedomwriter76 AGHHHHHHH!!!! AAAAAGGGGGHHHHH!!! NOOOOOO!!!! That’s so SAAAAADDDDD!!!
*kidnaps Dietrich without asking permission* *hides him somewhere safe*
I love sacrificial death tho…well LOVE sounds awful but yk what I mean!
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March 15, 2023 at 3:44 pm #136964@godlyfantasy12 Okay!! Thank you!! I’m on spring break rn that’s why I can pop on so much but when college starts back up…. lol
Can you tag me for the castle and I’ll plop Torryn in? (He’s a spy so I guess I can use that to make him “disappear” when I have to)
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March 15, 2023 at 3:44 pm #136965@freedomwriter76 Ooh, Adolphus and Dietrich!
Y’know, I like them a lot better now that they have redemption arcs! They’re awesome! (And the fact that he sacrifices himself……Ahhhh I love it and hate it all at once!!)
(I like redemption stories maybe a bit TOO much.)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 15, 2023 at 3:45 pm #136966@queen-of-alvastia I HAVE A CHARRIE CALLED TORRYN TOO! Actually he’s me and my brother’s shared charrie. He was kidnapped by the evil Thistle Army so that their leader, Bramble, could try to make him into one of them. Also because Bramble has a heavy grudge against Torryn’s father, Hunter, for some things we don’t talk about.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 15, 2023 at 3:45 pm #136967Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Let’s do this!!!!! (lol, Torryn counts as a weapon. 😂)
*hugs Kerwin back even tighter* I wish I could protect you from your author!!! I’ve already kidnapped you before! ❤️❤️❤️
Aww, thanks, girl!!! 😉❤️ Kade sounds so interesting. 😅
IKR!?!?!?!? 😭😭😭 Adolphus was a villain and stuff before and I HATED him, but now…I love him! 😭❤️
Lol…I dealt with Sorren before, I think we can handle Torryn. 😜
March 15, 2023 at 3:46 pm #136968November: *squeaks* N-No one!
He’s got it bad.
Jocelyn: He really does!
November: Jocelyn!! *buries face*
Jocelyn: What? She‘s not here…
*Arabella walks in*
Ara: Who’s not here? *tilts head innocently*
Everyone: O.o
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