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@freedomwriter76 DIETRICH!!!! JAKOB!!! ?
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Aww Dietrich and Jakob! ? Jakob learning to let go of his anger and forgiving others is such a great character arc/theme
Thank you!!! ??? Jakob’s arc is probably one of my favs! ???
JAKOB AGH NO BUDDY DON’T FALL FOR REVENGE!!!!
TELL HIM!!! ???
…if Jakob knew the Lord I think the song “Losing” by Sidewalk Prophets fits him.
Ooh, yes, I know that song. It’s already on his playlist. ? Do you mean Tenth Avenue North tho…not Sidewalk Prophets…? I’m just trying to clarify.
I like the scene.
Thank you!!! ???
…so Wolfgang is getting more than one medicine? Cause in the first part Leo was getting the medicine…
or maybe I’m misremembering, I dunnoLeo didn’t get a chance to get the medicine, which will be explained “why” in the next part. ?
(WHAT?!? OH NO, YOU’VE GIVEN ME {Maybe False} HOPE NOW????!!)
Don’t completely take my word for it…my stories change all the time. ??? I’m just saying it may or MAY NOT happen…I haven’t completely decided. ??
When I read that scene, I had no idea who Jezyk was, but it still made me sad and furious that he killed someone young and blamed it on Riker…and now I know how precious he is❤❤??
UGHHHH!!! IKR!?!?!?!? That scene just showed how evil Hans truly is ??? It also shows how much he actually KNOWS about Riker’s disbelief/struggle, which is terrifying. ?
Oh my goodness that scene!!! Awww Dietrich and Jakob ❤❤❤? And Joshua!!
Great job!! I love it ❤❤❤
IKR!? ?? Aww, thank you so much!!!! ????
DIETRICH!!!! JAKOB!!! ?
IKR!? ????????
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LOVE IT!!! Such a good read! I don’t know much of Dietrich’s background, but it seems like he might come around? Anyways, the brothers are awesome and I’m temporarily relenting on my threat of taking them ?I might have to in the future though…
( ? *sniffles* )
"Past or future... let them be."
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LOVE IT!!! Such a good read!
AWW, THANK YOU!!! You are sooo sweet!!! ???
I don’t know much of Dietrich’s background, but it seems like he might come around?
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Anyways, the brothers are awesome and I’m temporarily relenting on my threat of taking them ?
Thanks!!! I love them so much!!! And phew, *wipes sweat away* you had me thinking I was going to have to fight you to keep The Boys. ??
I might have to in the future though…
NEVER!!!! ?
*runs to go hide The Boys somewhere safe so no one can take them from me* ??♀️??♀️??♀️
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Ooh, yes, I know that song. It’s already on his playlist. ? Do you mean Tenth Avenue North tho…not Sidewalk Prophets…? I’m just trying to clarify.
*facepalm* Yes, it’s by Tenth Avenue North. I was telling someone else about Sidewalk Prophets and thought I was on their youtube page when I was listening to the song…
Thank you!!! ???
You’re welcome!!! =D
Leo didn’t get a chance to get the medicine, which will be explained “why” in the next part. ?
Ohhhhhhh, okay. *anticipation increases*
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XDXD I already know this secret….XD *rubs hands together conspiratorially*
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19@freedomwriter76
AWW, THANK YOU!!! You are sooo sweet!!! ???
Your welcome!! ??
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Hmmm… curious what this is… I honestly don’t remember anything about him though… he’s a step brother, right? has he been mean in the past or just kinda grey?
*runs to go hide The Boys somewhere safe so no one can take them from me* ??♀️??♀️??♀️
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Oh don’t worry, you’d get to visit them under controlled circumstances. Y’know, no pen and paper allowed in the room kinda thing lol
"Past or future... let them be."
Oh, cool! XD Yeah, I can see the similarities to America…
Yeah…
I guess I’m kind of cheating by not coming up with a unique history to Aletheia, but it works anyway. Lol
Yep! Just Christianity. I didn’t want to do allegorical Christianity with this WIP cuz I tried it with another one and it didn’t work out to great. ?
As for their world being different from ours, there is not much difference. I’m thinking of adding a few high-tech things that Aletheia has that could be a possibility of us having in the near future of our world. (I hope that sentence makes sense. XD) There’s not very many differences except for culture and stuff since it’s a different country and all.
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Lol. Not quite what I was going for. ?
As the trilogy progresses, the Orb and it’s purpose are explained more in detail.
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
Nah, it’s not cheating. It’s utilizing your resources. 😉
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Hmmm… curious what this is… I honestly don’t remember anything about him though… he’s a step brother, right?
Yep, he’s a stepbrother. ?
as he been mean in the past or just kinda grey?
A little mean…but nowhere near as much as Frida and Felix or even Adolphus. ?
He’s kinda done it as a way to protect himself…???
Oh don’t worry, you’d get to visit them under controlled circumstances. Y’know, no pen and paper allowed in the room kinda thing lol
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Also…like, you like Tauren Wells, right? (I may be mistaken, tho…it may have been someone else?) Anywhooo, I was listening to a lot of Tauren Wells songs earlier and found some for all 5 of The Boys and even Adolphus and Dietrich…and I’m still listening to Adolphus’…I just can’t stop. ????
*facepalm* Yes, it’s by Tenth Avenue North. I was telling someone else about Sidewalk Prophets and thought I was on their youtube page when I was listening to the song…
You’re good! We’ve all done it!!! ??
Ohhhhhhh, okay. *anticipation increases*
I’m gonna try and work on Part 4 at some point either today or tomorrow! ??
XDXD I already know this secret….XD *rubs hands together conspiratorially*
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Yep, he’s a stepbrother. ?
Oh ok that makes sense.
A little mean…but nowhere near as much as Frida and Felix or even Adolphus. ?He’s kinda done it as a way to protect himself…???
?????? AHHH
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LOL XD
Also…like, you like Tauren Wells, right? (I may be mistaken, tho…it may have been someone else?) Anywhooo, I was listening to a lot of Tauren Wells songs earlier and found some for all 5 of The Boys and even Adolphus and Dietrich…and I’m still listening to Adolphus’…I just can’t stop. ????
YES I LOVE TAUREN WELLS’S MUSIC!! I was listening to it while reading/writing this XD
And yeah, It’s where my oc Tauren got his name from XD
Which songs?
Have you heard “use a friend”? It’s what I was listening to, it’s awesome.
I would say that that one, and “afraid with you” are just perfect for Tauren and Lesli.
"Past or future... let them be."
@freedomwriter76 I FOUND A SONG FOR ARA AND NOVEMBER AND IT IS PERFECT I THINK FOR IRIS AND RIKER ?
It’s called Reasons by Beth Crowley, and It’s perfect for Ara to Novemver and Iris to Riker IMO ? ?
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?????? AHHH
IKR!?!?!?!? ????????
YES I LOVE TAUREN WELLS’S MUSIC!! I was listening to it while reading/writing this XD
Yay, I got the person right!!! ???
And yeah, It’s where my oc Tauren got his name from XD
OH YEAHHHH…I think I remember you mentioning that. ??
Which songs?
I have a list. ???
Leo:
Until Grace
Crazy About You
God’s Not Done With You
Fake It
Joshua:
Famous For (I Believe)
Come Home
Citizen of Heaven
Jakob:
Crazy About You
Nothing But You
Reuben:
Known
Hills and Valleys
Fake It
Wolfgang:
Trenches
Undefeated
Adolphus:
Empty
Dietrich:
Crazy About You
“Empty” for Adolphus is just…?????
Have you heard “use a friend”? It’s what I was listening to, it’s awesome.
I would say that that one, and “afraid with you” are just perfect for Tauren and Lesli.
Aww, Tauren and Lesli! ? I haven’t heard those, tho, I’m gonna go listen to them!!! ?
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I FOUND A SONG FOR ARA AND NOVEMBER AND IT IS PERFECT I THINK FOR IRIS AND RIKER ?
It’s called Reasons by Beth Crowley, and It’s perfect for Ara to Novemver and Iris to Riker IMO ? ?
I MUST GO FIND IT!!!!!!! ???
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@godlyfantasy12. AHHHHH!!!! IT IS IRIS & RIKER!!!!! ????????
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