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January 25, 2023 at 12:47 pm #129980
@freedomwriter76 DIETRICH!!!! JAKOB!!! π
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#ProtectSebJanuary 25, 2023 at 12:52 pm #129981Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Aww Dietrich and Jakob! π Β Jakob learning to let go of his anger and forgiving others is such a great character arc/theme
Thank you!!! πππ Jakob’s arc is probably one of my favs! πππ
JAKOB AGH NO BUDDY DONβT FALL FOR REVENGE!!!!
TELL HIM!!! πππ
β¦if Jakob knew the Lord I think the song βLosingβ by Sidewalk Prophets fits him.
Ooh, yes, I know that song. It’s already on his playlist. π Do you mean Tenth Avenue North tho…not Sidewalk Prophets…? I’m just trying to clarify.
I like the scene.
Thank you!!! πππ
β¦so Wolfgang is getting more than one medicine? Cause in the first part Leo was getting the medicineβ¦Β
or maybe Iβm misremembering, I dunnoLeo didn’t get a chance to get the medicine, which will be explained “why” in the next part. π
(WHAT?!? OH NO, YOUβVE GIVEN ME {Maybe False} HOPE NOWπ πππ!!)
Don’t completely take my word for it…my stories change all the time. πππ I’m just saying it may or MAY NOT happen…I haven’t completely decided. π π
When I read that scene, I had no idea who Jezyk was, but it still made me sad and furious that he killed someone young and blamed it on Rikerβ¦and now I know how precious he isβ€β€ππ
UGHHHH!!! IKR!?!?!?!? That scene just showed how evil Hans truly is πππ It also shows how much he actually KNOWS about Riker’s disbelief/struggle, which is terrifying. π¬
Oh my goodness that scene!!! Awww Dietrich and Jakob β€β€β€π And Joshua!!
Great job!! I love it β€β€β€
IKR!? ππ Aww, thank you so much!!!! ππππ
DIETRICH!!!! JAKOB!!! π
IKR!? ππππππππ
January 25, 2023 at 12:53 pm #129982@freedomwriter76
LOVE IT!!! Such a good read! I don’t know much of Dietrich’s background, but it seems like he might come around? Anyways, the brothers are awesome and I’m temporarily relenting on my threat of taking them πI might have to in the future though…
( π₯ *sniffles* )
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 25, 2023 at 12:59 pm #129983Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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LOVE IT!!! Such a good read!
AWW, THANK YOU!!! You are sooo sweet!!! πππ
I donβt know much of Dietrichβs background, but it seems like he might come around?
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Anyways, the brothers are awesome and Iβm temporarily relenting on my threat of taking them π
Thanks!!! I love them so much!!! And phew, *wipes sweat away* you had me thinking I was going to have to fight you to keep The Boys. ππ
I might have to in the future thoughβ¦
NEVER!!!! π£
*runs to go hide The Boys somewhere safe so no one can take them from me* ππ»ββοΈππ»ββοΈππ»ββοΈ
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January 25, 2023 at 1:28 pm #129985@freedomwriter76
Ooh, yes, I know that song. Itβs already on his playlist. π Do you mean Tenth Avenue North thoβ¦not Sidewalk Prophetsβ¦? Iβm just trying to clarify.
*facepalm* Yes, it’s by Tenth Avenue North. I was telling someone else about Sidewalk Prophets and thought I was on their youtube page when I was listening to the song…
Thank you!!! πππ
You’re welcome!!! =D
Leo didnβt get a chance to get the medicine, which will be explained βwhyβ in the next part. π
Ohhhhhhh, okay. *anticipation increases*
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XDXD I already know this secret….XD *rubs hands together conspiratorially*
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"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 25, 2023 at 1:36 pm #129988@freedomwriter76
AWW, THANK YOU!!! You are sooo sweet!!! πππ
Your welcome!! ππ
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Hmmm… curious what this is… I honestly don’t remember anything about him though… he’s a step brother, right? has he been mean in the past or just kinda grey?
*runs to go hide The Boys somewhere safe so no one can take them from me* ππ»ββοΈππ»ββοΈππ»ββοΈ
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Oh don’t worry, you’d get to visit them under controlled circumstances. Y’know, no pen and paper allowed in the room kinda thing lol
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 25, 2023 at 1:59 pm #129990Oh, cool! XD Yeah, I can see the similarities to Americaβ¦
Yeahβ¦
I guess Iβm kind of cheating by not coming up with a unique history to Aletheia, but it works anyway. Lol
Yep! Just Christianity. I didnβt want to do allegorical Christianity with this WIP cuz I tried it with another one and it didnβt work out to great. π
As for their world being different from ours, there is not much difference. Iβm thinking of adding a few high-tech things that Aletheia has that could be a possibility of us having in the near future of our world. (I hope that sentence makes sense. XD) Thereβs not very many differences except for culture and stuff since itβs a different country and all.
Write what should not be forgotten. β Isabel Allende
January 25, 2023 at 2:01 pm #129991@sarafini
Lol. Not quite what I was going for. π
As the trilogy progresses, the Orb and itβs purpose are explained more in detail.
Write what should not be forgotten. β Isabel Allende
January 25, 2023 at 3:13 pm #130011Nah, it’s not cheating. It’s utilizing your resources. π
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 25, 2023 at 3:14 pm #130013Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Hmmmβ¦ curious what this isβ¦ I honestly donβt remember anything about him thoughβ¦ heβs a step brother, right?
Yep, he’s a stepbrother. π
as he been mean in the past or just kinda grey?
A little mean…but nowhere near as much as Frida and Felix or even Adolphus. π
He’s kinda done it as a way to protect himself…πππ
Oh donβt worry, youβd get to visit them under controlled circumstances. Yβknow, no pen and paper allowed in the room kinda thing lol
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Also…like, you like Tauren Wells, right? (I may be mistaken, tho…it may have been someone elseπ ) Anywhooo, I was listening to a lot of Tauren Wells songs earlier and found some for all 5 of The Boys and even Adolphus and Dietrich…and I’m still listening to Adolphus’…I just can’t stop. π πππ
*facepalm* Yes, itβs by Tenth Avenue North. I was telling someone else about Sidewalk Prophets and thought I was on their youtube page when I was listening to the songβ¦
You’re good! We’ve all done it!!! π π
Ohhhhhhh, okay. *anticipation increases*
I’m gonna try and work on Part 4 at some point either today or tomorrow! ππ
XDXD I already know this secretβ¦.XD *rubs hands together conspiratorially*
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January 25, 2023 at 3:31 pm #130017@freedomwriter76
Yep, heβs a stepbrother. π
Oh ok that makes sense.
A little meanβ¦but nowhere near as much as Frida and Felix or even Adolphus. πHeβs kinda done it as a way to protect himselfβ¦πππ
ππππππ AHHH
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LOL XD
Alsoβ¦like, you like Tauren Wells, right? (I may be mistaken, thoβ¦it may have been someone elseπ ) Anywhooo, I was listening to a lot of Tauren Wells songs earlier and found some for all 5 of The Boys and even Adolphus and Dietrichβ¦and Iβm still listening to Adolphusββ¦I just canβt stop. π πππ
YES I LOVE TAUREN WELLS’S MUSIC!! I was listening to it while reading/writing this XD
And yeah, It’s where my oc Tauren got his name from XD
Which songs?
Have you heard “use a friend”? It’s what I was listening to, it’s awesome.
I would say that that one, and “afraid with you” are just perfect for Tauren and Lesli.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 25, 2023 at 3:40 pm #130023@freedomwriter76 I FOUND A SONG FOR ARA AND NOVEMBER AND IT IS PERFECT I THINK FOR IRIS AND RIKER π
Itβs called Reasons by Beth Crowley, and Itβs perfect for Ara to Novemver and Iris to Riker IMO π π
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ππππππ AHHH
IKR!?!?!?!? ππππππππ
YES I LOVE TAUREN WELLSβS MUSIC!! I was listening to it while reading/writing this XD
Yay, I got the person right!!! πππ
And yeah, Itβs where my oc Tauren got his name from XD
OH YEAHHHH…I think I remember you mentioning that. ππ
Which songs?
I have a list. πππ
Leo:
Until Grace
Crazy About You
Godβs Not Done With You
Fake It
Joshua:
Famous For (I Believe)
Come Home
Citizen of Heaven
Jakob:
Crazy About You
Nothing But You
Reuben:
Known
Hills and Valleys
Fake It
Wolfgang:
Trenches
Undefeated
Adolphus:
Empty
Dietrich:
Crazy About You
“Empty” for Adolphus is just…πππππ
Have you heard βuse a friendβ? Itβs what I was listening to, itβs awesome.
I would say that that one, and βafraid with youβ are just perfect for Tauren and Lesli.
Aww, Tauren and Lesli! π I haven’t heard those, tho, I’m gonna go listen to them!!! π
January 25, 2023 at 3:43 pm #130025Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Β I FOUND A SONG FOR ARA AND NOVEMBER AND IT IS PERFECT I THINK FOR IRIS AND RIKER π
Itβs called Reasons by Beth Crowley, and Itβs perfect for Ara to Novemver and Iris to Riker IMO π π
I MUST GO FIND IT!!!!!!! πππ
January 25, 2023 at 3:55 pm #130028Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. AHHHHH!!!! IT IS IRIS & RIKER!!!!! ππππππππ
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