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March 15, 2023 at 11:10 am #136871
@freedomwriter76
AHHH OH MY RUEBEN IS SO HANDSOME XD.
Thanks girl! Prayers are always appreciated 💕💕
Hey I have a character of the same name! Spelled Tauren though. 🙂
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 15, 2023 at 11:11 am #136872Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Wow….Leo…XD….that picture 😯Hehe…I said he was handsome, didn’t I? XD😍
AHH The BABY!!!!!!
Ugh he’s so sweet 😍🥰
IKR!?!?!?!?!?!? 💗🥰😍❤️
March 15, 2023 at 11:12 am #136873Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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March 15, 2023 at 11:16 am #136874@freedomwriter76 *sighs* He’s crazy…I mean oh gosh where do I even start?! I mean, he looks NOTHING like anyone in the rest of his clan. They’re all medium height, olive skin tones and…..dark – black hair, black hearts XD Torryn’s tall, gangly, with read hair and hazel eyes XD Oh yeah and he’s like 18 🙂
He’s also very VERY passive-aggressive. And sarcastic at times. And really talented at being a spy….oh yeah, and he takes bribes to kidnap people. He wanted to be a cat burglar too but I wouldn’t let him lol (He came up and said, HEY! I got a new job! Meaning: I relocate items people are not using at the moment…. Me: No. Dude, just no.)
(Uhhhh yeah…sorry…I’M WORKING ON IT THO I PROMISE!! I don’t want him to die either….we shall see….)
Probably the funniest thing about him is that….
I basically invented him bc one of my writer friends was like, you should have a spy charrie. Me: Oh okay *poofs Torryn into existence* Now he’s ruining my plot – I kinda give him free rein seeing as he probably dies at the end anyway. XD
‘Kay fine you can keep him lol
*Torryn bows* *winks* Of course, my deepest pleasure *bows lower* *trips and falls on his face*
Me: *fpfp* Sorry about him….although if Frida’s really scary…if she freaks Torryn out, things might not work out that well….he’d lose his breakfast everywhere…..
Yeah Frida *cocks gun* watch out. I haven’t actually USED this bad boy yet – my friend dragged her villains away before I could. But I’m not scared to do it XD
AGH LEON!! DUDE DO NOT BLAME YOURSELF!! I BET YOU DID THE BEST YOU COULD!!! 😭😭😭 He turns to God in the end tho right? I mean you won’t let him go to Hell….
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
March 15, 2023 at 11:21 am #136876Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. He sounds like so much fun tho. 😂XD (YESSSS, PLEASE LET HIM LIVE IF IT IS AT ALL POSSIBLE!!!! 😭 I BEG OF YOU!!!!)
Lol, his origin story is HILARIOUS!!! 😆
Yessss, you’re not kidnapping him today!!!!! 😆😆😆 (it has already been threatened by others…trust me. XD)
Pfft, Torryn fell on his face. 😂
Frida…I don’t think she’s joking…XD
IKR!?!?!?!? 😭😭😭 Yesss, all of The Bois are redeemed!!!! 😍😍😍
Do you want to hear about the other 3? There’s still Joshua, Jakob, and Wolfgang. 😉
March 15, 2023 at 11:23 am #136877@mineralizedwritings You’re welcome! <333
Oh my goodness that’s so funny! Don’t tell Torryn tho – he’d be like THAT IS MY NAME! Me: Dude, other guys can have a name that sounds like yours.
And actually in my first book I have a guy name “Taren” 🙂
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
March 15, 2023 at 11:28 am #136880@freedomwriter76 Yup! That he is for sure!! <33 (I WANT TO!!! And the girl who I invented him for wants the same thing…but he’s going to be in this battle and jump in front of Owain’s adopted son… SORRYYYY!!!!)
XDXD *shakes head* ikr? Then I had to figure out who he was and what on earth he was doing in my story XD
NOPE!! I get enough heat from my own charries without taking it from authors whose charries I’ve kidnapped (ONLY threatened? I’m surprised no one has carried it out lolol)
NOPE! I am not! 🙂
YAYYY THANK YOU!! (I’m trying to redeem Torryn so that if he dies….well, yk!)
YES PLEASE!
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
March 15, 2023 at 11:46 am #136885Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. (My heart…I-I think it’s broken. 😭😭😭)
Lol, that’s too funny. 😂 He’s trying to figure out where he fits and shoving his way in there. XD
Lol, lol, right???? 😆 (haha…I haven’t let anyone. XD)
For sure! XD 😉
Yw!!!! ❤️ (*sniff sniff*)
Yay!!! Welp, I think I’ll do Joshua next!!! 💗
The second oldest at 25, Joshua also feels extremely responsible for the safety of his younger brothers and his older brother.
He’s generous, kind, quiet, and always stands for what he believes in.
He doesn’t remember her entirely, but he misses his birth mother as well, who taught him how to play an acoustic guitar (which Frida may destroy…😱😭).
And though he doesn’t seem hurt, his stepmother’s abuse has affected him too. He has scars and bruises too, and occasional flashbacks? Yeah, he’s still got those on occasion.
But when he was 15 years old, he went to go hear a travelling pastor speak, and he saw the Gospel presented in a way he had never seen before. That day, as an abused teenager, he gave his life to Christ, vowing to devote the rest of his life to the God who saved and redeemed his life.
He wishes for his brothers to be saved, but Reuben & Wolfgang don’t know what to think about God, Leo’s angry at God, and Jakob has too much hatred in his heart to have room for God.
He’s desperate…but God hasn’t answered yet.
Is Joshua hoping and praying for something that will never happen?
March 15, 2023 at 12:06 pm #136893@freedomwriter76 (Oh no I’m so sorry! *hands you a tissue box and a cupcake* I WILL TRY to save him I PROMISE! The whole ending of the story – working title: Kingdom of Fire – is kinda up in the air rn *shrugs*)
That is Torryn XD
Ooooh Joshua!! YESS!! He sounds so amazing!! I don’t know he might actually factually be my favorite now 🙂 <3333 (And if Frida destroys his guitar Torryn and I will join forces and come after her XD)
….also someone needs to come rescue these bois….rescue meaning take them away from Frida. I mean Leon & Joshua are legal adults so they could get custody of their brother right?? And all just LEAVE! Right??
IT WILL HAPPEN!! I KNOW IT WILL! (hahaha I have insider info from you that he doesn’t!! 😜😜)
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
March 15, 2023 at 12:24 pm #136898Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. (*sniffs and takes the tissues and cupcake* Thank you for trying to save him!!! ❤️😭)
Lol, lol, lol!!!! Haha, that’s sooo funny!!! 😂 I feel that way about a few charries that wanna be MCs. XD
AhhhhHHHH!!! So glad you love Joshua!!! (I know everyone does…but he doesn’t seem to be a favorite, even tho I love him so much! 😍) (Haha…yes…PLEASE! Come after her for me! XD)
IKR!? 😭 They’re ALL adults, actually… 😅 I think they’re just afraid/know they can’t escape from her hand…it’s why I call her evil lady…one of the many reasons. 😡
(Lol, that’s true. 😂)
Next up, Jakob!!!
The middle brother at 24 years old, Jakob always finds a way to try and be the middle bond that pulls his brothers together as best as possible.
Having the biggest rebellious/stubborn streak of them all, Frida isn’t exactly the biggest fan of him and is always trying to break that strength.
Does Jakob care?
Nope.
Not one bit.
The tallest of the brothers at 6’4″, Jakob towers over just about anyone he meets, but he rarely ever (basically never) uses that as a source of pride.
He’s been hurt by his stepmother’s abuse too, but he’s used Anger as his coping mechanism, so he doesn’t seem as traumatized.
Yes, you head me right. Anger.
He has a bubbling hatred against his stepmother, his father, and his stepbrothers and half-sisters for what they’ve done, especially his stepmother and father.
But when there’s that much hatred in your heart, there’s not much room for love. And he loves his brothers and his girlfriend and later fiancée/wife, Angelina Schind (Riker’s younger sister! ❤️), but if there’s no room for love in his hatred-filled heart…at some point in the future…
…something is going to have to give.
March 15, 2023 at 12:46 pm #136901@freedomwriter76 (Thanks… I guess I get an “A” for effort?)
I can count quite a few of my charries who have done this… XDXD
YES I DO! I can make a fanclub for him and be the only member XD I did that for one of my friend’s charries XDXD I was fangirling SO BAD that she let me make a fanclub and go fan in there <33333 (THANKS FOR THE PERMISSION!!!)
Oh…. 🙄🙄🙄 Someone nice and kind and loving needs to come into their lives and whisk them away from her power forever….. XD
Jakob! I love how you spelled it btw 🙂 omw he’s about my dad’s height XD Okay he kinda sounds like one of my Kingdom of Fire charries (can’t remember if I’ve brought him up here or not it’s been forever) Maddock who has a ton of bitterness/anger but it’s against raiders, not any of his fam. He’d died for his fam – plus he doesn’t have anyone like Frida as a part of his family XD
Okay….I bet he’s going to have to BREAK in the story. Just a hunch…but with a charrie like him? Yeah it’s gonna be a rough ride I bet
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March 15, 2023 at 12:59 pm #136903Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. (Yes, yes you do. XP)
Lol! 😂 Yeah…some charries are so stubborn! XD
Hey, I’d be a member in Joshua’s fanclub!!! 😍 Lol, that’s so funny that you did that tho! 😆 (You are very welcome!!!! 😂)
YESSSSSSS, for sure!!!! Someone, come rescue The Bois!!!! 😭
Thanks, my mom likes how I spelled it too, lol! ❤️ lol, Jakob IS the height of one of my cousins on my Dad’s side of the family. 😂
AHHH, you mean MADDOCK AND KERWIN!?!?!? 😭😭😭😭
Haha…yeah…Jakob is going to probably have the roughest ride…him and Leo.😅 But the roughest? Definitely Jakob. 🤭
And the final member of The Bois…the baby of the brothers…ma boi…Wolfgang! ❤️
(he’s so young&cute!!! 😍)
The youngest of The Bois at 18 years old, Wolfgang has been the one who’s been often shielded by his 4 older brothers from his stepmother’s abuse.
He doesn’t remember his birth mother, having been only a few months old when she was forced to leave, so he has no clue what loving parents are supposed to look like.
Aren’t all mothers like Frida?
Wolfgang has a youthfulness that makes him seem younger than his 18 years, and has a hope and optimism that knows no bounds.
In a bad mood? Don’t you worry, Wolfgang will cheer you up.
Looking on the downsides of life? Don’t worry, Wolfgang will show you how to look at the cup half-full.
He has a passion for helping people and has a dream to be a doctor one day. Who cares what his circumstances are!? He can dream it, so he can do it!
Of course, same as his older brothers, Wolfgang is still traumatized, but his hopeful and optimistic outlook on life help him to rise against the odds against him.
He can be a bit naive though...but his heart is always in the right place!
The happiness that radiates off of him will often spread to his brothers, and Wolfgang is more than happy to help his brothers see things from a different, more hopeful, perspective.
Other than Joshua, he’s the first to come to Christ, and he is an EXCITED new believer. 😍
March 15, 2023 at 1:10 pm #136906Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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I guess I could also talk about The Bois stepbrothers Adolphus&Dietrich…but idk…do you wanna hear about them???
also, if I do…just…UHM…
…don’t get too attached to Dietrich, alright? 🤐
March 15, 2023 at 1:18 pm #136911@queen-of-alvastia QUEEENIEEEEE *TACKLE HUGSSSS* HIIII!!!
@freedomwriter76
Man I missed a lot in this chat XD
AHHHH THE BOIIIIIISSSSS!!!! I luv them!!
AHHHH TORRYNNNNN I LOVE HIMM AND HE LOOKS SO CUTE 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 *swoons*
He actually looks kinda like this one character I have!
ALSO are we talking about our favorite characters right now?????
UM CUZ I LOVE ANY EXCUSE TO BRING OUT MY BABY!
*pulls November through door and squeezes him tight. He blushes profusely* OH DON’T BE SHY YOU’RE WONDERFUL!!!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMarch 15, 2023 at 1:20 pm #136914DIETRIIIIICCCHHHH *falls into pool of own tears*
November: AGH *falls in with me cuz I’m still holding onto him*
Whoops sorry bud….
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