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March 14, 2023 at 10:12 pm #136847
*hugs back* Thanks girl! Yep, God’s always there.
If you want you could pray that my faith would grow. My faith is so small but I want to stop doubting and embrace God’s promises in my life.
Definitely will!
You’re in my prayers too! <3
💗💗💗
- This reply was modified 1 year, 7 months ago by MineralizedWritings.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
March 15, 2023 at 8:17 am #136851Aw, girl, I’m sorry! I will definitely be praying for you, and for your family. The Lord is in control, and He will make everything right. We love you so much sister!! Don’t know what we would do without you 💗💗💗.
#HugRikerSquad
March 15, 2023 at 10:00 am #136854Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia Here it is!!!!! 🥰🥰🥰
Now…about those traumatized charries…😜😆
March 15, 2023 at 10:00 am #136855Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings Praying for you, girl!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
March 15, 2023 at 10:05 am #136856@freedomwriter76 Hahaha….yeah….so… Torryn Velgard Hvalman….is very //interesting// But I love him so
Torryn: *winks at you* What’s not to love?
Me: *shoves him* Hey be nice, I want you to make a good impression…
@mineralizedwritings Awww praying!!! <333🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
March 15, 2023 at 10:09 am #136857Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Lol, interesting? 😂
Torryn: *winks at you* What’s not to love?
Me: *shoves him* Hey be nice, I want you to make a good impression…
Bahahaha…I love him already. 😂❤️❤️❤️❤️
Which means…I must know more. 😆😜😍
And since you left…I have created an entire novel that revolves around Five Brothers whom I have lovingly deemed as “The Bois”, who have become fan favorites. 😂
I intend to talk about all 5 of them if you would like to hear, but which one do you wanna hear about first? 😉
1. Leo (my fav of the 5!!! 😍😍😍)
2. Joshua
3. Jakob
4. Reuben (seems to be the fan favorite of them all! 😂)
5. Wolfgang
March 15, 2023 at 10:21 am #136858@freedomwriter76
Torryn: I know…everyone loves me
Me: *sighs*
Anyway….he’s a passive-aggressive spy/assassin with stress nausea and a mission to take out his older brother. Basically, Torryn’s dad (Zander Hvalman) is a raider chief who disowned his oldest son (Owain) when Owain became a Christian. Torryn is next in line as Chief Raider but he feels like Owain could still pose a threat to that….so yeah. Torryn also has a towering ego and pretends like he’s tough as nails….
….but he’s a softie really, a cinnamon roll that got burned on the outside I guess. He feels like Owain “abandoned” him (he was just a toddler, He’s a little cutie and he has NO CLUE why Owain has to leave. He just follows his dad around going, “Where’s ‘Wain? I want ‘Wain!” And Zander is like BE QUIET HE’S NOT COMING BACK. O_o) But he’s dying really for someone, anyone to respect him….so yeah sorry I could talk and talk and talk about him but I’ll stop now XD
I WANT THE FAN FAV!! PLEASE!!
Torryn: Yeah he better not be more of a favorite with you than *cough cough* me? I mean, seriously, let’s see what he has to offer. *sits down and starts running a finger down his dagger blade*
Me: GET OUT!
Torryn: *sticks out tongue* MAKE ME!
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
March 15, 2023 at 10:22 am #136859🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
March 15, 2023 at 10:25 am #136860@freedomwriter76 Who’s your pfp now?
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
March 15, 2023 at 10:36 am #136861Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. AHHH, I LOVE HIM!!!!! 😍😍😍😍 And if you want to talk about him more, I’m game!!! 😂❤️
Love the pic!!!!!
Okay, Reuben it is!!!! 😉 (and my PFP is…..*screams from the rooftops* (not really, lol 😂) BUCKY!!!!!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍)
First off, picture!!!! (oh, and they’re from another WWII novel, btw)
(not gonna lie, he’s cute. ❤️)
So, Reuben is 20 years old, a sweetie-pie, a softie in a lot of ways (but not in bad ways!!!), a painter, soft-spoken and quiet, a very traumatized BABY, and has a love and compassion for people that knows no bounds.
But heh…life has never treated him very well.
Born to a German Father and a Jewish Mother, Reuben, along with his 4 older brothers and his 1 younger brother, are half-Jewish. He doesn’t remember his mother, since she and his father divorced (against his mother’s will) when he was only 2.
After that, his father (Felix Baumann) remarried, marrying Frida Schmidt, a woman with two sons of her own from her previous marriage. (AHHH, I’ll have to talk about Adolphus & Dietrich too!!!! 😍😭)
Well…let’s just say…Frida isn’t a nice person. (her nickname that I’ve given her is “Evil Lady” 😂)
She’s abusive verbally, mentally, emotionally, and physically, and her abuse has taken a toll on all of The Bois, but especially Reuben (and Leo…😭), whose calm, quiet, and sweet demeanor leaves him prone to abuse.
She once locked him in the cellar when he was probably around 7 years old, leaving Reuben terrified of cramped spaces and the dark, even to this day.
Sooo…he has PTSD, flashbacks, all those things, from his Stepmother’s abuse, and also has very low self-esteem, in that he can’t see himself as anything but worthless, all because of her. 😭
March 15, 2023 at 10:37 am #136862Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings I’m talking about your Adopted Baby!!!! 😂❤️😭
March 15, 2023 at 10:49 am #136863@freedomwriter76 I can tell you more if you want XDXD He’s…a mess. A hot mess, but still a mess. (I’m also trying to figure out a way to save him bc rn he ends up dying for another charrie)
XDXD Gotcha!
OH GOSH CAN I KIDNAP HIM?!?!? He’s so sadddd!!! No wonder he’s a fan fav!!! I have this untraceable handgun that I acquired a while back to save some of my friend’s charries 😜😜 So I can use it on Frida if she ever shows up…
…..and Torryn will be happy to protect Reuben….RIGHT? *glances at Torryn*
Torryn: Huh wait what? As long as I’m still your favorite, yeah sure. Whatever. Wherever he is *sighs* I’ll uhh protect him.
(I know he’s acting careless but if he ever befriended Reuben he’d be like NO ONE LAY A FINGER ON HIM! *draws a knife and charges* I mean seriously if any of your charries need a spy bodyguard guy XD Torryn has this little friend – his only friend tbh rn – named Randyn who has learning issues and basically gets shoved to the side a lot. And Torryn takes care of him and beats up people who even LOOK at Randyn wrong XD)
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
March 15, 2023 at 10:54 am #136866March 15, 2023 at 11:02 am #136867Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. I’d love to hear about him, even if he IS a hot mess XD (WAIT, HUH, WHAT!?!?!?!? WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEEEE!?!?!?!? 😭😭😭😭😭 SAVE HIM, QUEENIE, SAVE HIMMMMMM!!!!!! 😂 jkjk, if he needs to die, then he needs to die…I know that well…heh…heh…🤐)
Lol, I still love Bucky! 😆
*grabs Reuben and hugs him tight* UHM, NO!!!! Don’t kidnap MY BOI!!!! Yessss, no wonder he’s a fav. 😂❤️ Lol…Frida, I’d stay away from Queenie, she’s after you. 😂
Thank you, Torryn, for protecting my Boi. 🥰
(Lol, that’s sooo funny! XD❤️)
And now I can talk about my favorite of The Bois, unless you wanna hear about a different one, lol, but I’m gonna talk about Leo first. 😍 (bc I’m biased. 😂)
(also, uhm…he’s handsome, so that helps. ❤️XD)
Leo is the oldest of The Bois at 28 years old, and was 10 years old when his mother, who he dearly loved and now misses, had to leave.
He’s strong, (the shortest of the bunch at only 5’6″, poor baby! 😂), protective, and has a rebellious streak in him.
But though he’s strong, that doesn’t mean he hasn’t been hurt.
In fact, other than Reuben, he’s been the most traumatized by his stepmother’s abuse, since he hasn’t found a way to cope and because, as the oldest and feeling as if it’s his duty to keep his brothers safe, he’s often taken their punishments onto himself.
It’s all a part of being the oldest brother.
But…you see…he doesn’t think he’s protected his brothers.
Far from it.
In fact, he thinks he’s failed his brothers. He hasn’t protected them the way he should have…they’ve still been abused…
…and it’s all Leo’s fault.
He also has a bubbling anger/bitterness towards God, because, honestly…how could a good God let him and his brothers be abused?
😭
March 15, 2023 at 11:07 am #136868 -
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