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March 13, 2023 at 2:35 pm #136611
@freedomwriter76
Hmm…no, I’m good with anything really 😅😊
Do you?
Writing is okay. I’ve had a bit of writers block, but It’s getting better. I’ve been actually writing more in a short story for school on young Abe Lincoln than anything else lol. 😊 How about you?
Life is good! My parent’s anniversary was a few days ago, that was really great. I’ve been drawing more, and my brother and Dad and I watched a Star Wars show! That was fun. How are you?
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March 13, 2023 at 2:41 pm #136613Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Hmm…no, I’m good with anything really 😅😊
Same! 😊❤️
Writing is okay. I’ve had a bit of writers block, but It’s getting better. I’ve been actually writing more in a short story for school on young Abe Lincoln than anything else lol. 😊 How about you?
Totally get that! 😅😑 Writer’s block is the WORST!!!! Writing’s been pretty slow, but I’m trying to get back into the swing of it. 😆 I’m currently trying to find pics for reference photos for the important side characters in one of my WIP’s! ❤️ It’s a lot of fun! 😆 Ooh, a short story on young Abe Lincoln!? Cool!!! How’s that going? 😊
Life is good! My parent’s anniversary was a few days ago, that was really great. I’ve been drawing more, and my brother and Dad and I watched a Star Wars show! That was fun. How are you?
Aww, epic!!! Glad to hear it!!! ❤️❤️❤️ I’m doing really well, actually, other than being sick right now, lol, 😑, but otherwise, I’m doing really well!!! 💗💗💗💗💗
Oh, and I know you have writer’s block…but how’s my Boi Dylan doing? 😜💖🥰😍🤩
March 13, 2023 at 2:49 pm #136614@freedomwriter76
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Totally get that! 😅😑 Writer’s block is the WORST!!!! Writing’s been pretty slow, but I’m trying to get back into the swing of it. 😆 I’m currently trying to find pics for reference photos for the important side characters in one of my WIP’s! ❤️ It’s a lot of fun! 😆 Ooh, a short story on young Abe Lincoln!? Cool!!! How’s that going? 😊
Yes it is!!! Aw I’m sorry girl! Yeah I get that. Ooh, sounds fun!! Honestly, finding pictures for characters is like my favorite thing to do 😆. Yeah it is!! I LOVE writing him as a young boy!! It’s the story of when he gives his fish to a soldier coming home from a war. It’s going great!! I can share some if you want! It’s actually what I’m working on rn.
Aww, epic!!! Glad to hear it!!! ❤️❤️❤️ I’m doing really well, actually, other than being sick right now, lol, 😑, but otherwise, I’m doing really well!!! 💗💗💗💗💗
Yeah!! Aw thanks! ❤️❤️❤️ Oh no! I’m sorry girl! I’ll be praying! 💗
Oh, and I know you have writer’s block…but how’s my Boi Dylan doing? 😜💖🥰😍🤩
😜💖😍 He is doing great!! Well, as great as he can be with finding out his father is not his real father, and he almost hurt his brother and now his new found sister is very upset with him…
XD I feel so bad for him
#HugRikerSquad
March 13, 2023 at 2:56 pm #136615Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Yes it is!!! Aw I’m sorry girl! Yeah I get that. Ooh, sounds fun!! Honestly, finding pictures for characters is like my favorite thing to do 😆. Yeah it is!! I LOVE writing him as a young boy!! It’s the story of when he gives his fish to a soldier coming home from a war. It’s going great!! I can share some if you want! It’s actually what I’m working on rn.
It’s so much fun, isn’t it!?!?!?!? Finding pics is just so enjoyable. 😆😆😆 Ahhh, that sounds soooo cool!!!! Yes, I’d love to see it!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Yeah!! Aw thanks! ❤️❤️❤️ Oh no! I’m sorry girl! I’ll be praying! 💗
Yw!!!! 💗💗💗 Aww, girl, thanks for the prayers!!!! 💖💖💖
😜💖😍 He is doing great!! Well, as great as he can be with finding out his father is not his real father, and he almost hurt his brother and now his new found sister is very upset with him…
XD I feel so bad for him
Poor baby. 💗😍🤩😅🥰😭😢 He goes through so much. 😭❤️
I found the pics for the main side characters, btw, and made a board for the main cast…here you go!!! (if you wanna see it, lol!!! 😅😆)
They are, from left to right-
Top Row- Jamie, Phillip (they’re the POV MC’s! 🤩), Majors, Dwayne, and Bruce
Bottom Row- Kai, Timothy
March 13, 2023 at 3:04 pm #136616@freedomwriter76
It’s so much fun, isn’t it!?!?!?!? Finding pics is just so enjoyable. 😆😆😆 Ahhh, that sounds soooo cool!!!! Yes, I’d love to see it!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Yes!!!!!! XDXD
Yeah it is!!! Aww okay! Should I share it on this forum?
Yw!!!! 💗💗💗 Aww, girl, thanks for the prayers!!!! 💖💖💖
💖💖💖 You’re so welcome!!
Poor baby. 💗😍🤩😅🥰😭😢 He goes through so much. 😭❤️
😭❤️😭❤️😍😅🥰 AHHH I know!!! My poor baby.
I found the pics for the main side characters, btw, and made a board for the main cast…here you go!!! (if you wanna see it, lol!!! 😅😆)
Oh cool!! What book are they from? Or from a fan fiction? And WoW!! XDXD They look good! (And…I may be mistaken…but is Dwayne a picture of Sebastian Stan?)
#HugRikerSquad
March 13, 2023 at 3:07 pm #136617Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Yes!!!!!! XDXD
Yeah it is!!! Aww okay! Should I share it on this forum?
Yeah, you can!!! 💗💗💗
😭❤️😭❤️😍😅🥰 AHHH I know!!! My poor baby.
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Oh cool!! What book are they from? Or from a fan fiction? And WoW!! XDXD They look good!
They’re from my WIP Even In The Darkest, another WWII WIP!!! 🤩 It’s main message is how God is still good even in the darkest moments. 🥰 I have a blurb if you wanna see it. 😜
And IKR!?!?!? Soooo good!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣
(And…I may be mistaken…but is Dwayne a picture of Sebastian Stan?)
Don’t judge me…….Yes, it’s Sebastian. 🤣😆😅
March 13, 2023 at 3:12 pm #136618@freedomwriter76
Yeah, you can!!! 💗💗💗
Okay! Thank you! 💗💗
They’re from my WIP Even In The Darkest, another WWII WIP!!! 🤩 It’s main message is how God is still good even in the darkest moments.
I have a blurb if you wanna see it. 😜
AHH I LOVE it already!! Yes, I would love to see the blurb! 💗💗💗💗
And IKR!?!?!? Soooo good!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣
🤣🤣🤣💗💗💗
Don’t judge me…….
Yes, it’s Sebastian. 🤣😆😅
Oh I’m not 🤣😆😅!
He is so good looking XD#HugRikerSquad
March 13, 2023 at 3:13 pm #136619@freedomwriter76
Here’s what I’ve gotten so far! Enjoy! 😀
Six year old Abe took a bite of bread, a few small crumbs dropping into his lap. He started to brush them off onto the dirt floor of his home, but froze at a disapproving look from his mother. He grinned sheepishly.
Mother shook her head, smiling. Then her expression became thoughtful and she murmured softly, “Thomas should be in by now…”
She looked up. “Abe, will you go and tell Father that breakfast is ready?” Mother asked.
Abe nodded eagerly. “Yes, Mother!” He dropped his small piece of bread back on his plate, stood up, and darted out the door, calling out in his small voice, “Father, Father! Breakfast is ready!”
Father was working out in the woods near their home, and Abe knew exactly where he would be.
He shot through the forest of trees, his short little legs pumping as fast as they could. Up ahead, he could see his father, Thomas, and he yelled out once more, “Breakfast is ready, Father!” His father turned. He squinted, searching for the young boy in the brush. Then, catching sight of Abe, he smiled and waved.
“I’ll be right there! You go on back home.”
Abe smiled and shouted back, “Alright!”
He walked on his way back home, his little legs tired from darting through the woods with the agility and speed of a white tailed deer. As he exited the forest, walking into the clearing where his home stood a little ways away, he glanced toward the road and saw a company of several soldiers, walking together, slowly making their way up the road.
He stopped, watching them intently. The young boy had always enjoyed observing the many different people who walked by their home, trekking along the dusty and beaten path, when he wasn’t helping his Father or Mother with the chores around the house.
He slowly wandered over to the edge of the road, watching as they approached.
They wore faded uniforms, the tan colored material tinted even more so with the dust and dirt of the path.
Abe smiled, the gap of a missing front tooth adding to his youthful appearance.
“Hello!” He called out as soon as the men were within a few yards
They smiled kindly and echoed back, “Hello to you as well!”
Just then, Abe’s Mother came out of the house. “Abe? Abe! Where are you?” She called in the direction of the woods.
Abe grinned at the soldiers and waved goodbye, then trotted over to his mother.
* * * * *
“Mother…why must we be kind to the soldiers?” Abe asked, thinking about the men that he had greeted, reaching for a second piece of bread.
Mother’s expression became solemn. “Well, Abe…soldiers fight for our freedoms…they are the reason that we are free, so that we can read the Bible…that we can own our house…that we can be what we want to be. Abe, soldiers are the reason that we are free, and we must be grateful to them.”
Abe’s eyes were wide. “Really Mother? That is mighty kind of them.”
Mother nodded slowly. “Yes, Abe. Very kind of them. They live very hard lives, sleeping on the ground, traveling long distances with only their two feet, going without much food for long periods of time. And when they go to war, they leave their family; their little babies, their wives and children…and sometimes…they don’t come back.”
Abe’s eyes sobered. “That’s…that’s very brave…for them to do that.”
Mother smiled. “Yes…and for people they don’t even know.”
Abe frowned as he wondered how many children had fathers who were in the army…that didn’t get to call their fathers in for breakfast…that couldn’t help them cut wood and plow the fields…and some of the children fathers didn’t come back from the war.
He looked at his mother. “I shall always be good to the soldiers, always!” He declared with assurance.
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March 13, 2023 at 3:16 pm #136620Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Okay! Thank you! 💗💗
Yw!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
AHH I LOVE it already!! Yes, I would love to see the blurb! 💗💗💗💗
AWWWW, THANKS, GIRL!!!!!! ❤️😭💗🥰❤️
Here it is!!!
1944, and the Second World War continues to rage fiercely.
Jamie, a young Jewish, American paratrooper, is preparing to jump out of a plane early in the morning for Operation Overlord. He’s been training for months and is ready to do whatever he has to for his country and his friends. An immigrant, he loves America with his whole heart. His older brother, taken by the Nazis before the family left Austria, is still out there somewhere, and Jamie is determined to find him. But as D-Day ends and the Army pushes towards Germany, a grim reality is realized, and Jamie is no longer sure if his brother is even alive. And, he wonders, how could a good God let any of this happen?
Phillip, a paratrooper chaplain, is with his men always, even jumping out of a plane with them on D-Day. He does whatever he can and is always there when his men need him. He’s been training for a while and is ready to do whatever God needs him to do. But he’s not a perfect man by any means, and he is still struggling with grief and guilt from his wife’s death years ago. And as he and his men get closer to Germany, horrible camps are discovered, and his men instantly start coming to him for answers. But Phillip doesn’t have all the answers…and they’re the same questions he’s struggled with since his wife’s death. Truly, how could a good God allow bad things to happen?
Both of their lives intertwined in both D-Day and the discovery of the Holocaust, Jamie and Phillip see and question things they never thought they would.
And they both ask questions that have no easy answers, but what they will discover is this;
Even in the darkest night,
God is still good.
Oh I’m not 🤣😆😅!
He is so good looking XDLol, that’s good to know!!! 🤣🤣🤣 (jkjk, I knew you weren’t…I was just joking with you. 😜)
I mean…you’re not wrong…XDMarch 13, 2023 at 3:19 pm #136621Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. AHHH, LOVE IT!!!!! 🤩😍😍😍😍😍
That’s really good, girl!!! Love it so much!!! 💗💗💗💗💗
March 13, 2023 at 3:21 pm #136623@freedomwriter76
AHHH I LOVE IT!!! Girl, you come up with the best war story ideas ever!! I want to read it so bad now!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Lol, that’s good to know!!! 🤣🤣🤣 (jkjk, I knew you weren’t…I was just joking with you.
🤣🤣🤣 I know, I was joking back, lol. 😀
I mean…you’re not wrong…XD🤣🤣🤣❤️❤️❤️
#HugRikerSquad
March 13, 2023 at 3:23 pm #136624@freedomwriter76
AHHH, LOVE IT!!!!! 🤩😍😍😍😍😍
Aww THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! 💗💗💗
That’s really good, girl!!! Love it so much!!! 💗💗💗💗💗
Thank you!!! ❤️❤️❤️ You’re so sweet!
#HugRikerSquad
March 13, 2023 at 3:27 pm #136625Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. You are soooo welcome, girl!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
AHHH I LOVE IT!!! Girl, you come up with the best war story ideas ever!! I want to read it so bad now!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
AWWW, GIRL!!!!! 😭❤️ I’m so glad!!!! Thank you so much!!!! You are soooo sweet!!!! ❤️❤️❤️😭
March 13, 2023 at 3:34 pm #136626@freedomwriter76
You are soooo welcome, girl!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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AWWW, GIRL!!!!! 😭❤️ I’m so glad!!!! Thank you so much!!!! You are soooo sweet!!!! ❤️❤️❤️😭
You are soooo welcome!! ❤️❤️❤️ Yess!! It sounds AMAZING!!!! Awww thank you girl!!! You are too!! ❤️❤️❤️
Well, I’d better get off now, I’ve got to wash some dishes and finish math. It was great talking with you, as always, and I hope you have a great rest of the day!! Love ya sister!! ❤️❤️
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March 13, 2023 at 3:36 pm #136627Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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You are soooo welcome!! ❤️❤️❤️ Yess!! It sounds AMAZING!!!! Awww thank you girl!!! You are too!! ❤️❤️❤️
Aww, girl, I’m glad you think so!!! ❤️😭❤️ Yw!!!! 💗💗💗💗
Well, I’d better get off now, I’ve got to wash some dishes and finish math. It was great talking with you, as always, and I hope you have a great rest of the day!! Love ya sister!! ❤️❤️
It was amazing talking with you too!!! You too, girl!!!! Love you too, girl!!! 🥰❤️💗🥰
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