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  • #182108
    -GRCR-
    @grcr
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      @ellette-giselle

      I think the chapter was good! Intriguing. I don’t really have any thoughts in a critical sense, and I’m not the best person to ask… but I do like it! The last part was pretty sad to read!

      Ugh, I’m sorry that it took me a while to respond…😓😓

      (also I love the board!)

       

      • This reply was modified 4 months ago by -GRCR-.

      🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍

      #182110
      Ellette Giselle
      @ellette-giselle
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        @grcr

         

        I think the chapter was good! Intriguing.

        Thanks! I’m glad!

        I don’t really have any thoughts in a critical sense, and I’m not the best person to ask… but I do like it!

        Oh that’s ok. I was more looking for general response as a reader, not so much critical  feedback as of yet. (though it’s always welcome.)

        The last part was pretty sad to read!

        Well, it was suposed to be. XD

         

        I’m glad you like the board. I have another one finished that I’m just about to post.

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

        Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

        #182112
        Ellette Giselle
        @ellette-giselle
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          Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

          #182113
          Ellette Giselle
          @ellette-giselle
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            and here’s another.

             

            Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

            #182114
            -GRCR-
            @grcr
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              @ellette-giselle

              😀 XD

              ooo the other boards look good too! The temporarily misplaced quote is funny XD

               

              Oh that’s ok. I was more looking for general response as a reader, not so much critical  feedback as of yet. (though it’s always welcome.)

              Ah, ok! 😀

               

              🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍

              #182115
              Esther
              @esther-c
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                @ellette-giselle

                Love the boards!!

                Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

                #182117
                RAE
                @rae
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                  @ellette-giselle

                  “Nope, still not lost. Just temporarily misplaced the destination.”

                  “Left! Left! Left!…your other left!”

                  “Skilled enough to take it apart Patient enough to put it back together Smart enough to hide the extra parts when I’m done”

                  Three Krogen quotes right there! LOL Cgecko needs to see this!

                  Totally can see someone saying this.

                   

                  Welp, my immune system has just been boosted for the rest of the day.

                  "You need French Toast."

                  #182134
                  Ellette Giselle
                  @ellette-giselle
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                    @rae @grcr @esther-c

                    Haha, I’m glad y’all like them!! I have a few more I’ll put on here!

                    Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                    #182135
                    Ellette Giselle
                    @ellette-giselle
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                      Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                      #182136
                      Ellette Giselle
                      @ellette-giselle
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                        Captain Michael!!!! Love this guy!

                         

                        Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                        #182137
                        Ellette Giselle
                        @ellette-giselle
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                          Ok, Ron’s great too! Love my sniper!

                           

                          Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                          #182138
                          Ellette Giselle
                          @ellette-giselle
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                            Aaaand my poor boy. Jack has it rough.

                             

                            Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                            #182141
                            Sara
                            @savannah_grace2009
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                              @ellette-giselle

                              Omc where do you find all these quotes? I love them!

                              Lukas&Livia
                              #Lalbert
                              Sef&Chase
                              #HOTTOLINE
                              LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                              #182143
                              Ellette Giselle
                              @ellette-giselle
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                                @savannah_grace2009

                                um….. 90% of them I made up…… a few my dad and brothers say…… and the other couple were on a word document of quotes I’ve collected.

                                Let’s see…..

                                Most of Evan’s are from the letters of ww2 pilots, the “what are we waiting for” and “I know the other stuff was me” are direct lines from the book.

                                For Ron, the “finger on the trigger” one is from a song called Trigger from the soundtrack to the movie Terminal List. (I haven’t seen it, I just like the music.) The rest are things my dad says, A sniper I know, and a sniper who fought in Desert Storm.

                                All of Michael’s I made up.

                                 

                                Amber’s I made up too, though I may have heard one of them somewhere before……..

                                 

                                Brian’s are quotes from the book itself.

                                 

                                Jason’s are things my dad says, and things I made up.

                                 

                                I made up all of Jack’s.

                                 

                                And I made up all of Jonathan’s.

                                 

                                So, there you go!!

                                Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                                #182145
                                -GRCR-
                                @grcr
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                                  @ellette-giselle

                                  Love them! Are all of these characters the ones from the story you posted the prologue and chapter about?

                                  Also it’s really cool that you made up most of those quotes! That can be a taxing job sometimes lol 💛💛

                                   

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