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I think the chapter was good! Intriguing. I don’t really have any thoughts in a critical sense, and I’m not the best person to ask… but I do like it! The last part was pretty sad to read!
Ugh, I’m sorry that it took me a while to respond…😓😓
(also I love the board!)
If you pluck them, they explode. Goro.
I think the chapter was good! Intriguing.
Thanks! I’m glad!
I don’t really have any thoughts in a critical sense, and I’m not the best person to ask… but I do like it!
Oh that’s ok. I was more looking for general response as a reader, not so much critical feedback as of yet. (though it’s always welcome.)
The last part was pretty sad to read!
Well, it was suposed to be. XD
I’m glad you like the board. I have another one finished that I’m just about to post.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
and here’s another.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
😀 XD
ooo the other boards look good too! The temporarily misplaced quote is funny XD
Oh that’s ok. I was more looking for general response as a reader, not so much critical feedback as of yet. (though it’s always welcome.)
Ah, ok! 😀
If you pluck them, they explode. Goro.
“Nope, still not lost. Just temporarily misplaced the destination.”
“Left! Left! Left!…your other left!”
“Skilled enough to take it apart Patient enough to put it back together Smart enough to hide the extra parts when I’m done”
Three Krogen quotes right there! LOL Cgecko needs to see this!
Totally can see someone saying this.
Welp, my immune system has just been boosted for the rest of the day.
You need French Toast.
#AnduthForever (💕)
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Captain Michael!!!! Love this guy!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Ok, Ron’s great too! Love my sniper!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Aaaand my poor boy. Jack has it rough.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Omc where do you find all these quotes? I love them!
This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.
um….. 90% of them I made up…… a few my dad and brothers say…… and the other couple were on a word document of quotes I’ve collected.
Let’s see…..
Most of Evan’s are from the letters of ww2 pilots, the “what are we waiting for” and “I know the other stuff was me” are direct lines from the book.
For Ron, the “finger on the trigger” one is from a song called Trigger from the soundtrack to the movie Terminal List. (I haven’t seen it, I just like the music.) The rest are things my dad says, A sniper I know, and a sniper who fought in Desert Storm.
All of Michael’s I made up.
Amber’s I made up too, though I may have heard one of them somewhere before……..
Brian’s are quotes from the book itself.
Jason’s are things my dad says, and things I made up.
I made up all of Jack’s.
And I made up all of Jonathan’s.
So, there you go!!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Love them! Are all of these characters the ones from the story you posted the prologue and chapter about?
Also it’s really cool that you made up most of those quotes! That can be a taxing job sometimes lol 💛💛
If you pluck them, they explode. Goro.
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