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I drafted the song again, not sure if i really like it yet, but it’s a step closer than yesterday.
Life is a waking nightmare,
Day after day, I roll along without you
Night is a dagger of pain because you are there
Haunting my dreams like some old ghost,
Calling my name from some lost coast.
But the years grow longer,
And the gap wider.
Since you’ve been gone I’ve broken apart.
Since you’ve been gone I’ve lost my heart.
Why is it this way, why did you have to go?
I’m dreaming of a sunset, with you again.
I’m dreaming of a time, when I was broken,
When you comforted me, many a moment.
But now, you. Are. Gone.
Yet your voice still sounds, in my mind.
Your sweet voice, in my memory.
It’s you I really want to see.
But the years grow longer,
And the gap wider.
Since you’ve been gone I’ve broken apart.
Since you’ve been gone I’ve lost my heart.
Why is it this way, why did you have to go?
How many tears have to be shed,
Before I can forget the dead?
How many hearts have to be broken,
Before the world can be new again?
But the years grow longer,
And the gap wider.
Since you’ve been gone I’ve broken apart.
Since you’ve been gone I’ve lost my heart.
Why is it this way, why did you have to go?
And it’s the tears on my face,
Trying to call you from some faraway place,
But the years grow longer,
And the gap wider.
Since you’ve been gone I’ve broken apart.
Since you’ve been gone I’ve lost my heart.
Why is it this way, why did you have to go?
Why did you have to go?
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)I like it how it is, tbh. I think it sounds great!
I’m dreaming of a time, when I was broken,
When you comforted me, many a time.
This part though doesn’t flow as smoothly as the rest of it. Um… I wish I could offer a suggestion… Maybe it could go something like this…?
I’m dreaming of a time, when I am hurting,
And you comfort my aching heart
It doesn’t have as may syllables and I don’t know if the idea is what you’re going for. I’m not much of a poetry or song writer, so this is my excuse of a suggestion 😂 That’s all I can offer XD
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
Oh wait, I just read your most recent draft and I like it even better!! I think it could stay as it is if you like it. 🙃
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
Oh, it’s even better!
And it’s the tears on my face,
Trying to call you from some faraway place,
Ah, this part is very sad…
INTP.
@rae so sad, now that I know the context….
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I just realized something that will make Leon/Riker’s 2nd novel even sadder……
…after doing some research, I realized that babies have to be around someone a lot in order to remember them…
…and Leon’s been away for over a year…
…which means that Albert and Elias, Leon’s youngest two…
…won’t recognize him.
and now my heart is broken😭😭
@freedomwriter76
Stop!! no!!
*cries* Leon!!
and oh my word they won’t remember their Mom either!!!
*cries some more*
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
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*offers tissues*
Okay, so after talking to Mom, who has a degree in Counseling and knows a lot about psychology, Albert would recognize Leon…
…but Elias still wouldn’t😭
@freedomwriter76
yayyyyyy and booooooooo at the same time
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneHiii everyone! How is everyone’s sabbath going?
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:*appears*
Yes, I’ve been gone from KP for a long time. I WISH TO CHANGE THAT. XD
So… today’s been great! Writing, worship, toddlers… lots of fun lol.
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
@freedomwriter76 aww that’s sad!
@kyronthearcanin hey, haven’t seen you in a while!!"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
Yeah, sorry about that lol. 😅 My family started running a church, so I had worship and writing and nursery stuff to figure out, plus we do worship at another church… so it’s been busy. But I really wanted to come back! I missed you guys a lot, you’re a fun group lol.
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
@kyronthearcanin there’s nothing to apologize to! also, it’s cool what you’ve been doing!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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