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January 4, 2024 at 5:35 pm #172405Anonymous
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@smiley ACK, I didn’t reply!! 😭
Yeah I love my friends, the funny thing is I have as many guy friends as girl friends lol but then again I feel like there are a lot of girls like that, honestly guys are just easier XD
They really are tho😂
My BFF is a girl, but my other friend that I’m prob the 2nd closest to is a guy, so I do understand, and it’s probably just as common as you say, lol XD
How was Youth Night, btw?
*Hugs back* thanks, I’m getting through it, and I have an idea for one of my fanfics so I’m working on that right now and I’m still figuring out how I’m going to plan my novel (I had a name idea and then I was like no, I’ll save that for a later book in the series)
I also read a lot of contemporary to figure out what I like and don’t like
It’s good that you’re reading books in your genre. It really does help, haha!
Yw!🩷 Hey, well, a title idea is progress!! <3 Fanfic?? 👀
When you say Riker’s scene is better, do you mean more tragic?!
yeah, I feel that, but you can never go wrong with Leon!
Maybe. Maybe not. I’m not going to tell you. XDFair. Leon is amazing either way😜
Doctors can be so frustrating!! it took a good few years before they finally diagnosed what was wrong with my Grandma
Ikr? Yeah, I know everyone’s faced it, but it’s just so frustrating, just like you said
I get that, just remember to have high faith in God (after all Jesus healed quite a few people cause of their stong faith)
I’ll be praying
Thx girl, I needed that reminder🩷 And tysm for the prayers. It means a lot <3
also kind of off and on that topic, I saw this thing on Pinterest and now I really want to make one, It’s a prayer bulletin board
although mine I want to be a faith bulletin board, so basically anything Jesus lol
Ooh, that’s cool! I’ve seen stuff like that before 🩷
thx for asking tho, it means a lot <3
ofc!! I’m always here if you need to talk
You are so welcome; I’m happy to be here for you🩷🩷
Ty so much <33
January 4, 2024 at 6:29 pm #172411@freedomwriter76
Youth was a lot of fun!! I was thankful to see my friends again
Haha yeah my best friend is a girl and she’s the only one who can truly handle my crazy (I always come off as cool and normal but I’m anything but to my close friends LOL)
Yeah this fanfic idea involves all the Avengers… including Bucky (it’s a continuation of that scene I wrote earlier with the sokovian chocolates)
Riker!! Why do you put him through so much??!!
Of course girl, I’m glad I can be someone that’s praying for you
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJanuary 4, 2024 at 10:31 pm #172435Hello folks! 👋🏻
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January 5, 2024 at 4:19 pm #172483Heyyy!! How are you doing? How’s writing going?
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 5, 2024 at 6:07 pm #172494@freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @jonas @esther-c @smily @whalekeeper @hybridlore @idk
Ignore me if you wish, I literally just typed in tags since i didn’t know what else to do (If you can tell)
I’m trying to write a song for Alpha Grath. This is for after he looses Emmie (if you don’t know who she is, she was the love of his life and then she died) and it’s giving me so much trouble! I’m open for ANYTHING! Just help me out!
I’m dreaming of a sunset, with you again. I’m dreaming of a time, when I was broken, when you comforted me, many a time. But now, you. Are. Gone. Yet your voice still sounds, in my mind. Your sweet voice, in my memory. It’s you I really want to see.
But the years grow longer, and the gap wider. Since you’ve been gone I’ve broken apart. Since you’ve been gone I’ve lost my heart. It’s seems the hero bleeds, and the evil succeeds. Why is it this way, why did you have to go? How many tears have to be shed, before I can forget the dead? How many hearts have to be broken, before the world can be new again?
That’s all I got. I really am not happy with the first verse. I also don’t know how to go on with the song.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)January 5, 2024 at 6:28 pm #172496January 5, 2024 at 6:44 pm #172497It is really good!! and sad…
I’m not sure that I can really help… so sorry…
Flaz: *yawns* Did the sun just come up? In the west?
January 5, 2024 at 8:14 pm #172499I don’t know much about writing songs XD But I still write poetry, so maybe I can help! Do you have a melody in mind, or are you letting the reader imagine it and are instead writing an almost-melodic poem?
“Everything is a mountain”
January 5, 2024 at 8:35 pm #172500I’m not very good at coming up with lyrics, but I like what you have. I also write music, so if you happened to need help with that part of the process (assuming you are writing music to go with the words), I would be happy to give advice. It might help if you arranged the words in lines. That would at least help me see it clearly, because it’s a bit hard for me to see what how the rhymes match up and stuff.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksJanuary 6, 2024 at 1:07 am #172502Oh man, guys, I think I’m more insane than usual…I just sang that song while in Alpha’s character cloak, and I’m crying. Like tears on my face and a runny nose. And now I’m wondering…
WHY DID I KILL HER?!?!!
But alas, history is written, and I cannot alter it.
@jonas @whoever else would like it in lines @whalekeeperNot sure if I’m dividing this right, I only write charrie song lyrics as a side hobby, they’re not supposed to be my livelihood.
I’m dreaming of a sunset, with you again.
I’m dreaming of a time, when I was broken,
When you comforted me, many a time.
But now, you. Are. Gone.
Yet your voice still sounds, in my mind.
Your sweet voice, in my memory.
It’s you I really want to see.
But the years grow longer,
And the gap wider.
Since you’ve been gone I’ve broken apart.
Since you’ve been gone I’ve lost my heart.
It’s seems the hero bleeds,
And the evil succeeds.
Why is it this way, why did you have to go?
How many tears have to be shed,
Before I can forget the dead?
How many hearts have to be broken, before the world can be new again?
I made in bold the parts I like, but don’t fit too well.
@whaley
Do you have a melody in mind, or are you letting the reader imagine it and are instead writing an almost-melodic poem?
I have a melody, but haven’t composed anything as far as plunking on the piano. I’m not planning on it being a melodic poem.
@creepycloakedmysteryguy (sorry if that offends you. I’m in a Silvanis mood rn, which means waving my arms around and acting like an idiot when I know what I’m doing…scratch that, Acting like an idiot when I don’t know what I’m doing.)
I also write music, so if you happened to need help with that part of the process (assuming you are writing music to go with the words), I would be happy to give advice.
Oh great. That was actually my next request from ppl. I can’t write the actual music part, I’ve tried and it ended in a angry outburst, the song being trashed and a bad mood for the rest of the day. I do play piano, but I don’t have a note composer mind, only melody and words. Once I have words, I usually have a melody, (have you ever put O Captain, my Captain! By Walt Whitman to a melody? It sounded great in the moment, but then I lost the tune) just no ink notes on a page. So…
I might be able to record myself singing the song, and post it, but no promises.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)January 6, 2024 at 7:58 am #172504Okay, great! I will warn you that transcribing from sound to written music is probably my biggest weakness as a composer, but if you do post it, I will do my very best. I should be able to figure it out given enough time.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksJanuary 6, 2024 at 8:51 am #172507January 6, 2024 at 8:52 am #172508For me the struggle is with the lengths of the notes and not the note name. Especially with shorter notes, it’s often hard for me to tell.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksJanuary 6, 2024 at 8:55 am #172509I don’t find that particularly difficult.
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
January 6, 2024 at 8:55 am #172510Okay.
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