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October 30, 2023 at 9:06 pm #161908
My WIP has who but Nahim. But he’s different then in the rp. The rp is set after my WIP. Nahim causes me a lot of tears inΒ Guardian Angels.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 30, 2023 at 9:08 pm #161909Oh..why tears? What happens?
"We don't play to win, we win by playing."
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October 30, 2023 at 9:11 pm #161910“…It’s as if He’s just gone, forsaken my life.
Where are You? Where are You?
Where have You gone when I need You?
He seems far far away.
Gone. Disappeared. Said good bye.
Hiding Your face when I need to see it.
He’s left me in a fog
Does He still even love me?…”
Song in writing, for Nahim in my WIP.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 30, 2023 at 9:13 pm #161911Oh my, that does sound sad. Is it about his lover?
"We don't play to win, we win by playing."
-Fellowship Bible Chapel
October 30, 2023 at 9:15 pm #161912Oh..why tears? What happens?
Well, first I kill his family and almost kill him. I destroy his trust. I destroy his life. Then I almost kill him again by giving him to his worst enemy. Then I pair him with someone he doesn’t like, separated from his only true friend. On and on it goes and in the end, he can’t write anymore cuz he had to get a robotic hand and I almost killed him for the millionth time! Then when he doubts God, and especially when he sings his doubts like above, I just cry.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 30, 2023 at 9:17 pm #161913He hates God. He doesn’t understand God, even though he’s a Christian. It’s like a wandering from faith and coming back story.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 30, 2023 at 9:18 pm #161915Nahim in many ways reflects me, so study him closely and you shall discover pieces of Ru.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 30, 2023 at 9:19 pm #161916I see. Does the book end sad or did God have to break him to build him up and it ends good?
"We don't play to win, we win by playing."
-Fellowship Bible Chapel
October 30, 2023 at 9:20 pm #161917Do you hate God?
"We don't play to win, we win by playing."
-Fellowship Bible Chapel
October 30, 2023 at 9:20 pm #161918He still has his struggles, but it ends happy.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 30, 2023 at 9:24 pm #161919I’ll be honest, God and I haven’t been getting along for about a year. And yeah, I guess right now I do. I just don’t understand why He had to do what he did, he shattered my life and hasn’t built it up again. He created conflict in our house and killed my best friend and relative in the whole wide world, in a horrible way! He and I haven’t really talked lately.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 30, 2023 at 9:26 pm #161920Right now, Nahim inΒ Guardian AngelsΒ is spiritually on the same page as me.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 30, 2023 at 9:31 pm #161921So, I guess I love Nahim so much cuz he and I are two friends a like to each other in many ways.
Funny, how you’re more willing to talk to someone you’ve never met before over the internet than you are to talk to your parents and friends. Not many people actually know…
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 30, 2023 at 9:32 pm #161922Are you there?
I’ll be back in like ten to twenty mins, got to take care of something.
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