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January 23, 2023 at 8:44 am #129719Anonymous
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And the 2nd MC.
He stared out at the barbed wire…the dirt filled with holes.
He’d fought…he’d been injured…he’d watched so many friends die.
Childhood had been hard…but nothing had prepared him for this.
They had lost the war…but it was more than a war that they had lost.
“…We fought the war, brother…” Felix whispered, placing a hand on his shoulder.
Hans continued to stare out at the destruction…unable to take his eyes away.
“…I think the war won.”
January 23, 2023 at 8:47 am #129720@freedomwriter76
AHHHH GIRL IT LOOKS AMAZING!!!! =O
*composes self*
Anyways. Yes, I would be most interested in hearing about it. =)"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 23, 2023 at 8:47 am #129721Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. Don’t worry, I’ll cry when I write this story too… *sobs*
I know!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Aww, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
(Lol, yes, that is true…he does look pretty good😂 She didn’t marry him until he was older tho…at this time, he’s married to Adinah, which I can’t wait to write!!!! ✨❤️)
Oh, and I just posted the 2nd MC if you didn’t see it yet. 😉
January 23, 2023 at 8:49 am #129722Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@gwyndalf-the-wise. AWW, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Welllll…everyone will probably hear a lot more about this before too long, lol. I kinda really wanna write it. 😂
January 23, 2023 at 8:57 am #129723@freedomwriter76
OH MY GOODNESS!!! Hans!! They’re so young and precious and innocent…*Sobs heartbrokenly*
Oh yeah, it’s a good story to read when we want to cry 😭😭😭
You are so welcome!! Oh man, I can’t wait to read more!! Hmm, I was wondering who had said that when you had it as your signature.
“…We fought the war, brother…” Felix whispered, placing a hand on his shoulder.
Hans continued to stare out at the destruction…unable to take his eyes away.
“…I think the war won.”
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Oh yeah!! Aww, I can’t wait. Hold up…is there a young Leo??
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January 23, 2023 at 10:47 am #129725@freedomwriter76 NOOOOOO 😭
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#ProtectSebJanuary 23, 2023 at 10:48 am #129726Why??? My heaaaart 😭
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#ProtectSebJanuary 23, 2023 at 11:41 am #129730@godlyfantasy12 Thanks for making this lovely topic!!
@freedomwriter76 Wow I can’t wait to hear more about it. I may share my new WW2 idea on here soon too.
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January 23, 2023 at 2:25 pm #129741Fantastic topic idea!! (And an super creative name that beats all! XDXD)
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Ooooh! So is that a story about some of your charries but young?? That’s awesome!!
Epic moodboards!
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January 23, 2023 at 3:13 pm #129763Yall I really want to make some mood boards later for some of my mains villains/antagonists…
rn it would be Riven, Lilith, Kainda and Ridley…. I’d probs share them here
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#ProtectSebJanuary 23, 2023 at 4:27 pm #129777Made one!!
well y’all….here is Ridley’s mood board!
So…it’s kinda dark….
but yea 😅
I ended up finding this anime character (Idk who it is cuz I don’t want anime unless U count Pokémon or whatever lol) who fit perfect for him, which is so awesome! So I was able to collect a lot of pics! (Luv when that happens lol, I don’t know who the characters are but I’m like OK THESE ARE MINE NOW XD)
ALSO A SONG TO GO WITH HIM!
(I’m going to have one for each main villain/antagonist. Or most of them anyway!) also I totally suggest u go listen to get a feel for the Charrie and then let me know what u think about them. Also all the songs are clean (I don’t listen to anything bad obviously lol)and despite the name, this song is really cool and made by a “Christian” rock band
Ridley’s Theme: Circus For A Psycho by Skillet
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#ProtectSebJanuary 23, 2023 at 6:06 pm #129788@freedomwriter76
WOW!! Love the idea, it’s super cool! I would totally read that. I have really hard time keeping all of your charries straight, are those three ones I might already know/have I read any of there story before? Also, just realized you wright mostly guys 😂 I’m the same way, I only have two girl mc’s in my entire series lol.
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January 23, 2023 at 6:08 pm #129789I don’t know that anime character either, but lol he’s so cute XD Love the moodboard! Poor Ridley, sounds like he goes through it ; (
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January 23, 2023 at 6:25 pm #129790Me over here anxiously waiting to see if you make a board for Aramis….XDOooh!! I’ve heard you talk about Ridley before…he’s got something to do with Jocelyn and Nyx, right?
Me and my family sometimes listen to Skillet!! We actually went to a concert of theirs one time with one of our friends. So I know that song!
I guess i’s showing what is. Our villain’s are evil and dark, so I guess it would be deceiving to make a happy looking mood board for them (unless maybe they get a redemption arc).
I mean, there can’t be light if there isn’t darkness 😉. And when there is darkness, the light shines out so much brighter.
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January 23, 2023 at 7:04 pm #129796Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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OH MY GOODNESS!!! Hans!! They’re so young and precious and innocent…*Sobs heartbrokenly*
UGHHHHH, I KNOWWWWWWW!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭
Oh yeah, it’s a good story to read when we want to cry 😭😭😭
That’s for sure. *sobs*
You are so welcome!! Oh man, I can’t wait to read more!! Hmm, I was wondering who had said that when you had it as your signature.
Aww, thank you!!! 💕💕💕 I’m so glad you’re intrigued. So, yeah…that was Felix and Hans. I didn’t know if anyone had even seen it, lol. 😂
Oh yeah!! Aww, I can’t wait.
I’m glad!!! I can’t wait either! 😂😀😜
Hold up…is there a young Leo??
There sure is!!!! A little, adorable, 1 year old, sweetie pie Leo!!! 💖💖💖
NOOOOOO 😭 Why??? My heaaaart 😭
I know…I know…I keep breaking your heart.
We keep doing it to each other, actually…😅😂
And also, I’D LOVE TO SEE MORE VILLAIN BOARDS!!! (and I have Hans’ board for when he’s older, if anyone wants to see it…)
And oh my goodness…Ridley…well…his board certainly makes him look like a villain. 😬
Also, great song for him. 👌🏻 I love Skillet, and I was recently listening to that song and I’m listening to it again…and really getting a feel for Ridley…😬😬😬
Wow I can’t wait to hear more about it.
Thank you!!! 💖💖💖
I may share my new WW2 idea on here soon too.
A WW2 WIP…? 🧐 Please do tell at some point in the near future…I am intrigued already. 🤔
Ooooh! So is that a story about some of your charries but young?? That’s awesome!!
Epic moodboards!
Sure is!!! 😉 Aww, thank you!!! I’m glad you like the idea and boards! 💕💕💕
WOW!! Love the idea, it’s super cool! I would totally read that.
Aww, thank you so much!!!! 💕💕💕
I have really hard time keeping all of your charries straight, are those three ones I might already know/have I read any of there story before?
I understand. Sometimes I lose track. 😂
Felix is The Boys’ (Leo, Joshua, Jakob, Reuben, Wolfgang) father, and Hans is his younger brother, AKA the main villain, and Riker’s commanding officer, of my book with Leon/Riker. And they are both, during WW2, abusive towards their kids and cruel officers in the SS.
And Felix is married to Frida, The Boys’ evil stepmother (I’ve started calling her “Evil Lady” 😂😂😂) who is Adolphus/Dietrich’s birth mother.
But don’t worry about getting my characters mixed up, I do it quite often, and I’M THE WRITER!🤣
Also, just realized you wright mostly guys 😂 I’m the same way, I only have two girl mc’s in my entire series lol.
Yeah…I love writing guys, and, though I’m a girl, they’re…easier for me to write somehow…?🤷🏻♀️
Yeah…That’s something I still can’t explain. 😂
But yeah, most of my MC’s and just characters in general are guys, but I still love my girl characters! The guys are just easier to write for some reason, lol. 😅😂
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