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June 14, 2023 at 5:31 pm #147788
*me bows*
thanks, it’s a skill, XD
just wait until you read my latest short story for my monthly prompt
*me cries* Poor Wanda XD
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJune 14, 2023 at 5:35 pm #147791*glares*
…what did you do to poor Wanda??
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
June 14, 2023 at 5:40 pm #147793June 14, 2023 at 6:59 pm #147799@Freedomwriter76
RIKER 🥹😭🥹😭❤️❤️❤️ I love him so much girllll…I still can’t believe he was once supposed to be the villain XD 😭 He’s too precious to even picture that!
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June 14, 2023 at 7:43 pm #147801ok I don’t think I’ve ever actually commented on this forum 😶BUT HI EVERYONE, QUESTION, y’all ever find yourselves in the situation where you have two major WIPs to finish and one of them is just SO CLOSE to being done and when you FINALLY have time to sit down and write…………… your brain decides to absolutely BLANK OUT about both of those marvelous WIPs and instead pulls you in a totally different direction, begging you to start on a TOTALLY NEW project……….. even tho it’s not entirely sure what that new project will be……….
WELL THAT’S WHAT I’M DEALIN WITH TODAY FOLKS AND I THINK MY WAYWARD IMAGINATION IS GONNA WIN OVER MY GOOD SENSE XD
I have no special talent. I am only passionately curious.
June 14, 2023 at 7:46 pm #147802June 15, 2023 at 11:45 am #147857@freedomwriter76 Wow, nice board!!
Also…..Riker was a villain when you first came up with him??? It’s crazy how much things have changed since then! Although, to be honest, his name does have that sort of connotation….. In the How To Train Your Dragon TV shows, one of the dragon trapper villains was named Ryker (They spelled it with a y there I guess).
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 15, 2023 at 1:55 pm #147882Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@starshiness UHHHH, YES! Every day, girl…every day…XD
@keilah-h Tysm!! ❤️Haha, yep, he was! 😂 Ooh, cool!!
June 15, 2023 at 5:00 pm #147902hey there! How are you doing?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
June 16, 2023 at 8:22 pm #148044@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 *sobs the tears of a broken writer*
I have no special talent. I am only passionately curious.
June 16, 2023 at 8:45 pm #148061@mineralizedwritings (I’m going to post it here so we don’t continue to fill up the poetry topic with non-poetry related stuff. 😉)
Yeahhhh… XD I thought Everton was going to be some broken boi that I was going to feel bad for, (and sometimes I do) but I’ve gotten to know him more and it’s a little different than that. 😉
I think I would… sort of, I guess. XD He’s definitely cocky and doesn’t mind being the center of attention. 😂
Alrighty, so here’s some spoilers about Adrian!! So he is Derek Len’s son. Ever since he was young, he was trained to be some type of an elite soldier. (So sort of like military training, but a little different.) He’s really good at hand-to-hand combat, self-defense, shooting, and all kinds of cool stuff, if you know what I mean. 😉 He is Len’s Ziton Soldier. He completes secret missions for his father, and most missions are targeted at those who rebel against Len’s regime. Well, his most recent mission has to do with Ami, Ev, and their families. Adrian thinks it’s going to be easy. Find them. Make them trust him. Learn about their mission. Then turn them over to his father. But as he gets to know them, he finds it not so easy.
To quickly gain their trust, he saves them as they are being chased by some soldiers. But they still aren’t readily willing to trust him at first. As time goes on, they do begin to trust him. He even helps them out. Yet the more time he spends with them, the more he starts to think that they are actually on the right side and doing the right thing. To make matters worse for him, he starts to fall for Amidala, and Ami fall for him. (And I could go on a whole rabbit trail about how this effects Ev and his character arc. XD) His desire to earn his father’s love and acceptance conflicts with his love for Ami and the rest of the group. (Specifically her family) So the time comes when he has to choose whether to betray the group and please his father, or keep them safe and help them on their mission.
He ends up betraying them to his father.
The whole group is hurt by his treachery, but mostly Ami. She’s absolutely crushed. (And Ev… well, he has conflicting feelings. XD)
Adrian regrets his decision soon afterwards, but is too ashamed to try to earn forgiveness from them. He shows up in the sequel to the trilogy though, and will end up redeemed, by finding out that he doesn’t need to earn his father’s acceptance. Because Derek is redeemed too, so he has a change of heart eventually. (And by sequel, I mean either a sequel, or two extra books turning my trilogy into a saga. Heh 😅😂)
Basically, Adrian has a good heart, but his morals conflict with his desire to be loved and appreciated by his father.
So that’s Adrian!
And here’s his moodboard…
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
June 17, 2023 at 12:21 pm #148096Aww I love it all! He’s totally my favorite now. OoooHHhh is that a Love triangle I hear of? XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
June 17, 2023 at 2:46 pm #148119Thanks so much!! 😊
Yes it isss!! I’m kind of excited to write it 😏 I was unsure at first, but after some consideration and some feedback from some other Keepers, I decided to go with it. It affects all three charries’ character arcs as well. Ami falls for Adrian because he’s paying attention to her in the way she wishes Ev would sometimes. Adrian just loves her. Ev is super jealous and never ends up trusting Adrian in the first place. Ev is jealous because he likes Ami. And because he feels like she is the only person who truly loves him. So when she falls for Adrian, his pride and desire to valued by someone is pretty evident. He then starts to doubt if he is really worthy of love. In the end, Ami learns that people express their love for someone in different ways and that communication is key in any relationship. Ev learns that true love is unconditional and that Ami will always love him, even if it’s just as a friend. Adrian… well, you’ve already heard about him. 😉
So yeah, I’m really looking forward to writing the second book as a whole because of how much relational/personal conflict there is. (Which sounds really terrible, but, hey, I’m a writer. What else do you expect? 😂)
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
June 17, 2023 at 2:46 pm #148120I’m actually thinking about adding him into the all boys royal academy role play… 😏
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
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