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January 26, 2023 at 5:20 pm #130211
I’m sobbing in the back of the car rn. If my grandparents look back here they’re going to think something is wrong.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 26, 2023 at 5:20 pm #130212It’s so sweet but…. 💔
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#ProtectSebJanuary 26, 2023 at 5:21 pm #130213Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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For a little background: I’m doing flash backs for the slice of life scenes so that might make it easier. 🤷♀️
January 26, 2023 at 5:21 pm #130214Dietrich has a special place in my heart…..
I can’t explain it.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 26, 2023 at 5:24 pm #130215Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h. Aww, thanks!!! 💕💕💕 I wanted his arc to be complete…and, well…this is how it decided to end…heh…😭😭😭
@sarafini. Yes, Dietrich…😭😭😭
OH.
MY.
GOSH.
I DIDN’T MEAN TO MAKE YOU CRY!!!! 😭😭😭 (I mean, as a writer…it makes me feel confident in my writing skills, but as your friend…😭😭😭)
I promise, I didn’t mean to make you cry!!! It’s just…well…this is how his redemption arc must end, I’m afraid.
BUT Y’ALL, HE’S HAPPY NOW!!! He got saved and redeemed before he left this earth!!!
💕🥲💕🥲💕
January 26, 2023 at 5:25 pm #130216@freedomwriter76 I know….
I just can’t stop crying thoooo 😭
man’s I haven’t cried over any of the other stuff….
I just….
but that means you did a good job making me love Dietrich. He has a special place in my heart and idk why.
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#ProtectSebJanuary 26, 2023 at 5:28 pm #130217Honestly…idk if I would’ve cried over anyone else’s death except maybe Reuben.
(I was afraid that was where u we’re going)
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#ProtectSebJanuary 26, 2023 at 5:28 pm #130218Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I made MYSELF finally love Dietrich!!! And I just…I didn’t want him to go…but it’s the way his arc ends…and, well…it also…
…sets Adolphus on the road to redemption. 💕💕💕
January 26, 2023 at 5:29 pm #130219@freedomwriter76
Why would I kill EZRA!?!?!? I’m not a MONSTER!!!
Oh thank you!! I don’t know why, I was just getting nervous, you know? 😂😂
But….wow…that scene is so heart wrenching! The only thing that makes it not hopeless is that Dietrich is going to heaven.
And that line at the end is priceless.
“It’s what brothers do.”
*sob*
*remembers it’s not real*
*wipes tears*
You’re an awesome writer girl!!
He must increase, but I must decrease.
January 26, 2023 at 5:31 pm #130220@freedomwriter76 *sucks in deep breath* I get it. It’s good 😊 and yesss Adolphus 😭
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#ProtectSebJanuary 26, 2023 at 5:31 pm #130221Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Yeah…I understand that.
Same as how I would have cried the most over probably Leo…
(But don’t you worry…I’m sure you’ll make me cry over your books…no, you WILL make me cry over your books…)
January 26, 2023 at 5:32 pm #130222@freedomwriter76 m yea I’ll try to make SURE of it MWAHAHA XD
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#ProtectSebJanuary 26, 2023 at 5:34 pm #130223Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Oh thank you!! I don’t know why, I was just getting nervous, you know? 😂😂
You’re very welcome!!! 😁 Ehhh…after everything I’ve done to my charries, who WOULD trust me!? 🤷🏻♀️😂
But….wow…that scene is so heart wrenching! The only thing that makes it not hopeless is that Dietrich is going to heaven.
And that line at the end is priceless.
“It’s what brothers do.”
*sob*
*remembers it’s not real*
*wipes tears*
AHHHHH!!!! YESSSS!!!! He says that line a few times, but when he says it as his final breath…😭💕
You’re an awesome writer girl!!
Awww, thank you!!! 💕💕💕💕
January 26, 2023 at 5:35 pm #130224Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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m yea I’ll try to make SURE of it MWAHAHA XD
JUST DON’T YOU DARE KILL ANY OF MY BABIES!!!!
DON’T YOU DARE KILL NOVEMBER OR PAXTON OR GRIMM…
or I will come after you.
XDXDXDXDXDXD
January 26, 2023 at 5:38 pm #130225@freedomwriter76 gurl I wouldn’t be able to live with myself! I’m still struggling with the on big death in ma series because I’m so conflicted over bringing u know who back (because I literally can’t imagine the thought that person not coming back. I’m being very vague for those who don’t know the spoiler)
but i don’t want the sacrifice to be cheapened….I want it to impact but im afraid if I bring them back it will be cheapened.
BUT I LEGIT CANNOT IMAGINE THEM BEING ACTUALLY DEAD….like for real.
some of that’s because I already have their future kids planned…. 🤦🏻♀️
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