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What are y’alls thoughts on this idea? I don’t have all the details figured out yet, but this is the basic idea.
Luke is an accountant for the King, but while going over the books, he finds some odd transactions. After discreetly investigating, he uncovers a counterfeit ring. Living out his childhood dream of being a spy, he goes undercover to shut down the counterfeit ring.
Princess Dorothy is set to marry a prince from another kingdom. Dorothy keeps quiet about her thoughts about the prince in an effort to be the perfect princess everyone expects of her. While she is on her daily walk in the palace gardens, she overhears something that will change her life forever.
@sunny421. I’m already intrigued! 😀 It sounds like a fantasy/mystery. Am I correct? 😉
Yes exactly. There may or may not be a little romance. I haven’t completely decided.
Ooo, intriguing. What sort of kingdom is this? Is the king good?
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I like it, especially what the phrase “living out his childhood dream of being a spy”. Luke sounds like a fun character!
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
@sunny241. Sounds awesome! 😀
Whoops. Tagged you wrong. *face-palms* @sunny421
@sunny421 Oooh, if it includes a medievalish fantasy theme with kings and queens, princes, and princesses… it’s an automatic thumbs up from me!! And this sounds like a great storyline! Since you have two main characters, are you going to have like a chapter from Luke’s perspective, then the next chapter from Princess Dorothy’s, and so on until their stories intersect?
I have no special talent. I am only passionately curious.