Star Wars fanfic in need of criticism :)

[Evelyn collins]

Hi everyone!! I am getting back into my star wars fanfic again and i have made quite a few changes/added!!

i am looking for critiques and constructive criticism an would be really grateful for y’all’s feedback!

here is the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/188Ici_ZU-Sev58_3fyOaQ2ZMv7WXDsOGtrN-SyfVAxY/edit

feel free to comment on it!!

idk all the Star Wars nerds on here, but if you are one, hello there! If you aren’t, fear not, you don’t have to know much about Star Wars to track with it!

@keilah h my faithful friend since the beginning of this doc, basically all I’ve done since you’ve looked is add stuff and turn comments on 🙂

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

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