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December 7, 2024 at 4:40 pm #191421
Alpha need a lot of perspective reorientation. Actually I have a close friend who once reacted to a puppy in a very similar way, haha π He even used the word scrawny.
Lol
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#AnduthForever (π)December 7, 2024 at 4:57 pm #191425I like it! A little Ender’s Game, a little something else. It’s giving dystopian. πββοΈ I’m usually not sure how to react when people explain backstories since it’s out of context, but it sounds like pretty solid trauma, especially for a whole group of protagonists.
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December 7, 2024 at 5:02 pm #191427Thanks!
Those books are very dark.
I mean, that was just Joe.
Then we get Jack who tried to rebel from the inside and had to watch his whole team, including his cousin, get shot.
And Jonathan and Micheal………
And Nathan……
yeah.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
December 7, 2024 at 5:13 pm #191430meanwhile I have a charrie who watched his family die, his home destroyed and his clan wiped out
another who never knew what it was to be a kid, who killed people from an early age
and another who was created in a lab with mental links to his brothers who were all killed, brothers he watched being created and even named…plus his father is the worst person in the Galaxy
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#AnduthForever (π)December 7, 2024 at 5:13 pm #191431I would prove that the Lovedream children have darker pasts, but it’s not worth spoiling the whole thing unfortunately. XD My apologies. You’ll just have to take my word for it.
"If I don't like something, it's probably sanctification. Ugh." -E.C.S.
December 7, 2024 at 5:15 pm #191433plus another who was kidnapped and experimented on and trained as a little child
which mentally messed him up enough that he acts like a little kid
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#AnduthForever (π)December 7, 2024 at 5:15 pm #191434@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @rae
How did the snowball fight topic turn into a horrible backstories competition? π€ͺ
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December 7, 2024 at 5:20 pm #191436I love Christmas, that’s just my favorite Christmas Carol quote, I use it all the time
I'm here but not here--I'm ghosting you all
December 7, 2024 at 5:21 pm #191437Honestly I don’t know XD I told someone I wasn’t going to post the words I wrote because they were too depressing, and it kind of escalated from there.
"If I don't like something, it's probably sanctification. Ugh." -E.C.S.
December 7, 2024 at 5:30 pm #191439Sounds like an interesting story. Reminds me of MK ultra stuff (pls no one research that if youβre sensitive)
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December 7, 2024 at 5:35 pm #191441Felicity probably has the worst backstory of my characters, but it comes no where near as bad as those. But Iβm happy with that
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December 7, 2024 at 5:35 pm #191442(pls no one research that if youβre sensitive)
I second this. Donβt.
If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.
#wewantourhatback
December 7, 2024 at 5:38 pm #191444But Iβm happy with that
And that’s exactly why some of my characters are just chill and happy. There’s nothing less deep about having an average backstory. I can think of some characters who are super shallow because the writer thought trauma equals character depth.
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December 7, 2024 at 5:41 pm #191446I second this. Donβt.
Yeah, actually, sorry I brought it up at all. Itβs super dark. I just find government conspiracies interesting. But I forget there are younger people on here sometimes so please just ignore that.
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