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March 3, 2021 at 11:43 am #94726
@devastate-lasting Yay!! Thank you so much as well <3
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
March 3, 2021 at 9:17 pm #94800Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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gurl, this was insane. i love this story and iΒ need to read more. and mr. silver-tights is, like, the best. and i love his name. sterling has long been one of my favorite names ever, and his character is fantastic, and tessa isΒ so funny, and yes i am not capitalizing anything, but that’s because i am so affected.
March 3, 2021 at 11:36 pm #94814@gracie-j Awwww thank youuu!!! You don’t know how much that means to me!! I really really appreciate that!!!! And same!! I love the name Sterling, and I figured I’d give it to him since he ruled mirrors XD I’m so happy that you liked it!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
March 4, 2021 at 6:23 am #94818Okay, girl, I just wanted to say that I totally WILL read all of these chapters soon!!!! I just haven’t had much time lately (school, you know), but I’ve been wanting to read these chapters FOR SO LONG. Anyway, just wanted to clarify that I WILL READ THEM because they sound AWESOME! π π π π
March 4, 2021 at 8:06 am #94820Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@daisy-torres It fits him SO well! You are so welcome! π
March 4, 2021 at 10:35 am #94823@writerlexi1216 Aww, thanks girl!!! Take your time though! I completely understand. School is rough XD
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
March 4, 2021 at 10:37 am #94824@gracie-j I thought so too! It’s funny though, because every time there’s a name I really like, I usually end up giving it to a character, so Idk what’s gonna happen whenever I’m married and need baby names XD
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
March 4, 2021 at 11:01 am #94827Of course!!! π π And thanks for understanding!!! Yeah, I’ve been overloaded with a whole bunch of tests recently, so, you know, studying ;-; But I’ll totally give you feedback when I read it π
March 4, 2021 at 5:58 pm #94926@writerlexi1216 Absolutely!! Yayy!! π
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
March 9, 2021 at 12:43 am #95122First off, I apologize for taking soooooooooooo long to read these chapters.
Second off, they are AMAZING!!! I was hooked all the way through and Tessa is so funny, she made me laugh so many times:) By the end of chapter five, I couldn’t believe that was it! It was just so good, I LOVED it! π Especially the scene where she finds out about her power:D Incredible work!
March 9, 2021 at 1:34 am #95123@abigail-m Heyy, no problem!! I am really happy that you did!!
Thank youuu!!! That makes me sooo happy to hear!!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
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